for Happy Birthday, Bailey12/8/2012 c4 No name sorry
It was amazing, I cumed to it a few times.
P.S. I think twincest is an awesome thing (especially if it's between brothers). I'm a 13 - year - old (gay) boy from Burgas, Bulgaria.
It was amazing, I cumed to it a few times.
P.S. I think twincest is an awesome thing (especially if it's between brothers). I'm a 13 - year - old (gay) boy from Burgas, Bulgaria.
11/28/2012 c1 Guest
cool i really enjoyed this good imagination
cool i really enjoyed this good imagination
2/26/2011 c4 
47Fireguitar
Aww... It was nice but I wish Bailey ended up with Cody and not Zack. I'm not the biggest Zailey fan, but it was well written. I just wish there was more Cailey. Bailey should've had to pick one of the twins (hopefully Cody.)
47FireguitarAww... It was nice but I wish Bailey ended up with Cody and not Zack. I'm not the biggest Zailey fan, but it was well written. I just wish there was more Cailey. Bailey should've had to pick one of the twins (hopefully Cody.)
2/11/2011 c4 ROXAS
AWESOME. I REALLY LIKE THE ENDING:) keep up the good work
AWESOME. I REALLY LIKE THE ENDING:) keep up the good work
1/11/2011 c4 2Dreams.Peace.Love.Happiness
"You know I have a sensitive gag reflex." Omilord, that was probably the best part! great story.
2Dreams.Peace.Love.Happiness"You know I have a sensitive gag reflex." Omilord, that was probably the best part! great story.
10/4/2010 c4 CraziiCookii
Wow. Just wow. I genuinely love this story :) I love all the emotion portrayed by the characters in each chapter, they were bang on in my opinion. I'd love to read a sequel to this, to see how well they're adapting to this situation, Zack especially as he was the most hesitant, and to see how everyone reacts to the news. I'd say Carey would have a heart attack! Anyways, loved it =D
Wow. Just wow. I genuinely love this story :) I love all the emotion portrayed by the characters in each chapter, they were bang on in my opinion. I'd love to read a sequel to this, to see how well they're adapting to this situation, Zack especially as he was the most hesitant, and to see how everyone reacts to the news. I'd say Carey would have a heart attack! Anyways, loved it =D
9/18/2010 c4 7Deboa
That was a nice way t sum this up! I loved how Zack was hesitant about getting a ** shoved up his **. That seemed like a typical reaction from him.
Anyway, that was a good story! Some of your best work in my opinion! I really wish you would make a chapter 5 just giving a post-sex insight. I really want to know what Zack's afterthoughts on that whole thing are. Than again, beggars can't be choosers. Oh well... it was a great read and I am really glad you chose to write this! ^_^
7DeboaThat was a nice way t sum this up! I loved how Zack was hesitant about getting a ** shoved up his **. That seemed like a typical reaction from him.
Anyway, that was a good story! Some of your best work in my opinion! I really wish you would make a chapter 5 just giving a post-sex insight. I really want to know what Zack's afterthoughts on that whole thing are. Than again, beggars can't be choosers. Oh well... it was a great read and I am really glad you chose to write this! ^_^
9/11/2010 c3 Anonymous Reviewer 2010
this is really really good! update as soon as possible!
this is really really good! update as soon as possible!
9/6/2010 c3 7Deboa
Wow... That was absolutely amazing. At first I was completely on Zack's side. He is right after all. I mean, if my brother had a girlfriend and pulled this I would be in a "what the hell" state of mind as well. However, Bailey's final two quotes were so powerful! She really put Zack in a corner with those words. Poor Zack...
I hope Zack is happy in the end. I really don't care if Bailey is happy, since she's the one who caused all of this to begin with. As long as Zack is happy, it's all good. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
7DeboaWow... That was absolutely amazing. At first I was completely on Zack's side. He is right after all. I mean, if my brother had a girlfriend and pulled this I would be in a "what the hell" state of mind as well. However, Bailey's final two quotes were so powerful! She really put Zack in a corner with those words. Poor Zack...
I hope Zack is happy in the end. I really don't care if Bailey is happy, since she's the one who caused all of this to begin with. As long as Zack is happy, it's all good. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!