for Trying my patience4/13 c9 Guest
Must read more!
Must read more!
3/21 c9 Chiyo
Are you going to continue writing? This is really good.
Are you going to continue writing? This is really good.
2/25 c9 
12Chris Stork
The banter and the action between the two is fun to read. Pip's flashback is well done and the consequences of it are realistic. The massage part is nice and shows off their feelings very well.
However; you're going a bit far with Pip's antics. I don't feel he has any right to complain after the way he treats Seras. You might want to go back and tone it down a little.
12Chris StorkThe banter and the action between the two is fun to read. Pip's flashback is well done and the consequences of it are realistic. The massage part is nice and shows off their feelings very well.
However; you're going a bit far with Pip's antics. I don't feel he has any right to complain after the way he treats Seras. You might want to go back and tone it down a little.
2/22 c1 1kittymoon14
this is a really good fanfiction you got going here. all 9 chapters of it. i love to read more when you post it. great writing!
1kittymoon14this is a really good fanfiction you got going here. all 9 chapters of it. i love to read more when you post it. great writing!
2/19 c9 Chibi
Oh my god, what a frustrating cliff hanger! Please don't stop writing!
Oh my god, what a frustrating cliff hanger! Please don't stop writing!
1/19 c9 Scarlethunger
cant wait for the next chapter ;)
cant wait for the next chapter ;)
1/15 c9 3Chesh11
To be honest, I'm actually not a huge fan of Pip x Seras, but you've converted me. I really like your writing style and the story so far, haha, looking forward to the lemon! :D
3Chesh11To be honest, I'm actually not a huge fan of Pip x Seras, but you've converted me. I really like your writing style and the story so far, haha, looking forward to the lemon! :D
11/8/2012 c7 10bakuraXryou4everluv
Oh my goodness there are so few decent Pip x Sera fanfics but yours is just absolutely amazing! You keep them so in character! I know you haven't update in almost a year, but please please PRETTY please update soon! We need the Pip Seras lemony goodness after all! *wink winks*
10bakuraXryou4everluvOh my goodness there are so few decent Pip x Sera fanfics but yours is just absolutely amazing! You keep them so in character! I know you haven't update in almost a year, but please please PRETTY please update soon! We need the Pip Seras lemony goodness after all! *wink winks*
10/2/2012 c8 Ashlea.MelonCake
OMFG! Continue continue continue!
OMFG! Continue continue continue!
5/5/2012 c8 2xXxRyuzakixXx
I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS STORY! It was so sweet, funny, and heartwarming. And I totally adored Pip^_^ Would be weird if I actually did cry when Seras cut his braid? o_O Anyway UPDATE SOON!:D
2xXxRyuzakixXxI REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS STORY! It was so sweet, funny, and heartwarming. And I totally adored Pip^_^ Would be weird if I actually did cry when Seras cut his braid? o_O Anyway UPDATE SOON!:D
3/29/2012 c8 10bakuraXryou4everluv
This story is so good! I love it!' You kept the characters so ic ts amazing! And I really like how Seras still has her monster moments, stays true to the original plot. :) Lol oh Pip, your such a drama queen with your hair. Lol XD anyway I really love the story, please update soon! ^_^
10bakuraXryou4everluvThis story is so good! I love it!' You kept the characters so ic ts amazing! And I really like how Seras still has her monster moments, stays true to the original plot. :) Lol oh Pip, your such a drama queen with your hair. Lol XD anyway I really love the story, please update soon! ^_^