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1/18/2011 c38 Andriabow
I'm enjoying this story and I really like the fight scene. I'd

loved to read more.
11/11/2010 c38 Burns
Good chapter but I think it should be one of the earlier chapters
10/23/2010 c37 Garret
I remember how the common ori soldiers armor protected them against firearms in the SG-1 series. It dident help them att all from becoming swiss cheese so if Minos worry about that he can relax. Well after it have been tryed atleast.
9/19/2010 c13 ruth hammond
WOW, I'm not usually into fight scenes, but that was amazing...can't wait to see what is coming!
9/18/2010 c27 StargateWatcher
Hello Minimatt. Sorry I been away for a while; I'm temporarily w/o comp access, but hope that will change next week.

Great idea to have the races of the Milky Way galaxy unite against the Ori. So many advanced races who could use their potential to fight, I', doin something similar in my story tauri-furling First Cntact and Alliance in a much later chapter. I'll also be having the Optricans (who esp hate intolerant religious fanatics like the Ori), reforemd Bedrossians, Unas, Tollan, Spirits, and the Hebridians.

Great minds think alike, eh buddy?

I just read ur 4 recent chaps and continue to love the story.
9/16/2010 c30 Garret
So the Ori are on the move.

"Hallowed are the Ori!" More like "Hallowed are the retards".

Seems like some of them have seen throw the lies tho. Of was that simply a show put on in Minos dream to give him some false hope. Well we will find out i guess.

I wonder what Earths contribution to the war will be. Sure we can beat the Ori on the ground (as long as they dont bring in ther priors) but in space all we can offer is... Umm four sticks and a stone? Unless the Asgard helps uppgrade the few ships Earth has that is pretty mutch what we can add.
9/8/2010 c27 matthijs de jong
well done minimatt

so far so good

yet 25 chapters between 2 chapters that's a bit much

I really want to read more of this

so keep on writing
9/3/2010 c25 Garret
Hmm. Quite a bit of loot the SGC has now. But not mutch usefull tho. Aside from the weapons-grade naquadah a Ha'tak and the zats.

The jaffa chainmail armor is soooo dark age and the staffweapons is generaly useless since they can barly hit the broadside of a barn from the inside. The only reason they hit someone at times at more than 20 meters range is because of the amount of shoots fired and nothing else i suspect.As O´Neill said in the series: A weapon for imtimedation. Not for war.

A-noob-is is gona get ** for the raid tho. Too bad for him.
8/31/2010 c22 Garret
He. A meeting with by the book Woolsey and by the fun Minos can be an amusing bit to read about. Lets se how it turns out.

And is it just me or do someone else have the feeling too that Anubis is gona be robbed blind pretty soon.
8/29/2010 c20 10stargatewatcher
How did Minos's arm get injured?
8/29/2010 c19 stargatewatcher
I think Thor saying "I loved it" is out of character.

Otherwise, great chapter!
8/29/2010 c20 Garret
Nice fic with a good amount of humor in it. I liked how Minos dealt with Kinsey. Cant ever stand that pompus a**. Just one thing tho. Minos got a crossbow bolt in his arm. Ok but how did it happen? Did someone shoot at him or did he by som odd turn tryed out a crossbow and happend to point it the wrong way and thus shooting himself?
8/27/2010 c1 duked
I enjoy reading your fanfic.

It's something else and quite amusing.
8/26/2010 c1 stargatewatcher
Really curious to see what an Asgard celebration is like. We only see the Asgard at work, never at play.
8/26/2010 c17 stargatewatcher
love how Minos suggested dealing with the Nox's scolding

Minos really is different from the vast majority of the Ancients
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