for Before the Storm7/12/2011 c1 
235Dance Elle Dance
I loved this! I think you've done a great job with this. Keep up the awesome work!
235Dance Elle DanceI loved this! I think you've done a great job with this. Keep up the awesome work!
6/26/2011 c1 21niagaraweasel
Well, I guess since this story is already almost a year old, there is little chance of more of it. Which is too bad, since it's a VERY intriguing beginning, and I for one would really like to see where this is going.
21niagaraweaselWell, I guess since this story is already almost a year old, there is little chance of more of it. Which is too bad, since it's a VERY intriguing beginning, and I for one would really like to see where this is going.
10/31/2010 c1 74JJ Rust
Very good. Excellent job on the dialogue and conveying all the emotions they are feeling.
One typo I caught: "I'll the keyfile to you" I think should be "I'll give the keyfile to you"
This is definitely a story that needs continuing. I hope you write more on this.
74JJ RustVery good. Excellent job on the dialogue and conveying all the emotions they are feeling.
One typo I caught: "I'll the keyfile to you" I think should be "I'll give the keyfile to you"
This is definitely a story that needs continuing. I hope you write more on this.
9/2/2010 c1 34My Beautiful Ending
YESSSSSS WOOT two of my favorite shows together? aweosmeness! and I could totally see this happening. So is Chance the same as John Scott? cuz that could explain the animosity in Peter...LOL he knows Guerrero. perfect.
34My Beautiful EndingYESSSSSS WOOT two of my favorite shows together? aweosmeness! and I could totally see this happening. So is Chance the same as John Scott? cuz that could explain the animosity in Peter...LOL he knows Guerrero. perfect.