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1WritingMadnesz
Do you think you could write a jeremyxjaime fic or Elenaxclay how they got together or even a love for tori? I really like your writing you put so much passion and time into it and you've literally made these characters your own. And I cant think of any one else at this point. they won't be able to compare to your own technique.
1WritingMadneszDo you think you could write a jeremyxjaime fic or Elenaxclay how they got together or even a love for tori? I really like your writing you put so much passion and time into it and you've literally made these characters your own. And I cant think of any one else at this point. they won't be able to compare to your own technique.
1/10 c10 Xmiinke
Love your writing! Hope for much much more!
Love your writing! Hope for much much more!
7/23/2012 c10 Ryan
That was an amazing story! I love your stories its like out a book! WRITE MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
Hehe I love exclamation points!
BTW: TORI!
That was an amazing story! I love your stories its like out a book! WRITE MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
Hehe I love exclamation points!
BTW: TORI!
7/1/2012 c10 1rainbowlollipops15
This story was amazing. fantastic. PERFECT. You really captured Chloe determination to protect her mate, but the shock and guilt of killing Liam, was PERFECTLY described, as in at a professional and published level. Great plot, great interaction between characters and this story painted the most vivid picture in my mind.
and I know you've already posted the next chapter, but if you are working on a third one, and i REALLy hope you are, I would LOVE to see Chloe and Derek, like in this one, but maybe an epilogue by Jeremy? kinda reflecting on how he sees their relationship. I guess it would depend on the picture though, maybe the weeding photo chapter.
1rainbowlollipops15This story was amazing. fantastic. PERFECT. You really captured Chloe determination to protect her mate, but the shock and guilt of killing Liam, was PERFECTLY described, as in at a professional and published level. Great plot, great interaction between characters and this story painted the most vivid picture in my mind.
and I know you've already posted the next chapter, but if you are working on a third one, and i REALLy hope you are, I would LOVE to see Chloe and Derek, like in this one, but maybe an epilogue by Jeremy? kinda reflecting on how he sees their relationship. I guess it would depend on the picture though, maybe the weeding photo chapter.
7/1/2012 c2 rainbowlollipops15
Your stories make me smile 3 And i LOVE Derek POV, but having an Otherworld character POV like Jeremy, Elena, Clay, Jaime etc would be AWESOME. and may i just say, always nice to find another Maximum Ride fan! ;)
Your stories make me smile 3 And i LOVE Derek POV, but having an Otherworld character POV like Jeremy, Elena, Clay, Jaime etc would be AWESOME. and may i just say, always nice to find another Maximum Ride fan! ;)
2/25/2012 c10 Crixtine
i've already read your darkest powers stories 2 or 3 times each...they are super...please continue to write this series of snapshots :)...pwetty please ...
i've already read your darkest powers stories 2 or 3 times each...they are super...please continue to write this series of snapshots :)...pwetty please ...
7/8/2011 c10 Bookworm6193
As always, you have captured the characters perfectly. My sister and I are reading this series that you wrote at the same time. Keep up the great work!
As always, you have captured the characters perfectly. My sister and I are reading this series that you wrote at the same time. Keep up the great work!
5/23/2011 c10 nnnnyyyyaaaa
wouldn't it be cool if there was a soul eater, darkestpowers crossover? you are a really good wrighter and could definately pull it off!
wouldn't it be cool if there was a soul eater, darkestpowers crossover? you are a really good wrighter and could definately pull it off!
5/6/2011 c10 supernaturalwannab
BECOME A WRITER PLEASE.YOU CAN WRUTE ALREADY NOW JUST GET IT PUBLISHED AND WE WILL ALL BE HAPPY, now im off to read more of your stories and adding yu as a fav author
BECOME A WRITER PLEASE.YOU CAN WRUTE ALREADY NOW JUST GET IT PUBLISHED AND WE WILL ALL BE HAPPY, now im off to read more of your stories and adding yu as a fav author
2/22/2011 c10 AnaMeow
Sorry, I was excited and sent of a review without...reviewing. This is great! Your writing is great and it was just amazing! I am having trouble explaining how good this was. Thanks for writing and please keep writing! ( And now I'm starting to act spazy...)
Sorry, I was excited and sent of a review without...reviewing. This is great! Your writing is great and it was just amazing! I am having trouble explaining how good this was. Thanks for writing and please keep writing! ( And now I'm starting to act spazy...)
2/22/2011 c10 Guest
Tori!
Tori!
1/26/2011 c10 5MortalInstrumentsObsessed
AWESOME. again. keep up the awesome work and please write more Darkest Powers fics! you are truly an amazing writer!
5MortalInstrumentsObsessedAWESOME. again. keep up the awesome work and please write more Darkest Powers fics! you are truly an amazing writer!
11/21/2010 c10 Meridian Capulet Souza
DEREK! Things are so much more interesting in his POV.
DEREK! Things are so much more interesting in his POV.