for Matching Tides4/6/2012 c1 Co1121
I liked this story are you going to continue it it's been so long :(
I liked this story are you going to continue it it's been so long :(
6/13/2011 c10 
1Sandanio
Hmm, interesting...by the way, both Fang and Lightning are the same age. 21, oh and Lightning has a bellybutton piercing :D.
1SandanioHmm, interesting...by the way, both Fang and Lightning are the same age. 21, oh and Lightning has a bellybutton piercing :D.
2/26/2011 c10 4tjemd
I walked in somewhat late to this story, but wanted to say that you're doing a great job with characterization and I've enjoyed what you've written to this point. I hope real life gets more even-keel for you. Keep up the good work!
4tjemdI walked in somewhat late to this story, but wanted to say that you're doing a great job with characterization and I've enjoyed what you've written to this point. I hope real life gets more even-keel for you. Keep up the good work!
1/7/2011 c10 14Tear of Light
I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue!
It's wonderful to see how you've intertwined the events from the game into your story itself. The characters are in character and our writing is very clear and concise. Not to mention your tale is very exciting.
The relationship between Fang and Light is not rushed or forced and is forming naturally. That's one of the best qualities of your piece. The natural progression of characters.
I really do hope you continue this piece. :)
14Tear of LightI'm really enjoying this story. Please continue!
It's wonderful to see how you've intertwined the events from the game into your story itself. The characters are in character and our writing is very clear and concise. Not to mention your tale is very exciting.
The relationship between Fang and Light is not rushed or forced and is forming naturally. That's one of the best qualities of your piece. The natural progression of characters.
I really do hope you continue this piece. :)
1/1/2011 c10 220Below
Hope you feel better soon mate, brilliant chapter as always, look forward to more. Thank you for sharing
220BelowHope you feel better soon mate, brilliant chapter as always, look forward to more. Thank you for sharing
12/16/2010 c10 Octave
damn love the ending lol 'their next charge would be their last' lol and light getting all worried and angry over fang nice...
Octave
damn love the ending lol 'their next charge would be their last' lol and light getting all worried and angry over fang nice...
Octave
12/15/2010 c10 1Sox765
Awesome chapter loved how angry light got about fang getting hurt. Hope you feel better. And take your time updating :)
1Sox765Awesome chapter loved how angry light got about fang getting hurt. Hope you feel better. And take your time updating :)
12/15/2010 c10 RatedRSuperStar87
the beginning part was a little confusing because the dialog was a little different. Thanks for the update and Update soon
the beginning part was a little confusing because the dialog was a little different. Thanks for the update and Update soon
12/15/2010 c10 62Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
Now, I'm sorry that had to happen to you, marine. But that's just another scar. Carry it with honor.
Oh yeah, and I SO wanna play the new "Need For Speed: Hot Pursuit"! =A= But I don't have any moneh moneh, yeah yeah. D:
But now, onto the chapter...
Whoa.
I knew it was too good to be true. Poor Light...
And then, a pretty epic battle scene, soldier! Very nice!
Even if Hope is somewhat useful here. LOL The little douche.
So, it was that old fart, eh? The basterd!
And Fang! NO! D: Damn you and your dramatic endings! ¬¬ She's gotta be Ok!
Nice work! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
62Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
Now, I'm sorry that had to happen to you, marine. But that's just another scar. Carry it with honor.
Oh yeah, and I SO wanna play the new "Need For Speed: Hot Pursuit"! =A= But I don't have any moneh moneh, yeah yeah. D:
But now, onto the chapter...
Whoa.
I knew it was too good to be true. Poor Light...
And then, a pretty epic battle scene, soldier! Very nice!
Even if Hope is somewhat useful here. LOL The little douche.
So, it was that old fart, eh? The basterd!
And Fang! NO! D: Damn you and your dramatic endings! ¬¬ She's gotta be Ok!
Nice work! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
12/15/2010 c10 1LycanShadow
Yay your back and updated :) Just wish RL wasn't such a ** to you back there. Hehe gotta love the old need4speeds :P
Anyway loved the chapter and how you described light/fang/hopes lil tag team. Had to end it like you did though hey? Curse your writters and your dramatic endings! :)
1LycanShadowYay your back and updated :) Just wish RL wasn't such a ** to you back there. Hehe gotta love the old need4speeds :P
Anyway loved the chapter and how you described light/fang/hopes lil tag team. Had to end it like you did though hey? Curse your writters and your dramatic endings! :)
11/27/2010 c9 RatedRSuperStar87
Cool story so far. I like how their relationship is progressing not to fast not to slow. Update soon. Can't wait for the Sequel.
Cool story so far. I like how their relationship is progressing not to fast not to slow. Update soon. Can't wait for the Sequel.
11/14/2010 c9 hubble36
:), nice work through out all 9 chapters! :D, heh keep it up because you're doing a great job! I can't wait to see how you'll end this.
:), nice work through out all 9 chapters! :D, heh keep it up because you're doing a great job! I can't wait to see how you'll end this.
11/11/2010 c9 Grace404
I think you have done a wonderful job of capturing the characters' personalities. It is extremely easy to picture. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
I think you have done a wonderful job of capturing the characters' personalities. It is extremely easy to picture. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
11/8/2010 c9 ALEXISSA2
Damn! They got interrupted just when they were about to get it on. LOL Ahh, glad to see they found Serah.
Looking forward to more updates and thanks.
Damn! They got interrupted just when they were about to get it on. LOL Ahh, glad to see they found Serah.
Looking forward to more updates and thanks.
11/3/2010 c9 62Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
Now, THIS was...*O*
Oh the FLaire FLUFF! Oh the FLUFF! *O*
And I just HAD to LOL at Snow's "wise" quote. LOL So he CAN be useful once in a while. LMAO
And of course, the FLaire WIN at the end...^O^
And Le Gasp! :O Serah? Now, I didn't see that one comin'! Nice!
N-I-CE work, marine! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
62Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
Now, THIS was...*O*
Oh the FLaire FLUFF! Oh the FLUFF! *O*
And I just HAD to LOL at Snow's "wise" quote. LOL So he CAN be useful once in a while. LMAO
And of course, the FLaire WIN at the end...^O^
And Le Gasp! :O Serah? Now, I didn't see that one comin'! Nice!
N-I-CE work, marine! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!