for Stuck In The Moment9/21/2012 c12 tansysam
so happy you updated , that was sexy, more soon please, pretty please.
so happy you updated , that was sexy, more soon please, pretty please.
8/1/2012 c11 tansysam
so, so happy you updated. its about time these two got together. nicely written, a fan in ireland,
so, so happy you updated. its about time these two got together. nicely written, a fan in ireland,
4/13/2012 c1 notsing
I want to follow up my earlier review; first, I apologize if I sounded snarky, I didn't mean to be. However, I don't see Don going professionally after Colby for a personal matter. That would be a gross violation of his authority. A suspension is a serious black mark against an agent that stays on his file, so Don would not just be slapping Colby on the wrist. What Don could do though, is go to either Wright or Merrick, tell them Colby is dating his sister and that he (Don) is uncomfortable with it and ask that Colby be reassigned to another department. I could believe Don would do that. But it's your story, write whatever you like. I appreciate you posting.
I want to follow up my earlier review; first, I apologize if I sounded snarky, I didn't mean to be. However, I don't see Don going professionally after Colby for a personal matter. That would be a gross violation of his authority. A suspension is a serious black mark against an agent that stays on his file, so Don would not just be slapping Colby on the wrist. What Don could do though, is go to either Wright or Merrick, tell them Colby is dating his sister and that he (Don) is uncomfortable with it and ask that Colby be reassigned to another department. I could believe Don would do that. But it's your story, write whatever you like. I appreciate you posting.
4/12/2012 c10 tansysam
so happy you updated, is don not a bit out of character. ok, he can be protective but not a bully, also maybe a bit more romance, only my thoughts , am looking forward to next chapter,
so happy you updated, is don not a bit out of character. ok, he can be protective but not a bully, also maybe a bit more romance, only my thoughts , am looking forward to next chapter,
4/11/2012 c10 notsing
I haven't reviewed before, but I have been reading your story. It's not bad, kind of fun, but I do have a complaint. Don is just too out of character. I can see him getting nasty to anyone who he believes just wants to get into his sister's pants, but I can't see him getting snarky just because he's not getting any. Or at least, not to the extent that he uses his rank against Colby and suspends him. However, the rest of the story is good.
I haven't reviewed before, but I have been reading your story. It's not bad, kind of fun, but I do have a complaint. Don is just too out of character. I can see him getting nasty to anyone who he believes just wants to get into his sister's pants, but I can't see him getting snarky just because he's not getting any. Or at least, not to the extent that he uses his rank against Colby and suspends him. However, the rest of the story is good.
12/17/2011 c9 tansysam
love this story, so happy people are still writing for numb3rs, the only thing with this chapter is that they go to sleep, please tell me more happens in the next chapter, a fan in ireland,
love this story, so happy people are still writing for numb3rs, the only thing with this chapter is that they go to sleep, please tell me more happens in the next chapter, a fan in ireland,
12/15/2011 c8 ipohgirl
heyyy..no updates? eager to know what Anna will be saying?
Pls update soonn.. :)
heyyy..no updates? eager to know what Anna will be saying?
Pls update soonn.. :)
8/17/2011 c8 tansysam
aah that was a lovely cute date,i like this story, hope you can update soon, a fan in ireland,
aah that was a lovely cute date,i like this story, hope you can update soon, a fan in ireland,
2/3/2011 c5 Guest
ooh love this story, bet ,don wont be too happy when he finds colby stayed the night,look forward to next chapter
ooh love this story, bet ,don wont be too happy when he finds colby stayed the night,look forward to next chapter
12/19/2010 c4 tansysam
glad youre back, enjoying this story ,please update soon, keep up the good work
glad youre back, enjoying this story ,please update soon, keep up the good work
12/18/2010 c4 anaid
Thanks for the update! I like big brother Don. Waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks for the update! I like big brother Don. Waiting for the next chapter.
9/19/2010 c1 tansysam
love the story love an story with colby,please update soon cant wait to read more keep up the good work
love the story love an story with colby,please update soon cant wait to read more keep up the good work