for The Price of a Broken Heart10/3/2010 c7 
8Just4ALE
Action packed chapter! Kate was awesome as was Rose. William is trying to get to know him, he's been shot and needs surgery... and WHO IS IT?
Screw that mofo reviewer, girly. Go at your own pace!
8Just4ALEAction packed chapter! Kate was awesome as was Rose. William is trying to get to know him, he's been shot and needs surgery... and WHO IS IT?
Screw that mofo reviewer, girly. Go at your own pace!
10/3/2010 c7 10MinaRivera
Well, you know what I think about your story, I love a slow burn, and I think it was important to see Edward's life and his past through his memories. I loved the chapter but I really hope you stick with your pace, it is your story after all, we are just along for the ride...
SO! WHAT A CLIFFIE!
Man... that was amazing! I can't wait to see what happens!
Excellent job!
xoxo
Mina
10MinaRiveraWell, you know what I think about your story, I love a slow burn, and I think it was important to see Edward's life and his past through his memories. I loved the chapter but I really hope you stick with your pace, it is your story after all, we are just along for the ride...
SO! WHAT A CLIFFIE!
Man... that was amazing! I can't wait to see what happens!
Excellent job!
xoxo
Mina
10/3/2010 c7 majose
Yeah! She is finally here! I thought that it would happen next chapter after the gun shot. I am very curious about William, because he obviously knows who Edward is. I am looking forward to all the mysteries developing. Although knowing you, it will happen little by little.
Kate's words at the beginning seems to have been a real eye-opened for him. Great chapter!
Yeah! She is finally here! I thought that it would happen next chapter after the gun shot. I am very curious about William, because he obviously knows who Edward is. I am looking forward to all the mysteries developing. Although knowing you, it will happen little by little.
Kate's words at the beginning seems to have been a real eye-opened for him. Great chapter!
10/3/2010 c7 twifan725
I really love this story. I can see that you have already planted a bunch of mysteries and I can't wait for it all to develop. I hope you update soon.
I really love this story. I can see that you have already planted a bunch of mysteries and I can't wait for it all to develop. I hope you update soon.
10/3/2010 c7 35Welcome2MyWorldxoxo
sorry someone wasn't happy. Sometimes you have to take things slow and at the end of the day you have to remember that it is you who control the story and pardon my french that person can go fuck themselves if they aren't happy about it. Great chapter. I won't lie and say I wasn't waiting for this chapter :P
35Welcome2MyWorldxoxosorry someone wasn't happy. Sometimes you have to take things slow and at the end of the day you have to remember that it is you who control the story and pardon my french that person can go fuck themselves if they aren't happy about it. Great chapter. I won't lie and say I wasn't waiting for this chapter :P
10/3/2010 c7 rosellebec
LOVED it. I was going to say I think I have an idea what is going on right now. But I have a feeling I really don't:) SO, I will just wait patiently for another update!
LOVED it. I was going to say I think I have an idea what is going on right now. But I have a feeling I really don't:) SO, I will just wait patiently for another update!
10/3/2010 c7 Kikzzz
Amazing story , keep up the wonderful writing , oh i think Bella left because she was pregnant i hope i'm right , totally lovely story , i can't wait for the next chapter hope you update soon.
Amazing story , keep up the wonderful writing , oh i think Bella left because she was pregnant i hope i'm right , totally lovely story , i can't wait for the next chapter hope you update soon.
10/3/2010 c7 HMF
I'm so excited, they are finally meeting! Does William know that Edward is his father? I'm really curious now. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks.
I'm so excited, they are finally meeting! Does William know that Edward is his father? I'm really curious now. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks.
10/3/2010 c7 22one of eddie's girls
I'm sorry to hear that you sacrificed your plot for someone else. I enjoy the story as it is and really hope you don't make sacrifices again. This is getting good.
22one of eddie's girlsI'm sorry to hear that you sacrificed your plot for someone else. I enjoy the story as it is and really hope you don't make sacrifices again. This is getting good.
10/3/2010 c7 Bunch2009
I am certain now Will is his son. I wonder if Bella was framed by his father. She didn't take the money... Maybe she was threatened by Carlisle to leave Edward.. Excellent update. Love it. Thank you.
I am certain now Will is his son. I wonder if Bella was framed by his father. She didn't take the money... Maybe she was threatened by Carlisle to leave Edward.. Excellent update. Love it. Thank you.