for In My Life2/12/2011 c10 Trilogy.Of.Five
This ending is so cute! I love the way you had Draco go back and visit the grave & tell Astoria goodbye, it was so sweet & heartfelt.
The scene with her family seemed to match perfectly to what her parents would be like.
Also, in chappie 9, where Draco knows Scorpius likes Hermione because he plays with her hair, it was so adorable!
The ending of this has a really nice feel-good to it, and I love that you used Castor as the name. I always wanted twins for them to be Castor & Pollux :)
Where does Cedrella come from, by the way? I'm assuming another constellation?
This ending is so cute! I love the way you had Draco go back and visit the grave & tell Astoria goodbye, it was so sweet & heartfelt.
The scene with her family seemed to match perfectly to what her parents would be like.
Also, in chappie 9, where Draco knows Scorpius likes Hermione because he plays with her hair, it was so adorable!
The ending of this has a really nice feel-good to it, and I love that you used Castor as the name. I always wanted twins for them to be Castor & Pollux :)
Where does Cedrella come from, by the way? I'm assuming another constellation?
2/4/2011 c10 Princess Patterson
love the entire fic...its heart touching when Draco grieves n Hermione enters in his life n all...wish the story was a bit longer to show more interaction between Draco n the Potters n others ...n many more but anymore I love ur story right from the story to the end..yes, the ending was short...Good!
love the entire fic...its heart touching when Draco grieves n Hermione enters in his life n all...wish the story was a bit longer to show more interaction between Draco n the Potters n others ...n many more but anymore I love ur story right from the story to the end..yes, the ending was short...Good!
1/20/2011 c8 
5Broken-Wings101
hae,
great story, very sad though. You do know that Dracos marriage to Astoria is supposed to be an arranged marriage, but i think its cool the way you made Astoria be the love of Dracos life.
5Broken-Wings101hae,
great story, very sad though. You do know that Dracos marriage to Astoria is supposed to be an arranged marriage, but i think its cool the way you made Astoria be the love of Dracos life.
12/31/2010 c6 Trilogy.Of.Five
Nice, Alex! I was afraid he'd never get Scorpius back and be one of those dads that just ditches their kid in a tragedy. Which sucks!
I'm glad that he'll be a part of Scorpius' life now, I can't wait to see how he acts around him and how Hermione will react to him as well.
Nice, Alex! I was afraid he'd never get Scorpius back and be one of those dads that just ditches their kid in a tragedy. Which sucks!
I'm glad that he'll be a part of Scorpius' life now, I can't wait to see how he acts around him and how Hermione will react to him as well.
12/29/2010 c6 jessirose85
This was a good chapter xx
I think the next chapter should include some father son bonding xx
This was a good chapter xx
I think the next chapter should include some father son bonding xx
12/29/2010 c6 1Pau-0803
ok, so he doesn't know his soon at all. when is Hermione reapering. try to post soon. and happy holidays
1Pau-0803ok, so he doesn't know his soon at all. when is Hermione reapering. try to post soon. and happy holidays
11/17/2010 c5 8Ms.HellFire-ffacnt
Are you seriously trying to break my heart? *Sigh* Draco was one of my favorite chracters in the series. I love how he's so tortured, confused, and conflicted. And it only adds to the dark sexiness that he is portrayed by Tom Felton.
I once read in an interview that J.K. Rowling was a little upset when the movie franchise began to really take off around the fourth movie,because her female fans seem to go gaga over Draco Malfoy. She said it took her a while to realized that they did see Draco as evil, but Tom Felton as hot and sexy and therefore created mentally Draco as hot and sexy and thusly was 'forced' to give Draco a moral reprive nearing and at the conclusion; because 'it just wouldn't have been fair'. Lol.
I always felt bad for him. And even though I love Harry Potter, I really do wish that J.K. would have given Draco just a little more goodness a little earlier on.
I know he turns out good or accepting which ever term your prefer, but I just wish he would have had a bigger epiphany and little more back bone. But then again, his father really was awful, so it's understandable and were right back to torutured again. Ahh, it's a never ending cycle, we've come full circle to begin again. Lol.
Great story I can't wait to the next chapter.
I might have never put Hermione and Draco together, but that doesn't mean I won't read stories that do. :)
8Ms.HellFire-ffacntAre you seriously trying to break my heart? *Sigh* Draco was one of my favorite chracters in the series. I love how he's so tortured, confused, and conflicted. And it only adds to the dark sexiness that he is portrayed by Tom Felton.
I once read in an interview that J.K. Rowling was a little upset when the movie franchise began to really take off around the fourth movie,because her female fans seem to go gaga over Draco Malfoy. She said it took her a while to realized that they did see Draco as evil, but Tom Felton as hot and sexy and therefore created mentally Draco as hot and sexy and thusly was 'forced' to give Draco a moral reprive nearing and at the conclusion; because 'it just wouldn't have been fair'. Lol.
I always felt bad for him. And even though I love Harry Potter, I really do wish that J.K. would have given Draco just a little more goodness a little earlier on.
I know he turns out good or accepting which ever term your prefer, but I just wish he would have had a bigger epiphany and little more back bone. But then again, his father really was awful, so it's understandable and were right back to torutured again. Ahh, it's a never ending cycle, we've come full circle to begin again. Lol.
Great story I can't wait to the next chapter.
I might have never put Hermione and Draco together, but that doesn't mean I won't read stories that do. :)