for Furball's Story5/20 c38 CarbonChrisX
This is possibly one of the greatest stories i've read so far keep up the great work.
This is possibly one of the greatest stories i've read so far keep up the great work.
4/20/2012 c38 
10Knight of Renaissance Light
Well, this is good. But I'm starting to lose interest. I mean, the Just-Us "arc" is good and all, but when do we get to the really good stuff? As in, when does this dream sequence end. Message me when you get the chance.
10Knight of Renaissance LightWell, this is good. But I'm starting to lose interest. I mean, the Just-Us "arc" is good and all, but when do we get to the really good stuff? As in, when does this dream sequence end. Message me when you get the chance.
4/1/2012 c37 8Insomniazzz
Hope the V Tech thing works out for ya! best of luck, dude!
...Balto? what in the world? so much action int he past two chapters. my head is spinnnnnnnnnng out of control! keep it up!
8InsomniazzzHope the V Tech thing works out for ya! best of luck, dude!
...Balto? what in the world? so much action int he past two chapters. my head is spinnnnnnnnnng out of control! keep it up!
3/28/2012 c37 37Wolvmbm
Great update and nice ties to the Balto Film trilogy. :D
I cannot wait to see whether or not Salzar is within the town of Nome, Alaska. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline series like this one. :D
37WolvmbmGreat update and nice ties to the Balto Film trilogy. :D
I cannot wait to see whether or not Salzar is within the town of Nome, Alaska. :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline series like this one. :D
3/7/2012 c36 4RevDragon
Brilliant cameo! Balto is one of my favorite movies. I feel kinda sorry for Voltacat though D: having to um -cough- well that must be embarassing. I find myself missing Psychia though, maybe that's because I love Rita's character so much Lol.
I wonder though, do wolves have a natural animosity towards cats, just like dogs do? XD well I know Aleu is a good person at heart anyway.
Everybody's having crushes haha Whooo Buster and Babs! - ahem I mean Superbun and Wonderbabs :3
I'll definitely be looking forward to the next update, keep up the great writing!
4RevDragonBrilliant cameo! Balto is one of my favorite movies. I feel kinda sorry for Voltacat though D: having to um -cough- well that must be embarassing. I find myself missing Psychia though, maybe that's because I love Rita's character so much Lol.
I wonder though, do wolves have a natural animosity towards cats, just like dogs do? XD well I know Aleu is a good person at heart anyway.
Everybody's having crushes haha Whooo Buster and Babs! - ahem I mean Superbun and Wonderbabs :3
I'll definitely be looking forward to the next update, keep up the great writing!
3/7/2012 c36 37Wolvmbm
Nice update and interesting discovery by VoltaCat. :D
Now I wonder if there was ever a chapter briefly focusing on Scentanna, and her 'attraction' to the newest member of the team in VoltaCat ? :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline series like this one. :D
37WolvmbmNice update and interesting discovery by VoltaCat. :D
Now I wonder if there was ever a chapter briefly focusing on Scentanna, and her 'attraction' to the newest member of the team in VoltaCat ? :D
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline series like this one. :D
2/18/2012 c35 8Insomniazzz
whoa! these last five chapters are a lot different than the previous ones! Interesting premise, using the new characters and superhero theme, nonetheless! :D
8Insomniazzzwhoa! these last five chapters are a lot different than the previous ones! Interesting premise, using the new characters and superhero theme, nonetheless! :D
2/5/2012 c35 4RevDragon
I promised my full review didn't I? Well, here it is. Well I guess I'll start off with the basics of the story then I'll comment on all the separate arcs (hope you like long reviews XD).
1st: Characters, you've taken two otherwise voiceless characters, and given them more personality, and it's really loveable seeing of course that the main focus of this story is Furball. I like how you've brought him from that shy kid into a blooming hero and likeable guy. The same can be said for Calamity, it's nice that he can be seen as something other than another Wile, which by this I mean that he's only there to be embarrassed by Little Beeper.
Fifi also, you've captured her personality very well, mannerisms, accent and everything. Not to mention she and Babs are my favorite characters from that show. I could go on to every other character, but since that would take much longer then I think I have, I'll just touch on Gogo Dodo. First off LOL with him, the segments where he pops up randomly to speak to Furball, and the interaction between them is very engaging. He's still just as zany and wacky, but he also has hidden wisdom, XD (who knew?)
2nd: Dialogue, it's done very nicely, rarely was there anything that came out of characters mouths that I thought "They wouldn't say that." Instead, I found myself laughing at much of what they said like I would have if I went to watch an episode. Again, touching how the characters speak, Fifi, Shirley, Dizzy, all of them you've done like spot on (XD).
3rd: You say you feel like you need to work on detail, but throughout the story and within the last arc mainly, you did just fine with it.
4th: Slapstick, and cameos; I think you did fairly good in the physical humor department, it's one of my favorite things to read, there were moments where I really felt like you just nailed it as far as tiny toons go. I'd like to see more of that actually. And as for cameos, it's almost like you read my mind, I was going to ask for animaniacs cameos, and look what happened XD.
