8/8/2011 c1 luminous-euphoria
Hi! That was really good :) I think your a talented writer. Would you like to join my RPG? U get to live the life of your favourite characters! Please look at my new site and maybe even join? Thank you!

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7/30/2011 c3 22AlarataraWitchIce
AAAWWWWWW! SO SWEET! I knew Julian was a softie!

3/7/2011 c2 2KatieGallagherDare
Omg u must update I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! I wonder if they'll end up getting married and then telling all of jennys old friends about it just to show that she was never crazy lol ur a very talented writer and I look forward to reading more of ur stories hopefully soon id write a longer review but I've gotta finish some other things up. But it makes me sad to stop reading this story its truely amazing! Thanks for writing such a great story and I can't wat till u writemore! Till then

goodluck and have fun

Thanks againi really do truely Love this story

Can't wait for more

-Cat :)

10/4/2010 c2 70madasmonty
This is brilliant! I wasn't pleased with the ending of Forbidden Games either (for the first time I actually cried at a book) so I was immediately on here looking up alterate endings. This is the best one so far. Please update soon!

9/1/2010 c2 55Lostliveson4eva
Julians the best. I was not satisfied with the ending of the FB series. I like this though, I'm glad he's back!

8/28/2010 c1 4craizypet
hmmm... I completely agreee with you, the ending was a let down. but no offense, but i dont like your one heaps either. i mean, sure i do kinda like the fact that jenny and julian got together...

meh, just me i guess. i dont like the thought of friends doing that... and the main character not rubbing her newfound happiness in their faces... lol! dont take my review personally, just personal preference in my case i guess.

the writing is really good however, a couple of minor errors, but still, good use of language. not boring either, which is good, lol!

good job, keep up the writing!