for Kaidoh's Life2/11/2011 c1 
38aquafreak
Inui gathering data = PRICELESS SHIZZ
I wonder if he'll blurt that out in the practice next morning...This fic is awsm, I dare say.
aqua
38aquafreakInui gathering data = PRICELESS SHIZZ
I wonder if he'll blurt that out in the practice next morning...This fic is awsm, I dare say.
aqua
9/16/2010 c1 3speadee
Good story, especially since it's your 1st one! I like how you had Kaidou meeting and playing with the cat. You portrayed him well.
Actually, afternoon practice doesn't end that early. In one of the manga volumes, I recall that it said 5 or 6 P.M. I also thought Kaidou's 3rd and final run would be some time after dinner, not before it. Well, it's not that important so it's all right.
I didn't think Inui's appearance was random since he's always stalking and spying. Besides, Kaidou often asks Inui about his training menu so it's normal for Inui to track Kaidou's training.
3speadeeGood story, especially since it's your 1st one! I like how you had Kaidou meeting and playing with the cat. You portrayed him well.
Actually, afternoon practice doesn't end that early. In one of the manga volumes, I recall that it said 5 or 6 P.M. I also thought Kaidou's 3rd and final run would be some time after dinner, not before it. Well, it's not that important so it's all right.
I didn't think Inui's appearance was random since he's always stalking and spying. Besides, Kaidou often asks Inui about his training menu so it's normal for Inui to track Kaidou's training.