for Rulers of the Skies6/12/2011 c4 Guest
good story, but everything is happening too fast and some of the deductions the charactrs make dont make realistic sense. come on, someone who just dimension jumped is gonna take a while to accept his suroundings. apat from the unrealistic character actions, good story
good story, but everything is happening too fast and some of the deductions the charactrs make dont make realistic sense. come on, someone who just dimension jumped is gonna take a while to accept his suroundings. apat from the unrealistic character actions, good story
6/4/2011 c25 
18Hideout Writer
Well, that's a real shitstorm. Wish I could be there with my 304, I'd carve Kialandi up nice and tight with my Asgard Plasma beam weapons.
18Hideout WriterWell, that's a real shitstorm. Wish I could be there with my 304, I'd carve Kialandi up nice and tight with my Asgard Plasma beam weapons.
3/5/2011 c24 Mr CM Pepsi
Hey, I have just read through the whole thing, one sitting. I am realy enjoying the combination of Maximum Ride style characters and characters for Eragon's universe. My favourite character by far, is Aragon closely followed by Thelduin (loved when she set Murtagh and Thorn free from the King). If the next chapter were to come out soon... I can't describe how happy I would be. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Hey, I have just read through the whole thing, one sitting. I am realy enjoying the combination of Maximum Ride style characters and characters for Eragon's universe. My favourite character by far, is Aragon closely followed by Thelduin (loved when she set Murtagh and Thorn free from the King). If the next chapter were to come out soon... I can't describe how happy I would be. Anyway, keep up the good work!
1/20/2011 c24 Hideout Writer
That was one frikkin HELL of a good battle. Remind me to not fight Aragon, especially when he taps into the winds and other magic forms. You should have let Arcturor melta the gate, though. That would've been much more fun.
That was one frikkin HELL of a good battle. Remind me to not fight Aragon, especially when he taps into the winds and other magic forms. You should have let Arcturor melta the gate, though. That would've been much more fun.
1/5/2011 c23 Hideout Writer
Let me guess, I'm NOT supposed to tell Torque or anybody else among the good guys that you dredged up all the Ra'zac that ever lived to fight against them. My solution to the problem: Get all the good guys out of there. Take 18 squadrons of 17's (cause they're slow) and drop ** on the baddies. I'm guessing that's not happening?
Let me guess, I'm NOT supposed to tell Torque or anybody else among the good guys that you dredged up all the Ra'zac that ever lived to fight against them. My solution to the problem: Get all the good guys out of there. Take 18 squadrons of 17's (cause they're slow) and drop ** on the baddies. I'm guessing that's not happening?
12/11/2010 c22 Hideout Writer
The city you refer to is not Feinstar, but Fienster. I looked it up on the map included in the front of the book when I was writing chapter 8 of my own story. Otherwise, it looked good. I'm glad to see that Murtagh and Thorn are free of the dark king.
The city you refer to is not Feinstar, but Fienster. I looked it up on the map included in the front of the book when I was writing chapter 8 of my own story. Otherwise, it looked good. I'm glad to see that Murtagh and Thorn are free of the dark king.
12/4/2010 c21 Hideout Writer
I very much hope I'm not the only one reviewing this masterpiece. Is 'Chaos' an OC of sorts, or did you pull it from warhammer40k? What are the alien pistols? I'm almost morally sure that they are not really pistols, but weapons of a slightly different nature. What is the not-metal substance that their weapons are comprised of, and why the heck would you wear a breastplate that couldn't stop anything? Was the dude with the wand pulled from the Harry Potter universe?
I very much hope I'm not the only one reviewing this masterpiece. Is 'Chaos' an OC of sorts, or did you pull it from warhammer40k? What are the alien pistols? I'm almost morally sure that they are not really pistols, but weapons of a slightly different nature. What is the not-metal substance that their weapons are comprised of, and why the heck would you wear a breastplate that couldn't stop anything? Was the dude with the wand pulled from the Harry Potter universe?
11/26/2010 c20 Hideout Writer
Wow, good chapter. It's been a while since I've updated my IC crossover, I might have to do that. I find it interesting that people are able to avoid their oaths just by putting a piece of cloth over their heads. Anywho, good chapter, I like the fact that its FINALLY going somewhere, action next?
Wow, good chapter. It's been a while since I've updated my IC crossover, I might have to do that. I find it interesting that people are able to avoid their oaths just by putting a piece of cloth over their heads. Anywho, good chapter, I like the fact that its FINALLY going somewhere, action next?
11/25/2010 c19 2dragonrider101
wow, and whoa. his is a spectacular story. I haven't noticed any spelling corrections needed. Please continue
2dragonrider101wow, and whoa. his is a spectacular story. I haven't noticed any spelling corrections needed. Please continue
11/13/2010 c19 18Hideout Writer
YES! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! Finall, I get to see what's been happening. I can't tell you how happy I am to read this. Now for the question. What's the meeting about?
18Hideout WriterYES! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! Finall, I get to see what's been happening. I can't tell you how happy I am to read this. Now for the question. What's the meeting about?
10/8/2010 c18 Hideout Writer
YOU LISTEN TO DRAGONFORCE? I love that group! I am up with your story at this point; it's been a while since I last checked in, and the e-mail alert thingie is kinda screwed. Anyway, I like the Grey Rider and his dragon, and someone should inform Thelduin that Dragonforce is not **. I noticed that the too/to issue is still cropping up...and I noticed that you are quite frequently using Aussie language, giving away your location. It could be that it does not apply what with regional effects and all, but still. Anywho, I need more story to review, I'll check in next Friday, and see what's up. 'Til then, I'm going to hitch a ride on VOYAGER, and hope that I can find a Daedalus-class headed for the Pegasus Galaxy. Adeeos.
YOU LISTEN TO DRAGONFORCE? I love that group! I am up with your story at this point; it's been a while since I last checked in, and the e-mail alert thingie is kinda screwed. Anyway, I like the Grey Rider and his dragon, and someone should inform Thelduin that Dragonforce is not **. I noticed that the too/to issue is still cropping up...and I noticed that you are quite frequently using Aussie language, giving away your location. It could be that it does not apply what with regional effects and all, but still. Anywho, I need more story to review, I'll check in next Friday, and see what's up. 'Til then, I'm going to hitch a ride on VOYAGER, and hope that I can find a Daedalus-class headed for the Pegasus Galaxy. Adeeos.