for The Other Story12/12/2012 c9 Blacksword 1
Nice work you made wybie a badass not bad kill it with fire funny and sweet :)
Nice work you made wybie a badass not bad kill it with fire funny and sweet :)
2/14/2011 c9 The Random Person
I h8 how u keep making cquls i thought u said u were never replying to oh baby
I h8 how u keep making cquls i thought u said u were never replying to oh baby
12/25/2010 c9 talking black kitty of night
this chapter made me tear up this was a great story! :D
this chapter made me tear up this was a great story! :D
10/3/2010 c7 
9LovelyJovely
Very nice :3 I like it :)
The only thing I would suggest doing is to take out the author notes that appear throught the story; it's distracting and disturbs the flow. But other than that, your doing fine :D
9LovelyJovelyVery nice :3 I like it :)
The only thing I would suggest doing is to take out the author notes that appear throught the story; it's distracting and disturbs the flow. But other than that, your doing fine :D
10/2/2010 c6 The random person
So is there plan to blow everything up and burn the beldam's house or something? I'm confused. Well if that is the plan it sounds exactly like something Wybie would think of. Well update soon please!
So is there plan to blow everything up and burn the beldam's house or something? I'm confused. Well if that is the plan it sounds exactly like something Wybie would think of. Well update soon please!
9/18/2010 c4 The random person
Another awesome update! Hmmm the second the beldam hears Xavior's voice she'll start running for her life thinking its Justine Peabrain. Oh well anywho update soon!
Another awesome update! Hmmm the second the beldam hears Xavior's voice she'll start running for her life thinking its Justine Peabrain. Oh well anywho update soon!
9/18/2010 c4 20A Writer With Mixed Interests
Cool! D Soooooo...who's the older twin? Xavier or Melody? I think Xavier should be, IDK why. :/
20A Writer With Mixed InterestsCool! D Soooooo...who's the older twin? Xavier or Melody? I think Xavier should be, IDK why. :/
9/12/2010 c1 The random person
Yay yay yay yay yay ya- *gasps for breath again* You made a sequal and I got mentioned (I'm not a physcopath just because I have voices in my head...never mind) Wait "Oh baby" was the sequal... Yay you made a trequal! (Is trequal a word...?) Melody's in big trouble. Evil beldam. Maybe the ghost children vistit Melody and convince her to leave the other world? Or does Xavier help? Yeah twin power! Anywho update soon!
Yay yay yay yay yay ya- *gasps for breath again* You made a sequal and I got mentioned (I'm not a physcopath just because I have voices in my head...never mind) Wait "Oh baby" was the sequal... Yay you made a trequal! (Is trequal a word...?) Melody's in big trouble. Evil beldam. Maybe the ghost children vistit Melody and convince her to leave the other world? Or does Xavier help? Yeah twin power! Anywho update soon!