for No Turning Back Now1/31/2012 c27 IPromiseMyHeartBurns4You
This is a really good story, I enjoyed it a lot. Although I do wish the zutara had more time to grow and develop, but it's still good. Can't wait for more of the sequel!
This is a really good story, I enjoyed it a lot. Although I do wish the zutara had more time to grow and develop, but it's still good. Can't wait for more of the sequel!
11/18/2011 c27 
6Kelana-ti
Nice. :D I love Zutara, i think it makes more since then Kataang. Normally, I would have an issue with Katara being engaged at 14, but in the time period that Avatar seems to be in, it was not that unusual. Then take in the cercumstances,And I was almost expecting it. C: You did pretty well with rewriting most of the last season, although you skipped some stuff that I loved, but I can live with that.Well written, and finished, this was a fun read. :D
6Kelana-tiNice. :D I love Zutara, i think it makes more since then Kataang. Normally, I would have an issue with Katara being engaged at 14, but in the time period that Avatar seems to be in, it was not that unusual. Then take in the cercumstances,And I was almost expecting it. C: You did pretty well with rewriting most of the last season, although you skipped some stuff that I loved, but I can live with that.Well written, and finished, this was a fun read. :D
11/15/2011 c27 2ImTheLoner
Haha i actually read this story in one go...just shows i have no life lol. i actually really enjoyed it thanx for writing
2ImTheLonerHaha i actually read this story in one go...just shows i have no life lol. i actually really enjoyed it thanx for writing
11/15/2011 c1 ImTheLoner
okay before i start reading this i just wanted to say i hope its good... i read your other reviews and they were pretty funny... any way ill probably review when i finish... so good luck
p.s: your reviewer 2ndSystem made me want to read this lol
okay before i start reading this i just wanted to say i hope its good... i read your other reviews and they were pretty funny... any way ill probably review when i finish... so good luck
p.s: your reviewer 2ndSystem made me want to read this lol
11/14/2011 c27 2ndSystem
Great Finale, lots of fire, and stuff(spoilers)happening fantastic endbattle, satisfied me :D last chapter was action all the way, suki could have had done some more action but she's just a side character so don't bother :P
where's iroh hanging out during all this btw, he should be kicking ass...
zuko's gonna make it, why? BECAUSE zuko is awsome,if he's not there in the end it's not Zutara, because than it's only Tara...
yes that makes total sense.
Aang just doesn't know what he wants! but hey, teenagers what ya gonna do :P
changing their mind last minute, but hey he's learning it...
where's Azula hanging out? did mai finally got the guts to assassinate her in her sleep?
probably not but something'd up ...
Sequel need's to be rated M, trust me, if you do, i'll send you a email with a picture of a cake, you might think you won't enjoy it but you will... trust me on it ;)
Great Finale, lots of fire, and stuff(spoilers)happening fantastic endbattle, satisfied me :D last chapter was action all the way, suki could have had done some more action but she's just a side character so don't bother :P
where's iroh hanging out during all this btw, he should be kicking ass...
zuko's gonna make it, why? BECAUSE zuko is awsome,if he's not there in the end it's not Zutara, because than it's only Tara...
yes that makes total sense.
Aang just doesn't know what he wants! but hey, teenagers what ya gonna do :P
changing their mind last minute, but hey he's learning it...
where's Azula hanging out? did mai finally got the guts to assassinate her in her sleep?
probably not but something'd up ...
Sequel need's to be rated M, trust me, if you do, i'll send you a email with a picture of a cake, you might think you won't enjoy it but you will... trust me on it ;)
11/14/2011 c25 2ndSystem
yay great chapter! and it's pretty long :O Aang got slapped with a pretty nice twist! good job ;) :D
that was an awsome idea, now he has more work to do nice :P
Toph need's to put her ass to his face or else he's still gonna run back desperate and try to get Katara back... (like thats gonna happen, NO, simpy because ZUTARA RULES)
Zuko and Katara are so sweeet! i really like how they interact, very in-character
sokka's situation in the last chapter btw, fantastic he is bound to get into trouble, but hey so is zuko, but i was expecting Jin to create a cockblock attempt at the end, but it could still happen...
next time, maybe, i'm not counting on it, but it would be awsome, yes, it would, period.
rambling on... so the whole Ursa thing, kinda unexpected, nice going, but iroh needs to clear things up about what exactly happend -.- it's kinda vague...
