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8/28/2010 c1 12toonwriter
Well now, Pein's going to school. I give that school a good 10 days until Pein might blow it up (unless Sora says not to).

I love this story, I hope you do more
8/27/2010 c1 21madjack89
Trouble follows the Akatsuki like a freakin magnet, doesn't it? It's probably the cloaks. Wow, when you first mentioned Belphemon, I actually thought "Where's Kurata?" Then I thought "Who cares?" (lol) Oh, what Pein will do for love. Surviving the adolescent nightmare called high school. All I can say is good luck with that, buddy! (Pein: It shouldn't be as bad as you say. And you're stealing Takuya's phrases again.) I can't help it! Buddy is just something I tend to say! (Takuya: I'm still mad about the freakin Kisame and Ranamon *grumble grumble*) (Kira: *sigh* Oh my dear, jealous little Taki. What will I do with you?) Who knows? Well, great one-shot, GB! Looking forward to whatever your next endeavor may be!
8/24/2010 c1 7AnnaRobsZombies
lol.

this was...interesting.

I never thought of Pein as a man who liked someone other than Konan.

but, whatever.

this is definatly a story you dont read every damn day

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GREAT JOB! -thumbs up-
8/23/2010 c1 6Slop Doggy
wewt. Pein kicked **. 'nuff said. can't wait for more. ;-)

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