for Velvet & Chains8/19/2011 c1 simba5waldo5
I would love for this story to be continued! It is a great story. I love how bella takes control of edward! Great job on the story.
I would love for this story to be continued! It is a great story. I love how bella takes control of edward! Great job on the story.
10/18/2010 c1 scrosby66
Love it, there are so many fics out there with Edward as a Dom, nice to see Bella... Thanks for writing!
Love it, there are so many fics out there with Edward as a Dom, nice to see Bella... Thanks for writing!
10/3/2010 c1 MyBrown3y3s
This was interesting and really good.
I don't think I've ever read a story where Bella was the Domme or where they didn't have a romantic relationship.
I loved how this relationship worked for them since they've been together for a while and both enjoy this type of play.
I would love to see this continued and see how the characters and the relationship progress...romantically or not.
This was interesting and really good.
I don't think I've ever read a story where Bella was the Domme or where they didn't have a romantic relationship.
I loved how this relationship worked for them since they've been together for a while and both enjoy this type of play.
I would love to see this continued and see how the characters and the relationship progress...romantically or not.
9/20/2010 c1 
15bornonhalloween
DC-
Awesome one shot, and OF COURSE it would make a super multi-chapter! You've got a great start here, especially open to possibilities where they haven't decided (YET?) to become a couple or discovered their feelings for each other beyond the D/x relationship. How could she go 9 days without seeing him? Crazy Domella. And that little envelope has my mind reeling with possibilities.
And thanks for the birthday present- a whole contest worth or great smut to read on Halloween? You SHOULDN'T have! (But thanks anyways)
~BOH (yes, really)
15bornonhalloweenDC-
Awesome one shot, and OF COURSE it would make a super multi-chapter! You've got a great start here, especially open to possibilities where they haven't decided (YET?) to become a couple or discovered their feelings for each other beyond the D/x relationship. How could she go 9 days without seeing him? Crazy Domella. And that little envelope has my mind reeling with possibilities.
And thanks for the birthday present- a whole contest worth or great smut to read on Halloween? You SHOULDN'T have! (But thanks anyways)
~BOH (yes, really)
9/13/2010 c1 beachblonde2244
I'd read this if you continued. A little different from what I've read before, she was a little more harsh I guess you could say but great job anyway! :)
I'd read this if you continued. A little different from what I've read before, she was a little more harsh I guess you could say but great job anyway! :)
9/13/2010 c1 ChrisRW
I find it rather ironic that Edward's punishment for coming without permission is what a lot of women would like to mete out to a cheating partner in a vanilla relationship. It is a nice change of pace to read a BDSM story that isn't all fluffy as well. Put me down for more once ABD is finished.
I find it rather ironic that Edward's punishment for coming without permission is what a lot of women would like to mete out to a cheating partner in a vanilla relationship. It is a nice change of pace to read a BDSM story that isn't all fluffy as well. Put me down for more once ABD is finished.