by the way, AWSOME STORY STAYS AWSOME, i see that sequel is in progress, GOOOOD, because i was shocked and kinda in panic mode about the fact that i'm running out of chapters :P
good luck with the sequel i'm gonna put it on alert, and wait till you finish it, and then i'm gonna read this story AGAIN, and i'm gonna like it even more because i get more stuff (reading + smoking weed = forgetting critical story elements) and i'm gonna leave more annoying reviews,
SO YOU BETTER FINISH EL SEQUEL, XD (please) oh yeah and now that i think about it, the bunny was awsome :D
yay great chapter! and it's pretty long :O Aang got slapped with a pretty nice twist! good job ;) :D
that was an awsome idea, now he has more work to do nice :P
Toph need's to put her ass to his face or else he's still gonna run back desperate and try to get Katara back... (like thats gonna happen, NO, simpy because ZUTARA RULES)
Zuko and Katara are so sweeet! i really like how they interact, very in-character
sokka's situation in the last chapter btw, fantastic he is bound to get into trouble, but hey so is zuko, but i was expecting Jin to create a cockblock attempt at the end, but it could still happen...
next time, maybe, i'm not counting on it, but it would be awsome, yes, it would, period.
rambling on... so the whole Ursa thing, kinda unexpected, nice going, but iroh needs to clear things up about what exactly happend -.- it's kinda vague...
by the way, AWSOME STORY STAYS AWSOME, i see that sequel is in progress, GOOOOD, because i was shocked and kinda in panic mode about the fact that i'm running out of chapters :P
good luck with the sequel i'm gonna put it on alert, and wait till you finish it, and then i'm gonna read this story AGAIN, and i'm gonna like it even more because i get more stuff (reading + smoking weed = forgetting critical story elements) and i'm gonna leave more annoying reviews,
SO YOU BETTER FINISH EL SEQUEL, XD (please) oh yeah and now that i think about it, the bunny was awsome :D
11/13/2011 c18 2ndSystem
wait, whaaaaat she's GONE :O shejustleftlikethat!
DAMN forgot all about it :| this story is just too exciting!
now that i think about it, there's another character that's missing for some thime, but i'm sure that person wont be away for long :P
also when is Toph gonna be (even) more direct to Aang?
and this story needs moar kissing :D lol
awsome story is awsome ;)
wait, whaaaaat she's GONE :O shejustleftlikethat!
DAMN forgot all about it :| this story is just too exciting!
now that i think about it, there's another character that's missing for some thime, but i'm sure that person wont be away for long :P
also when is Toph gonna be (even) more direct to Aang?
and this story needs moar kissing :D lol
awsome story is awsome ;)
11/12/2011 c5 2ndSystem
great story so far, katara is feisty, mjust what zu needs, i hope there is a Iroh POV somewhere,
btw Aang's gonna make trouble when he finds out about zutara right, right? because that has 2happen :P
great story so far, katara is feisty, mjust what zu needs, i hope there is a Iroh POV somewhere,
btw Aang's gonna make trouble when he finds out about zutara right, right? because that has 2happen :P
10/27/2011 c27 2charlaine2124
I LOVE IT! This has kept me amused on a series of very long train journeys, and I am a massive fan. This is the first fanfic I have read that did Taang really well, and I have read a lot over the last couple of months. I am really looking forward to starting the sequel, and I hope that your studies don't keep you from doing this ever again.
Keep up the good work :-D
Char
2charlaine2124I LOVE IT! This has kept me amused on a series of very long train journeys, and I am a massive fan. This is the first fanfic I have read that did Taang really well, and I have read a lot over the last couple of months. I am really looking forward to starting the sequel, and I hope that your studies don't keep you from doing this ever again.
Keep up the good work :-D
Char
9/4/2011 c27 3darkfire888
i have been up for almost 24 hours reading you story i love it soo much and im happy to sleep now that its 3:48AM good night
3darkfire888i have been up for almost 24 hours reading you story i love it soo much and im happy to sleep now that its 3:48AM good night
8/25/2011 c27 jessi
Excellent story! This is totally how the series should have ended!
Excellent story! This is totally how the series should have ended!
8/24/2011 c27 16Ozuma thy AWESOME Vampanatic8
I loved this. I got so emotional. Definitely can't wait for the sequel.
16Ozuma thy AWESOME Vampanatic8I loved this. I got so emotional. Definitely can't wait for the sequel.