for Pouring Rain9/19/2010 c1 
14Inuzuka Notori
Very nice Demon~ -nods- Good job making a story about the foundation of their relationship. It makes me want to read a second chapter of it haha but nah I know this has to be kept a oneshot. It concluded well. Fumi with a personality is great, and if its not outrageous, she does compliment Nao nicely. I liked when she reprimanded Nao for swearing so much haha, and then Nao cutely tried to stop XD. 'Tis awesomesauce~
14Inuzuka NotoriVery nice Demon~ -nods- Good job making a story about the foundation of their relationship. It makes me want to read a second chapter of it haha but nah I know this has to be kept a oneshot. It concluded well. Fumi with a personality is great, and if its not outrageous, she does compliment Nao nicely. I liked when she reprimanded Nao for swearing so much haha, and then Nao cutely tried to stop XD. 'Tis awesomesauce~
9/17/2010 c1 16Raineel
Demon! I loveeeee the summary! It's very awesome and was something that immediately caught my eyes [after the title of course...likes the title very much 8D]
I really enjoyed this story, the interactions between Fumi and Nao were really enjoyable to read. And and well...I just really really liked it xDD
Part of me is curious about Fumi's background story too o_o
I am not good with Nao's characterization myself, but I think you did a general good job. And its AU, so its kinda okay too =P
16RaineelDemon! I loveeeee the summary! It's very awesome and was something that immediately caught my eyes [after the title of course...likes the title very much 8D]
I really enjoyed this story, the interactions between Fumi and Nao were really enjoyable to read. And and well...I just really really liked it xDD
Part of me is curious about Fumi's background story too o_o
I am not good with Nao's characterization myself, but I think you did a general good job. And its AU, so its kinda okay too =P