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8/28/2010 c1 4likemermaid
Oeooeeoo I watched it too and omg! so dinamic and interesting episode, and Callian scenes.. Cal's 'yes I want her' and him keep an eye on Gillian - so romantic and sweet yeah.. oh and thouse acting moments, my hand almost everytime was on my month coz of worry about Gillian and Burns..

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I had missing exactly that dialog of Callian at the end! thank you for that! I think they told exactly like you discribe it! Oy.. can't wait another episode, too!.. vavavoom!
8/27/2010 c1 20hotforteacher
I thought it was great! I love how it took Gillian a lot longer to figure out that Cal was talking about her! And I love how she freaked out and left, noting that she too was afraid to get close with someone. Brilliant piece!
8/25/2010 c1 14twentyfour.mad
:) This fic made my day! It was amazing and your characterisation was brilliant.

And the whole story was very very believable.

The Lie to Me writers need to get you to finish off their stories/episodes and write more Callian scenes/episodes. :)
8/25/2010 c1 analiesa1013
Oh! So good,and you stayed in character so well,I would've thought this was the real ending
8/25/2010 c1 7Batsojopo
very nice continuation of the ep. I could easily see this happening.
8/25/2010 c1 Rugbygirrl
Great story! I like how Gillian was so jealous when she thought of Cal with another woman but when he indicates that she is the one he want to be with, she runs!
8/25/2010 c1 6FritzKebab
This was a great post-ep! I could totally see this happening. Very realistic and you really captured both Cal and Gillian well. Great job!
8/25/2010 c1 sash queen of the jungle
what did i think? Well I havent seen that episode yet. does not air in UK till thursday. seen the previews and cant wait. love the cat and mouse in callian relationship. Thanks for writing and sharing.
8/25/2010 c1 rtlnord
Loved this story! But I think it's great as a one-shot, leave it like that!
8/25/2010 c1 1beingKitKat
Awesome fic. I would love to see a sequel of sort though. Can't just leave us hanging there right? :D
8/25/2010 c1 10LolaRedMuse
loved it. very accurate
8/25/2010 c1 7Frozen Bacon
that was a cute story~
8/25/2010 c1 18HughSoSexy
I absolutely loved this! I'm adding it to my favorites and hoping there will be another chapter. But if not, I think it's great all on it's own too.
8/25/2010 c1 2FrozenInTheMoment
i ... i ... i think this needs another chapter! please do, write it! loved it! i REALLY loved it, alright?
8/25/2010 c1 601xfirefly9x
Nice one! Would love to see a sequel if there's any chance of that.. ;)
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