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5Team Major Whitlock
I loved it, this chapter was amazing and I can't wait to read the next chapter. xx
5Team Major WhitlockI loved it, this chapter was amazing and I can't wait to read the next chapter. xx
10/11/2010 c1 4itsalljustalie
Great first chapter!
I would really be interested in reading more, it's always nice to read a story in which the OC is a "bad guy", or in this case a "bad girl".
(And who doesn't love Tom Riddle? :D )
4itsalljustalieGreat first chapter!
I would really be interested in reading more, it's always nice to read a story in which the OC is a "bad guy", or in this case a "bad girl".
(And who doesn't love Tom Riddle? :D )
9/16/2010 c1 bookluver217
its really goood you should think of maling it more than a one shot continue please!
its really goood you should think of maling it more than a one shot continue please!
9/13/2010 c1 4Crystal-Eyes-93
I like this story,
It captures Tom's possessivness as well as how he's power hungry, but it doesn't pull him out of charactor either.
Hopefully you'll put up another chapter soon
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4Crystal-Eyes-93I like this story,
It captures Tom's possessivness as well as how he's power hungry, but it doesn't pull him out of charactor either.
Hopefully you'll put up another chapter soon
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