5th: Seeing as this appears to be a conglomerate of story arcs leading up to probably one final one with a 'happy ending' I'm going to go through the ones that I remembered and liked the most, including the current one right now. They're not in any specific order, just the ones that came to mind, so I suppose I'll start off with the current one.
It's quite funny really, again referring to how you seemed to have read my mind with that animaniac cameo. The superhero arc was a nice idea. Interesting with Rita and Voltacat Lol. I liked the action (though the scene with blood seemed a bit out of place, not that I didn't like it, but rated T so nevermind that.) And I'm looking forward to what comes next in that arc. Oh yeah, and props for getting me to actually say "Helllloooooo Nurse!" out loud. (I'm such a dweeb haha)
Another one I remember was the perfecto prep game. It was nice to see you included that rivalry there, and it reminded me of Space Jam a little bit. Of course Furball would be the hero XD, good job.
The last one that really stood out to me was the one where they had to travel to Elmyra's house to rescue Tyrone (wouldn't be a Tiny Toons fic without her in it now would it? XD). That one really had me laughing and freaking out at the same time thinking "Oh crap, she's gonna get them D:"
I hope my review covers everything you want to hear, I feel like I at least owed you this much, since it took me a little while to finish Lol. This was a great read, and I'm looking forward to see what adventures are in store for not just Furball, but the rest of the gang as well.
4RevDragonI promised my full review didn't I? Well, here it is. Well I guess I'll start off with the basics of the story then I'll comment on all the separate arcs (hope you like long reviews XD).
1st: Characters, you've taken two otherwise voiceless characters, and given them more personality, and it's really loveable seeing of course that the main focus of this story is Furball. I like how you've brought him from that shy kid into a blooming hero and likeable guy. The same can be said for Calamity, it's nice that he can be seen as something other than another Wile, which by this I mean that he's only there to be embarrassed by Little Beeper.
Fifi also, you've captured her personality very well, mannerisms, accent and everything. Not to mention she and Babs are my favorite characters from that show. I could go on to every other character, but since that would take much longer then I think I have, I'll just touch on Gogo Dodo. First off LOL with him, the segments where he pops up randomly to speak to Furball, and the interaction between them is very engaging. He's still just as zany and wacky, but he also has hidden wisdom, XD (who knew?)
2nd: Dialogue, it's done very nicely, rarely was there anything that came out of characters mouths that I thought "They wouldn't say that." Instead, I found myself laughing at much of what they said like I would have if I went to watch an episode. Again, touching how the characters speak, Fifi, Shirley, Dizzy, all of them you've done like spot on (XD).
3rd: You say you feel like you need to work on detail, but throughout the story and within the last arc mainly, you did just fine with it.
4th: Slapstick, and cameos; I think you did fairly good in the physical humor department, it's one of my favorite things to read, there were moments where I really felt like you just nailed it as far as tiny toons go. I'd like to see more of that actually. And as for cameos, it's almost like you read my mind, I was going to ask for animaniacs cameos, and look what happened XD.
5th: Seeing as this appears to be a conglomerate of story arcs leading up to probably one final one with a 'happy ending' I'm going to go through the ones that I remembered and liked the most, including the current one right now. They're not in any specific order, just the ones that came to mind, so I suppose I'll start off with the current one.
It's quite funny really, again referring to how you seemed to have read my mind with that animaniac cameo. The superhero arc was a nice idea. Interesting with Rita and Voltacat Lol. I liked the action (though the scene with blood seemed a bit out of place, not that I didn't like it, but rated T so nevermind that.) And I'm looking forward to what comes next in that arc. Oh yeah, and props for getting me to actually say "Helllloooooo Nurse!" out loud. (I'm such a dweeb haha)
Another one I remember was the perfecto prep game. It was nice to see you included that rivalry there, and it reminded me of Space Jam a little bit. Of course Furball would be the hero XD, good job.
The last one that really stood out to me was the one where they had to travel to Elmyra's house to rescue Tyrone (wouldn't be a Tiny Toons fic without her in it now would it? XD). That one really had me laughing and freaking out at the same time thinking "Oh crap, she's gonna get them D:"
I hope my review covers everything you want to hear, I feel like I at least owed you this much, since it took me a little while to finish Lol. This was a great read, and I'm looking forward to see what adventures are in store for not just Furball, but the rest of the gang as well.
2/1/2012 c34 RevDragon
I have not finished catching up on this story so this isn't my complete review, but I really think you've done a great job with this character, and I'm going to look forward to submitting a full review on the story thus far.
I have not finished catching up on this story so this isn't my complete review, but I really think you've done a great job with this character, and I'm going to look forward to submitting a full review on the story thus far.
2/1/2012 c35 AIRSTRIKER193
This story is awesome, thanks for the update
This story is awesome, thanks for the update