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2/26 c1 22cookielover1441peace
Pretty good. You are a great author
9/16/2012 c1 GirlOfTheForestGreen
Great! I like it!
8/26/2012 c1 74ExceedinglyPeculiarChick
I think you're being too down on yourself. I've read multiple other Carter/Sadie bonding fics where they were horrendously OOC or just plain terrible. This is the best one I've seen in quite a while-good job!
2/2/2012 c1 18I'mDifferent-GetOverIt
Aww. That was a sweet brother/sister moment. :3 They were both IC, as far as I am concerned. :)

The cute one-sided Zarter moment was awesome too, but then again, I will fangirl over anything Zarter. xDDD

But it was still nice how Sadie comforted him. It's not something you see very often in her, but underneath it all, she really does care for Carter.

Great job! :) Keep writing!

~Different
11/30/2011 c1 The First Nome
Congratulations!

Your story, [ Cheese Crackers ], has been nominated for [ Best Character Portrayal - Sadie / Carter ] and [ Best Oneshot ] on the First Nome!

Thank you for writing this piece of brilliance. On behalf of the First Nome, I'd like to invite you to become a member. It isn't compulsory, but highly encouraged. Of course, you are also welcome to make any nominations at any time!

Thank you again!

[ the first nome. ]
10/2/2011 c1 not telling you my name
i liked this and i have a brother and we always fight but we help eachother too :)
7/30/2011 c1 10gpeach6
Very cute. :)
2/21/2011 c1 25Rose of Dark Life
I like it. This is awesome and unquie
2/1/2011 c1 Bast can haz cheezburger
i dont like to note the bad stuff but dont they have magic mini bars in their room that aoutomaticaly restock?
1/25/2011 c1 ILuvZarter
u call this awful! it's bloody amazing! this story is incredible and u got this from writer's block? if this is writer's block, i wanna see what stories u come up with without writer's block. CONTINUE WRITING AMAZING STORIES!
12/28/2010 c1 13NotYourBirthday
This is not awful this is the complete opposite of awful. This is fantastic! And one more thing:

"I'm sorry, stomach. I'll get you some food even if I have to feed you Carter."

"Hey! No you won't. I'm hungry too but you don't see me promising my stomach the meat and bones of my only sister."

Best line Ever.
11/5/2010 c1 9Silvertongue90
I think you captured their personality very well and this is good for having writer's block. I can just imagine Sadie claiming to be hungry but not hungry enough to eat stale cheetos, great job!
10/28/2010 c1 Yokoku21
Sweetest story ever! You got the characters so right!
9/15/2010 c1 delenastrench
haha, loved it! :)
8/15/2010 c1 enjoylife1994
If awful actually meant really awesome, then yes, that was terribly awful. Also known as, TOTALLY AWESOME. I absolutely enjoyed and loved reading it. It was very cute and it was not OOC, you portrayed them really well. I could just imagine it happening in front of me and aw, it was just really really good. Keep it up, seriously. This will yet again go to my favorites. I love your work. Keep rocking and don't doubt youserlf and your capabilities. You're doing great :) believe me :D
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