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9/14/2012 c12 4aquafina rain
ad;lkbksjafjsfd oh my gosh i absolutely love ami knocking duo out and tying him up! hahahaha i feel like everyone always characterizes her as this meek lil' gal but i'm glad you figured out that she can do some damage as well. duo (and his shameless charisma) are perfect for her kidnapping antics lol.

the complication with michiru and setsuna and hotaru was well played out (my heart cries for haruka ;; boo why!). and! my heart also wiggles at hotaru and quatre although it seems unlikely haha but hey, a girl can hope, right?

anyway i'm excited for what happens next :)
9/13/2012 c12 12TopazDragon
Dear, you have no idea how excited I was to pop on and see this beaut updated. Can you get anymore amazing?

This chapter was steeped in drama, mystery and angst that I wanted to hug everyone but Elios...Elios, I sort of wanted to dip him in hot grease and set him on fire. Sadly, I think I'll have to wait to see this attack he has in place.

I wonder who called Ami and what her major plans for Duo are. Plus, I definitely would love to see the man who questioned Milli again and see what his angle is. I could only think he worked with Elios, but somehow I wasn't to sure of that.

Can't wait for more! I do try. I always have something to say. I'll try and get on them fast, just hardly finding time to hop on, but I'm working on it. ;D

Keep up the awesome work, hun!
9/1/2012 c12 6suisei no mitsukai
I'm still so amused at Ami and Duo's situation. It's extremely entertaining to see her pull off a kidnapping and use her intelligence to keep it hidden in such an open way. I can't wait to see where this goes from here. I'm also curious to see what develops with Rei. I also still have my fingers crossed that Elios is bluffing and Haruka isn't really dead. Keep up the good work.
8/31/2012 c12 7Makoto A Yakushi
Well well, seems that someone else came back to writing, perhaps I should haha. Its been a while since I sat down and read a decent story. I simply enjoyed it. I simply cannot wait for more. I demand it now! _
8/31/2012 c12 Guest
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Oh Mylanta...this is getting good! I can't believe Elios is doing this to the senshi, and to specifically Usagi and Mamoru. Wahh...Poor Haruka, she's my second favorite senshi next to Usagi...*sniff* now she's gone! I hope a new chapter comes out soon! Till then!

On a side note...it would be nice to know all the senshi's past and who the heck Serenity's father is from this new "Sailor Moon" anime. Hopefully they will still feature the original senshi and actually have Saturn do a transformation in this new one!
8/30/2012 c12 9twilightrocks100
Great job like and hope to see more again just can't wait as a matter of fact

thanks for the job well done
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7/13/2012 c11 twilightrocks100
Great job can't wait for more. I do love it through so yeah!
6/7/2012 c11 Sunshine Fia
What? OMG...you have to finish this story. Mind you I'm not a fan of Mamoru and Usagi but I do like this story.
5/12/2012 c11 7Oombala
Long story short, you made me like makoxwufei, a pairing I never thought I could properly appreciate. This story is great! It's interesting and I love it so far! :) I'm so excited for the next update! Keep writing as well as you do, because I can't properly express to you how happy it makes me!
5/12/2012 c11 10Nerf-or-Nothing
You've inspired me to do a new story, I love Archeology so much, so thank you for the incredable inspiration with your story c:

I can't get over how well you write, and your reviews always make me so incredably happy c: you have a way with words c:

Have you seen Avatar: The Last Airbender and Avatar :The Legend of Korra?

I love the name Tenzin even more now c: teehee!

You have an incredable way with characters too c: you give them way more justice then I do lol, it's hard for me to branch into their lives without the canon and give them more so I have to start out at the beginning :C I envy your story making abilities, I hope to be able to do this someday... and I will! I just have to keep writing to improve, and reading these wonderful stories!

I love epic stories, and this has that incredable quality c:

I'm glad I checked the other section and even happier with your bringing it here c: NO HIDING STORIES! LOL we need them here!

Thanks again so much, update soon!
5/9/2012 c11 14AquaTonic
I was so happy when my inbox notified me of your chapter update! I can't wait to see how the story continues to unfold and couldn't help but 'squee' at the Wufei/Mako part :D
5/9/2012 c11 12TopazDragon
Well, I have the new chapter out. XD A bit late, but there. I think you might enjoy some parts of it.

And once again I am boggled! Setsuna has brought a new wave of questions and emotions about what might be playing in the background. Plus, I love how you have Rei questioning the possible relationship between Earth and the Silver Alliance in the past. Especially since Earth was never in the Alliance.

Like you, I do enjoy Ami and Duo as well. It seems like such a fun pairing, like Wufei and Ami. ;)

I had never liked the idea of Trowa and Quatre together...though that seems popular. They can be a bit boring if, as you siad, they are not put in contrast with others.

I do look forward to what you do end up playing you. The story always ends up writing itself in my opinion. XD Or thats how it ends up in my fics.

Not to mention I loved that scene between Makoto and Wufei. It was so cute. I love them as a pairing as well, since they can be alike and yet so opposite. But I wonder what he will think if he ever finds out that Makoto is much like Rei. Especially with his thoughts on Rei and the 'danger' she possesses.

Minako isn't able to be found? O.o Oooh, and because of her questions from before that does paint a somewhat worryign picture. Not to mention the fact that dear old Sets can't seem to find her...and she pretty much knows all.

Well, I did it again. XD Another long review and I'm glad you don't mind since I seem to get carried away.

I look forward to what you can give us eager readers and look forward to continuation of your wonderful stories.

Keep up the awesome writing!
5/8/2012 c11 15Realms of Destiny
Wow your writing is amazing! And the plit is so intense. I'm jealous!

Poor Rei, she's in sticky situation...

Love the hint of pairings here. Cant wait for more! Have to get back to study now@:-(
5/8/2012 c11 Espresso Seraph
I love how complex this seems to be getting and how well the characterization is done. Everything's wonderful, but maybe shorten some of your paragraphs and just have more of them? A block of text is usually more difficult to read is all.
5/7/2012 c11 12SuperNova23
This is really, really amazing! I like how you wrote Haruka (May she rest in peace) And Rei was done well. While Jupiter would not be my first choice for Wufei, you really made it work. Setsuna seemed a little (or a lot) condescending in this one to Rei. I don't remember her ever being like that.

Fun fact: When my friend and I used to do GW/SM crossovers, we would always pair Duo and Ami, as well as Rei and Quatre. However, I liked Wufei/Minako just because I think it provides the most contrast.
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