for Beyond The Veil5/19/2012 c11 Michi uk
Loved this story,i do like some angst, as long as the ending is as i wanted, am happy to say it was,and after there both narrow misses with death, they ended up as a couple Thanks!
Loved this story,i do like some angst, as long as the ending is as i wanted, am happy to say it was,and after there both narrow misses with death, they ended up as a couple Thanks!
9/18/2010 c11 
15jjbird
Ah, a very satisfying J/S ending and a great little case file to boot. Nicely crafted, thank you laoisbabe.
15jjbirdAh, a very satisfying J/S ending and a great little case file to boot. Nicely crafted, thank you laoisbabe.
9/17/2010 c11 lia marou
I'd love to watch this end on TV!How sweet Jack can be in your hands Laoisbabe!Thank you for the joy you gave us!
I'd love to watch this end on TV!How sweet Jack can be in your hands Laoisbabe!Thank you for the joy you gave us!
9/17/2010 c11 DianeM37
Great story, laoisbabe, very well written. Each chapter kept me excited and anxious to get the next update in my mail. Hope your muse thinks up another WAT story soon.
Great story, laoisbabe, very well written. Each chapter kept me excited and anxious to get the next update in my mail. Hope your muse thinks up another WAT story soon.
9/17/2010 c11 19Littleguinea
Awww, now wasn't that just lovely, and exactly how it should be with them. Thanks for another great story.
19LittleguineaAwww, now wasn't that just lovely, and exactly how it should be with them. Thanks for another great story.
9/16/2010 c11 hotchner
WOW Laoisbabe, That was a MARVELOUS Ending. I'm glad that Jack and Sam are getting married. I hope that the Girls will except Sam as there stepmom. Can't wait for the next story.
Keep up the MARVELOUS Writing. THANK YOU! ! !
WOW Laoisbabe, That was a MARVELOUS Ending. I'm glad that Jack and Sam are getting married. I hope that the Girls will except Sam as there stepmom. Can't wait for the next story.
Keep up the MARVELOUS Writing. THANK YOU! ! !
9/16/2010 c11 15Withoutatracelover996
Aw I'm so sad it's over! Well it was brilliantly done and very nicely wrapped up. Thanks!
15Withoutatracelover996Aw I'm so sad it's over! Well it was brilliantly done and very nicely wrapped up. Thanks!
9/16/2010 c11 Kimberleah
Together like they are after each story in my head Laoisbabe. Thank you for this story and each and everyone of your others!
Together like they are after each story in my head Laoisbabe. Thank you for this story and each and everyone of your others!
9/15/2010 c10 19Littleguinea
Well I've been really busy this week but I had to find time to review your story. I have to say, you had me going at the end of Chapter 9, but then I should have know that you wouldn't do anything as drastic as bumping off one of the key characters! I've really enjoyed this story all the way through and I'm sure you won't disappoint with chapter 11. Definitely the best J/S story I've read for a long while, thanks :)
19LittleguineaWell I've been really busy this week but I had to find time to review your story. I have to say, you had me going at the end of Chapter 9, but then I should have know that you wouldn't do anything as drastic as bumping off one of the key characters! I've really enjoyed this story all the way through and I'm sure you won't disappoint with chapter 11. Definitely the best J/S story I've read for a long while, thanks :)
9/13/2010 c10 Jacks in my head
Another great chapter. I hope Samantha will be ok. At least she knows Jack is still alive.
Another great chapter. I hope Samantha will be ok. At least she knows Jack is still alive.
9/13/2010 c10 hotchner
WOW Laoisbabe, That was another VERY HOT Chapter. I'm glad that Sam is going to make it. I hope that Jack tell's her just
how he feels about her. I'm also glad that the kids are going to be alright. Hopefully Jack will make it through the last Chapter alive. Can't wait to find out how this is going to end. Keep up the MOST AWESOME Writing. Can't wait for you to
start another Story on either Jack or Jethro. I love your
stories that you write for both fandoms. THANK YOU! ! !
WOW Laoisbabe, That was another VERY HOT Chapter. I'm glad that Sam is going to make it. I hope that Jack tell's her just
how he feels about her. I'm also glad that the kids are going to be alright. Hopefully Jack will make it through the last Chapter alive. Can't wait to find out how this is going to end. Keep up the MOST AWESOME Writing. Can't wait for you to
start another Story on either Jack or Jethro. I love your
stories that you write for both fandoms. THANK YOU! ! !
9/13/2010 c10 Kimberleah
Wow that was lovely. You can almost feel Jacks love for Sam jump off the page Laoisbabe. Why couldn't the people at CBS have the same love for the characters and their fans? Thanks Friend
Wow that was lovely. You can almost feel Jacks love for Sam jump off the page Laoisbabe. Why couldn't the people at CBS have the same love for the characters and their fans? Thanks Friend
9/12/2010 c9 6Snowbeardolphin
I like how you wrote chapters 6 through nine. Can't wait to read the next chapter that is posted.
Jen
6SnowbeardolphinI like how you wrote chapters 6 through nine. Can't wait to read the next chapter that is posted.
Jen