for Unfaithful2/18/2012 c10 
3jupiter2005
i have a feeling that things are about to get alot worse and hit the fan so to speak. update soon.
3jupiter2005i have a feeling that things are about to get alot worse and hit the fan so to speak. update soon.
1/29/2012 c10 IheartJW
Wow their brothers? Ha good one cause I didn't see it coming :)
Great chap more plse :)
Wow their brothers? Ha good one cause I didn't see it coming :)
Great chap more plse :)
1/26/2012 c10 tigger5600
Great story so far! I had a feeling after she saw the picture of Jasper and Carlisle and said they had similar features that Jasper and Rose were his kids... Can't wait to read the next one! :)
Great story so far! I had a feeling after she saw the picture of Jasper and Carlisle and said they had similar features that Jasper and Rose were his kids... Can't wait to read the next one! :)
1/23/2012 c10 4kirifox
My question is: was Alice seducing her own brother when she was chasing Jasper?
4kirifoxMy question is: was Alice seducing her own brother when she was chasing Jasper?
1/23/2012 c10 ConfederateWidow
She should just dump Edward for good now. Staying with him out of pity is only going to hurt everyone in the end; it's kind of heartless too. Either way, he's going to pin the blame on Jasper and act like a selfish, whiny asshole so she should just leave him now and move on with her life. He already knows they're done and she's moving on so why keep rubbing the salt in by drawing it out?
She should just dump Edward for good now. Staying with him out of pity is only going to hurt everyone in the end; it's kind of heartless too. Either way, he's going to pin the blame on Jasper and act like a selfish, whiny asshole so she should just leave him now and move on with her life. He already knows they're done and she's moving on so why keep rubbing the salt in by drawing it out?
12/31/2011 c9 NatalieLynn
It's got to be Alice or Emmett, and I can't imagine Emmett screeching like that. So it's probably the nut job. It wouldn't surprise me to find out she's the stalker too, but that might be a private investigator hired by Edward, her parents' killer, Jake or even a stranger. At any rate, it appears that Edward keeping his kidney problems a secret from her was the last straw for her and their relationship. It would be for me too. Great chapter!
It's got to be Alice or Emmett, and I can't imagine Emmett screeching like that. So it's probably the nut job. It wouldn't surprise me to find out she's the stalker too, but that might be a private investigator hired by Edward, her parents' killer, Jake or even a stranger. At any rate, it appears that Edward keeping his kidney problems a secret from her was the last straw for her and their relationship. It would be for me too. Great chapter!
12/31/2011 c8 NatalieLynn
Going home and giving herself time to decide what she really wants is an excellent idea, and having either or both of them around as she tries to come to a decision would make it nigh on to impossible to decide what will be best for her and bring her long term happiness. She does need to put herself first in this instance.
Going home and giving herself time to decide what she really wants is an excellent idea, and having either or both of them around as she tries to come to a decision would make it nigh on to impossible to decide what will be best for her and bring her long term happiness. She does need to put herself first in this instance.
12/31/2011 c7 NatalieLynn
That little bitch! What is her fixation with Jasper anyway? She's freaking crazy if she thinks she'll ever get Jasper to actually love her. She can't make him love her, especially not by blackmailing him. All she is doing is hurting him and Bella. I know hurting Bella is something she's enjoying mercilessly, but if she truly loved Jasper then hurting him would be more would be like hurting herself. The best thing that could happen would be for Edward to find out. As much as he loves Bella, he'd probably step aside gracefully just because it would bring Bella the happiness he has been unable to give her himself.
That little bitch! What is her fixation with Jasper anyway? She's freaking crazy if she thinks she'll ever get Jasper to actually love her. She can't make him love her, especially not by blackmailing him. All she is doing is hurting him and Bella. I know hurting Bella is something she's enjoying mercilessly, but if she truly loved Jasper then hurting him would be more would be like hurting herself. The best thing that could happen would be for Edward to find out. As much as he loves Bella, he'd probably step aside gracefully just because it would bring Bella the happiness he has been unable to give her himself.
12/31/2011 c9 NC-MjR-FanForLife
I almost died when he said he googled her :) this is one of the stories that just grabes your emotions and takes then for a ride :) I love it and can't wait fire the next chapter, I almost started crying until the part that she was told about his kidney failure, my dad has had kidney failure since he was 18, the story makes you feel like you can relate
I almost died when he said he googled her :) this is one of the stories that just grabes your emotions and takes then for a ride :) I love it and can't wait fire the next chapter, I almost started crying until the part that she was told about his kidney failure, my dad has had kidney failure since he was 18, the story makes you feel like you can relate
12/31/2011 c9 IheartJW
I'm glad Bella is going to leave him cause that meant he never trusted her.. Wonder who stalker her? James maybe it is Alice? That bitch lol..
Great chap can't wait for the next..
I'm glad Bella is going to leave him cause that meant he never trusted her.. Wonder who stalker her? James maybe it is Alice? That bitch lol..
Great chap can't wait for the next..
12/30/2011 c5 MaryMary123
I think Bella is right Edward does not love her he is using her. He is not attracted to her. He needs to dig Tanya up. Stick with the whore and be happy. Bella is gone.
I think Bella is right Edward does not love her he is using her. He is not attracted to her. He needs to dig Tanya up. Stick with the whore and be happy. Bella is gone.
12/30/2011 c9 soulsistersinaslan
Great chapter.
Maybe it is someone hired that is stalking Bella. Alice could be behind. I think that Edward was playing on Bella's forgiving nature to keep her close, knowing that when he did reveal the truth to her, she wouldn't leave him, despite her feelings for Jasper.
Please post more soon.
Great chapter.
Maybe it is someone hired that is stalking Bella. Alice could be behind. I think that Edward was playing on Bella's forgiving nature to keep her close, knowing that when he did reveal the truth to her, she wouldn't leave him, despite her feelings for Jasper.
Please post more soon.