for Life changes us6/3/2012 c35 Lovenarumai
I do not mind you posting the chapters and do nt think you are rushing.
this is a great story.
keep up the good work and please continuous updating
I do not mind you posting the chapters and do nt think you are rushing.
this is a great story.
keep up the good work and please continuous updating
5/18/2012 c33
8Akira Chikara
YOU REALLY NEED TP UPDATE!
I just finished reading this story, but i'm already having withdrawal symptoms!
8Akira ChikaraYOU REALLY NEED TP UPDATE!
I just finished reading this story, but i'm already having withdrawal symptoms!
5/17/2012 c24
8Akira Chikara
"I always prefer to kill them with kindness."
That's an interesting notion.
8Akira Chikara"I always prefer to kill them with kindness."
That's an interesting notion.
5/9/2012 c32 CartoonistGirl6
Oh boy it's goin good and exciting! Good job!
Oh boy it's goin good and exciting! Good job!
5/1/2012 c31
9ardx
Is it wrong that when I read a bit where Mai gets hurt or in trouble or faints, my head screams 'GODDAMN IT MAI!'? Cause it does. Apart from that, I'm really enjoying the story and I like the way that you haven't shamelessly added pairings into it either. Or given Mai a past where everyone's been murdered. I did laugh at a typo in a previous chaper, where I think you meant to say 'Her legs' but it came out has 'Hayley's'.
9ardxIs it wrong that when I read a bit where Mai gets hurt or in trouble or faints, my head screams 'GODDAMN IT MAI!'? Cause it does. Apart from that, I'm really enjoying the story and I like the way that you haven't shamelessly added pairings into it either. Or given Mai a past where everyone's been murdered. I did laugh at a typo in a previous chaper, where I think you meant to say 'Her legs' but it came out has 'Hayley's'.
5/1/2012 c31 Ariana Taniyama
I did not see the blood spell coming! Really good job with this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how the spell impacts their relationship and abilities.
Oh, and typos? No stand out problems. Good job on the chapter.
I did not see the blood spell coming! Really good job with this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how the spell impacts their relationship and abilities.
Oh, and typos? No stand out problems. Good job on the chapter.
4/26/2012 c30
7Jade Starlight
Oh no! Mai's in trouble now! I feel so bad for her. Keep up the good work!
7Jade StarlightOh no! Mai's in trouble now! I feel so bad for her. Keep up the good work!
