for Losing You9/10/2011 c2 
3Sunshine-aki
are these 2 different stories? im really confused, first its demyx, then its zexy... confusion...
3Sunshine-akiare these 2 different stories? im really confused, first its demyx, then its zexy... confusion...
11/1/2010 c2 19Gail LLD
Okay. So right now, I'm crying my heart out. This is freaking amazing. The way you wrote the emotions, i mean.
I'm totally fan of your story, really. This is sad like hell, but, jeez, as i already said it, it's beautiful.
Thank you so much !
19Gail LLDOkay. So right now, I'm crying my heart out. This is freaking amazing. The way you wrote the emotions, i mean.
I'm totally fan of your story, really. This is sad like hell, but, jeez, as i already said it, it's beautiful.
Thank you so much !
11/1/2010 c1 Gail LLD
Oh come ooooon ! That's just soooo fuckin' beautiful ! Hell, you're making me cry !
Aw... Your story's so sad but so perfect...
Oh come ooooon ! That's just soooo fuckin' beautiful ! Hell, you're making me cry !
Aw... Your story's so sad but so perfect...
9/11/2010 c1 11Th3y3ll0wd4rt
I normally don't like these kind of stories (By which I mean Yaoi's) But then you come across a story like this that makes you sad, and it totally changes your perspective.
My friend writes yaoi's for naruto and whenever i try to read them...well it wasn't pretty.
This story is much different though, I guess that emotional stuff gets to me.
But what can I say; Hard crust, soft center
-Yellowdart out
11Th3y3ll0wd4rtI normally don't like these kind of stories (By which I mean Yaoi's) But then you come across a story like this that makes you sad, and it totally changes your perspective.
My friend writes yaoi's for naruto and whenever i try to read them...well it wasn't pretty.
This story is much different though, I guess that emotional stuff gets to me.
But what can I say; Hard crust, soft center
-Yellowdart out
9/10/2010 c1 Rima
Hey Ninja!
Ich hoffe ich muss das jetz nicht auf englisch schreiben xD
aach nö ! ^^
Also wie gesagt du hast echt Talent beim Schreiben von Geschichten und dann vorallem noch in englisch! Das kann wirklich nicht jeder :)
Respekt! ;D
Liebe Grüße deine Rima!
Hey Ninja!
Ich hoffe ich muss das jetz nicht auf englisch schreiben xD
aach nö ! ^^
Also wie gesagt du hast echt Talent beim Schreiben von Geschichten und dann vorallem noch in englisch! Das kann wirklich nicht jeder :)
Respekt! ;D
Liebe Grüße deine Rima!
8/29/2010 c2 9mochiusagi
*sobs* that was really sad! *sniff sniff* It was sad, but somewhat sweet since it was from both perspectives.
9mochiusagi*sobs* that was really sad! *sniff sniff* It was sad, but somewhat sweet since it was from both perspectives.
8/27/2010 c2 11luckless-is-me
That was so sad! Really. The first chapter really brought out the emotions and then reading the second chapter right after it made me want to cry! Please tell me you weren't lying when you said the sad part was over! *begs*
Anyway, I think I'm falling in love with the style you're using in this. It's a bit different and for some reason, it really pulls me into the story. It makes me feel like I'm really part of the story, you know?
I'm wondering, though, in the first chapter, Zexion is the one that was alive, correct? Then, in the second chapter, Demyx is the one that died, right? I'm just wondering how that makes sense or if you were going to wait and explain that later?
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading more of this and I'm extremely happy with how you have the story set up so far, even though I wish the chapters were jsut a little longer. ^^
11luckless-is-meThat was so sad! Really. The first chapter really brought out the emotions and then reading the second chapter right after it made me want to cry! Please tell me you weren't lying when you said the sad part was over! *begs*
Anyway, I think I'm falling in love with the style you're using in this. It's a bit different and for some reason, it really pulls me into the story. It makes me feel like I'm really part of the story, you know?
I'm wondering, though, in the first chapter, Zexion is the one that was alive, correct? Then, in the second chapter, Demyx is the one that died, right? I'm just wondering how that makes sense or if you were going to wait and explain that later?
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading more of this and I'm extremely happy with how you have the story set up so far, even though I wish the chapters were jsut a little longer. ^^
8/22/2010 c1 9mochiusagi
Awww that was really sad. I wasn't sure if demyx was really there or not till the end.
9mochiusagiAwww that was really sad. I wasn't sure if demyx was really there or not till the end.