Reviews: The Orphaned Jinchuriki

11/20/2012 c14

11/5/2012 c15

4ultima-owner
His sword and the fact that he's blue and is shark like

11/5/2012 c15 fictionisthebest754
great side story
it was pretty interesting
ya know i really admire the way you make tobi he is so funny :P
it is funny how kisamai fell for that prank
keep up the good work

11/4/2012 c1 fictioncreator7898
great chapter! but i can write better!

10/26/2012 c14 fictionisthebest754
hi remember me
i luv the chapter
it wasnt that short i like that
and my most favorite kh character is axel
how about you
(if you want you con pm me)

10/21/2012 c14 ultima-owner
I'd perfer to be taken to the hideout someone cooler...like Tobi or Kisame

10/14/2012 c13 fictionisthebest754
you have to update soon
i luv this story
please update at least by the end of the month
btw i luv how you make axel and roxas act
please update soon

10/13/2012 c13 ultima-owner
Vexen is a teme...now an undead teme

1/30/2012 c12

3SonicHearts123
I'm with sakura. GET HER!

1/24/2012 c12

4Andonexus KotD
The chapter was 'mostly' awesome. buy why did you have Kabuto do it early? WHY!

1/23/2012 c12 1111010101010101010delete10100
holy sh*t an update! lol looking forward to your next

4/15/2011 c11

3SonicHearts123
Really good story

3/13/2011 c11 1111010101010101010delete10100
agh! damn side story!

please update again soon and nota side story please i beg you!

2/17/2011 c10 1111010101010101010delete10100
pokemon realy...

this was a good chapter but seriously please dont put any more pokemon in this!

i wont be able to take it seriously...anyway looking forward to your next chapter! xD

1/17/2011 c9

6anabel the lady shark
Wow Xion vs Hidan. This should be fun.

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