for Twilight of Reconciliation6/11/2011 c3 soj56
Too... many... errors... But it was still a good chapter.
Too... many... errors... But it was still a good chapter.
4/29/2011 c3 
9GameJunkie7
Good to see you're back in the saddle Rocket. It has good structure and at least shows that you truly aren't dead *snicker*.
Anyway good to know you have the beginning and ending thought out, it's a good idea to do the ending before the middle, that way you have something to work towards.
Also just to ask for your opinion but what did you think of the villain lineup I had for that Post-TP story I never really got to writing? I still have the original documents and I really find it to be too amazing to let the idea go, I'd be perfectly ok if you got any ideas from them.
9GameJunkie7Good to see you're back in the saddle Rocket. It has good structure and at least shows that you truly aren't dead *snicker*.
Anyway good to know you have the beginning and ending thought out, it's a good idea to do the ending before the middle, that way you have something to work towards.
Also just to ask for your opinion but what did you think of the villain lineup I had for that Post-TP story I never really got to writing? I still have the original documents and I really find it to be too amazing to let the idea go, I'd be perfectly ok if you got any ideas from them.
4/19/2011 c2 2Time4Crisis
Good so far and I like the idea of Link and Sparrow teaming up, very different and interesting. Two issues: address how Sparrow is going to fit into Zelda's world more and you need to UPDATE. I'm itchin' for more (no really my back is literally itching from not being able to read more)
2Time4CrisisGood so far and I like the idea of Link and Sparrow teaming up, very different and interesting. Two issues: address how Sparrow is going to fit into Zelda's world more and you need to UPDATE. I'm itchin' for more (no really my back is literally itching from not being able to read more)
3/5/2011 c2 soj56
my two favorite series in one crossover. this is be great!
my two favorite series in one crossover. this is be great!
11/14/2010 c2 9GameJunkie7
Must have more! In all my fanfiction ideas for TP I never thought of adding a second hero and going through the original story until recently but Sparrow from Fable II? Brilliant, bloody brilliant. But the hero relationship will be a little too easy, having both Link and Sparrow as selfless hero types they're going to get along famously as a team but without conflicting views that leaves out a lot of possible humor.
Here's what you should do if you find yourself lacking in inspiration: read other fanfiction following either of the two worlds you've fused to get inspired, watch abridged series of the games to get good laughs or look at fanart. If all else fails simply ramble to yourself on ideas or try to roleplay it will help bring the story to life and give it your own personal characteristic buzz that makes it click for you, it's only good if you have fun with it.
Regardless I enjoy this story thus far and imagine that maybe Sparrow can help TP Link learn magic which he lacks in the game.
9GameJunkie7Must have more! In all my fanfiction ideas for TP I never thought of adding a second hero and going through the original story until recently but Sparrow from Fable II? Brilliant, bloody brilliant. But the hero relationship will be a little too easy, having both Link and Sparrow as selfless hero types they're going to get along famously as a team but without conflicting views that leaves out a lot of possible humor.
Here's what you should do if you find yourself lacking in inspiration: read other fanfiction following either of the two worlds you've fused to get inspired, watch abridged series of the games to get good laughs or look at fanart. If all else fails simply ramble to yourself on ideas or try to roleplay it will help bring the story to life and give it your own personal characteristic buzz that makes it click for you, it's only good if you have fun with it.
Regardless I enjoy this story thus far and imagine that maybe Sparrow can help TP Link learn magic which he lacks in the game.
10/30/2010 c2 5Warhawk Talon
Oh, Minda is going to be in for a shock when Sparrow gets back to normal...
5Warhawk TalonOh, Minda is going to be in for a shock when Sparrow gets back to normal...
10/18/2010 c2 14DuskStarDragon
A very interesting story indeed. I do see great potential in this becoming an epic. Please do be careful with transitions between flashbacks and present times. They must be smooth so it doesn't break the reader's attention. And try not to rush some parts. Action is nice, but giving the reader some time to breath and reflect is good too.
Overall nice job!
14DuskStarDragonA very interesting story indeed. I do see great potential in this becoming an epic. Please do be careful with transitions between flashbacks and present times. They must be smooth so it doesn't break the reader's attention. And try not to rush some parts. Action is nice, but giving the reader some time to breath and reflect is good too.
Overall nice job!
10/10/2010 c2 3Soul of Heroes
So far so good :)
One thing. I've never played the other game so I would like to know: What is this 'Will'? Some sort of magic?
Keep it up ;)
3Soul of HeroesSo far so good :)
One thing. I've never played the other game so I would like to know: What is this 'Will'? Some sort of magic?
Keep it up ;)
10/8/2010 c2 Ragnarok Warrior
I should have seen that transformation coming.Very appropriate. Keep up the good work.
I should have seen that transformation coming.Very appropriate. Keep up the good work.
10/6/2010 c1 Ragnarok Warrior
This should be interesting.Wonder what Link's reaction is going to be to the pistol
This should be interesting.Wonder what Link's reaction is going to be to the pistol
9/12/2010 c1 3Bloodwolf432
An interesting take on Legend of Zelda, be sure to reread your story to make sure there is no grammical mistakes *hint hint* but a good start to a story none the less
3Bloodwolf432An interesting take on Legend of Zelda, be sure to reread your story to make sure there is no grammical mistakes *hint hint* but a good start to a story none the less
9/4/2010 c1 3Soul of Heroes
In all truth I would have to wait for the next chapter or two before I pass my opinion on this. so for, though, all I can say is nice job.
I do wish to say though, that Sparrow should NOT transform into a wolf or any type of animal (That's Link's thing in Twilight Princess). A spirit that can fight off bad guys and help Link along the way, or he can't do much while in the Twilight realm (as he's a spirit) but can help great in the light? Yes, that could work, but not a wolf, there is only one Hero of Twilight, and that is Link! I haven't played this other game, so I don't know what that other guy is on the cover, but if it's the same guy, he could turn into that.
Awaiting the next chapter, so for I say nice job ;)
3Soul of HeroesIn all truth I would have to wait for the next chapter or two before I pass my opinion on this. so for, though, all I can say is nice job.
I do wish to say though, that Sparrow should NOT transform into a wolf or any type of animal (That's Link's thing in Twilight Princess). A spirit that can fight off bad guys and help Link along the way, or he can't do much while in the Twilight realm (as he's a spirit) but can help great in the light? Yes, that could work, but not a wolf, there is only one Hero of Twilight, and that is Link! I haven't played this other game, so I don't know what that other guy is on the cover, but if it's the same guy, he could turn into that.
Awaiting the next chapter, so for I say nice job ;)