for Hart and Jones4/11 c13 Guest
Will this be finished anytime soon, or did you decide to discontinue the story? Thus far, I was enjoying it very much. It would be a shame to just stop here. Good work so far.
Will this be finished anytime soon, or did you decide to discontinue the story? Thus far, I was enjoying it very much. It would be a shame to just stop here. Good work so far.
4/4 c13 Guest
Will this story ever be finished, or did you discontinue writing? This was pretty good, so it's a shame you never finished it.
Will this story ever be finished, or did you discontinue writing? This was pretty good, so it's a shame you never finished it.
3/19 c13 Guest
Good so far. but would like to read more and see what happens to John, Ianto, "Carter"/Jack and Arys. Please update soon!
Good so far. but would like to read more and see what happens to John, Ianto, "Carter"/Jack and Arys. Please update soon!
12/5/2012 c13 
6Niwaki
how cute and I really can't wait for Jack to come strolling in and destroy Callis plan. please continue soon
6Niwakihow cute and I really can't wait for Jack to come strolling in and destroy Callis plan. please continue soon
10/31/2012 c13 TheBlueSlinky
This is great, i absolutely love this concept :) I hope you choose to update this at some point, because its got a really interesting storyline
This is great, i absolutely love this concept :) I hope you choose to update this at some point, because its got a really interesting storyline
6/20/2012 c12 8IloveRemusnSirius
Wat the hell im so friggin ** off is Jack ageing or something he jack married to someone im goin nut from confusion
8IloveRemusnSiriusWat the hell im so friggin ** off is Jack ageing or something he jack married to someone im goin nut from confusion
6/20/2012 c10 IloveRemusnSirius
Ianto is preggers i am sooooooo happy for him but the men who is ogling ianto makes me suspicous like ianto is being watched
Ianto is preggers i am sooooooo happy for him but the men who is ogling ianto makes me suspicous like ianto is being watched
1/29/2012 c13 Ducky
I'm not normally a big fan of JohnIanto but I'm loving this story! It's been a while but please don't abandon it-I need to know what happens!
I'm not normally a big fan of JohnIanto but I'm loving this story! It's been a while but please don't abandon it-I need to know what happens!
7/23/2011 c13 9Stormreaver01
The unfolding of this grand epic chapter by chapter proves without a doubt, that you are one of the best Torchwood fanfic writers ... ever! Well done and thank you for the amazing roller-coaster ride of emotional highs and lows, deep characterisations and enthralling drama, you have given us with this story. It just gets better and better. I shall be sorry when the inevitable happens and you wind this story up leading us all breathless to your climatic end!
9Stormreaver01The unfolding of this grand epic chapter by chapter proves without a doubt, that you are one of the best Torchwood fanfic writers ... ever! Well done and thank you for the amazing roller-coaster ride of emotional highs and lows, deep characterisations and enthralling drama, you have given us with this story. It just gets better and better. I shall be sorry when the inevitable happens and you wind this story up leading us all breathless to your climatic end!
7/21/2011 c13 4katwinchester
John may not have been able to shoot Evan in that chapter, but i was beating him up mentally for what he was trying to do to Ianto. I would say i hope he gets the hint and leaves them alone, but i don't think he's going to do that. Looking forward to the wedding and seeing if they spot Jack. Great work as always Kat :)
4katwinchesterJohn may not have been able to shoot Evan in that chapter, but i was beating him up mentally for what he was trying to do to Ianto. I would say i hope he gets the hint and leaves them alone, but i don't think he's going to do that. Looking forward to the wedding and seeing if they spot Jack. Great work as always Kat :)
7/20/2011 c13 5xtiansugar
I was wondering when they'd all cross paths again. Will Ianto recognise him I wonder? Can't wait to see how the wedding goes. Bit concerned that John said he's only going through with it to keep Ianto happy, but then it's clear he really loves him. Great chapter.
5xtiansugarI was wondering when they'd all cross paths again. Will Ianto recognise him I wonder? Can't wait to see how the wedding goes. Bit concerned that John said he's only going through with it to keep Ianto happy, but then it's clear he really loves him. Great chapter.
6/29/2011 c12 4katwinchester
Great chapter, i like that John is onto his brother and that he's smart enough to realise that Evan isn't working alone. I just hope he can stop Callis. I wouldn't want to make John mad! Kat :)
4katwinchesterGreat chapter, i like that John is onto his brother and that he's smart enough to realise that Evan isn't working alone. I just hope he can stop Callis. I wouldn't want to make John mad! Kat :)