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15Ryuus2
Oh ho, time for the return of the Iron Spider, is it? Awesome.
The Peter/Pepper pairing is positively pleasant to our plebeian palettes. Man that's a lot of P's to say "I like what you're doing here, don't leave it half finished!" The only thing that makes no sense is Peter Parker running into a super-fight, and not Spider-man. He's seriously limited in what he can do mask-off.
Keep up the great work!
15Ryuus2Oh ho, time for the return of the Iron Spider, is it? Awesome.
The Peter/Pepper pairing is positively pleasant to our plebeian palettes. Man that's a lot of P's to say "I like what you're doing here, don't leave it half finished!" The only thing that makes no sense is Peter Parker running into a super-fight, and not Spider-man. He's seriously limited in what he can do mask-off.
Keep up the great work!
10/30/2012 c3 Alex
This is one of the best fics out there; it’s smartly written, clever, funny, and it’s the only one with the pairing of Peter and Pepper. The hints you drop in this chapter are very well placed (I assume that Spidey will be getting a certain red and gold outfit in the next one) and the plot against Stark has me very intrigued! I hope you update again! Please!? :D
This is one of the best fics out there; it’s smartly written, clever, funny, and it’s the only one with the pairing of Peter and Pepper. The hints you drop in this chapter are very well placed (I assume that Spidey will be getting a certain red and gold outfit in the next one) and the plot against Stark has me very intrigued! I hope you update again! Please!? :D
10/16/2012 c3
2Hivedragon
I'm loving this story you really should update this one seeing this is the only Pep/Pet out there.
2HivedragonI'm loving this story you really should update this one seeing this is the only Pep/Pet out there.
10/7/2012 c1
2twenty-two-spectacles
my god. They are perfect together! I really loved this story :) going to read some of your other fics! but only after I add this one to my favorites ;) You're a fantastic writer :)
2twenty-two-spectaclesmy god. They are perfect together! I really loved this story :) going to read some of your other fics! but only after I add this one to my favorites ;) You're a fantastic writer :)
9/11/2012 c3 HaywireEagle
Kinda bleh. Things progress too fast, the characters are far too bland. The Spidey-banter is pretty spot on.
Kinda bleh. Things progress too fast, the characters are far too bland. The Spidey-banter is pretty spot on.
4/21/2012 c3 Nobleman082
Not a bad start. The fact that this two characters have never meet in the comics before makes for an interesting story. More please.
Not a bad start. The fact that this two characters have never meet in the comics before makes for an interesting story. More please.
4/1/2012 c3
23Kairan1979
Doesn't Peter remember the armored suit Stark created for him before the Civil War? And how "great" it turned out for him after Tony multiplied the suit and gave it to Scarlet Spiders squad?
23Kairan1979Doesn't Peter remember the armored suit Stark created for him before the Civil War? And how "great" it turned out for him after Tony multiplied the suit and gave it to Scarlet Spiders squad?
