for Frogs and Snails and Puppy Dog Tails11/15/2011 c2 
8fanastikal
I like all of these in their own way, but I think you really hit your stride with the last three. I'm sorry you didn't get more reviews, but I wasn't here over a year ago. I don't get many reviews, either, probably 'cause I write under the 'M' rating, but nothing's going to stop me from writing, or shut off my brain on an obsessive plotline. Best wishes to you!
8fanastikalI like all of these in their own way, but I think you really hit your stride with the last three. I'm sorry you didn't get more reviews, but I wasn't here over a year ago. I don't get many reviews, either, probably 'cause I write under the 'M' rating, but nothing's going to stop me from writing, or shut off my brain on an obsessive plotline. Best wishes to you!
9/29/2010 c2 8BeautyandYue
I enjoyed the last two snippets. I liked the interaction between Dave and Beltazar. I think you captured their speech and quirks with each other perfectly. What I wouldn't give would be to see something from the two snippets and turn them into stories. I think they'd turn out really well. All in all, really enjoyable!
8BeautyandYueI enjoyed the last two snippets. I liked the interaction between Dave and Beltazar. I think you captured their speech and quirks with each other perfectly. What I wouldn't give would be to see something from the two snippets and turn them into stories. I think they'd turn out really well. All in all, really enjoyable!
9/27/2010 c2 21Sheherazade's Fable
Honestly, the visual of Balthazar in the old West was probably the most amazing thing I've thought of all day.
21Sheherazade's FableHonestly, the visual of Balthazar in the old West was probably the most amazing thing I've thought of all day.
9/17/2010 c2 15kenobigirlliz
Well, I don't know why no one is reviewing, but I liked this chapter and the first a lot. I like the little snippets to the different song titles. Please write more! Thank you!
15kenobigirllizWell, I don't know why no one is reviewing, but I liked this chapter and the first a lot. I like the little snippets to the different song titles. Please write more! Thank you!