for Weakness7/7/2012 c10 
1Landen Ru
was that a his world reference back there?...so its been a year or so since this chapter...your not finishing r u? damn it every time i find a story so wonderful the author just stops..im the grim reaper of fan fics. is it possible at least u could tell me why it stopped?i truly hate when talent goes to waste.u did real good though.
1Landen Ruwas that a his world reference back there?...so its been a year or so since this chapter...your not finishing r u? damn it every time i find a story so wonderful the author just stops..im the grim reaper of fan fics. is it possible at least u could tell me why it stopped?i truly hate when talent goes to waste.u did real good though.
7/5/2012 c4 Landen Ru
let me tell u i look long and hard for a story in the sonic series that hits the spot but yours has got it. especially shadow wise. apparently people find it difficult to understand shadow and his mind. but your pretty good thank this up please i have a long history of finding writers who quit their stories.i really like strong.
let me tell u i look long and hard for a story in the sonic series that hits the spot but yours has got it. especially shadow wise. apparently people find it difficult to understand shadow and his mind. but your pretty good thank this up please i have a long history of finding writers who quit their stories.i really like strong.
4/30/2012 c10 zeldastep
this story is awesome! it needs to be finished. its been like half a year so this needs to be updated!
this story is awesome! it needs to be finished. its been like half a year so this needs to be updated!
4/8/2012 c10 DESTINY - Jean Havoc Fangirl
ha ha ha ha ha ha kill ha ha ha Before I pass out ha ha ha ha cuz' im laughing too hard! please to god KEEP GOING!
ha ha ha ha ha ha kill ha ha ha Before I pass out ha ha ha ha cuz' im laughing too hard! please to god KEEP GOING!
2/14/2012 c10 Fire-Shiell
100th review, update soon pleaseeee this was, like, the first fanfic I had ever read! (which was done on my very boring summer vacation xD )
100th review, update soon pleaseeee this was, like, the first fanfic I had ever read! (which was done on my very boring summer vacation xD )
1/14/2012 c10 WinterMuffin
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1/14/2012 c3 WinterMuffin
Adia Babushka Foofy.
Darn straight.
Adia Babushka Foofy.
Darn straight.
1/8/2012 c10 10Killing Kathy
Hahahaha! Loooooooved it! Shadow. Is. So. CUTE! XD haha this really made me laugh and I love how smoothly Jasper and Shadow's relationship build up! Cant wait for more! Plz tell me there's more! I ADORE Shadow! I love his arrogance which kids to his warm and humorous stubbornness and then how you still manage to give him his bitterness and serious anger about his past! Nice job!
Although I wish I hadn't read this now. Why? COS IM SO ADDICTED TO IT BUT THERE'S NO MORE UNTIL... I dunno! TT-TT and because I seriously need to get myself a Shadow before I go insane! Lol
Uh... Plz, if you can, can u have a look at my Shadow fanfic too? I tried really hard with it but I couldn't think of a way to fit Shadow's serious character into a humor story, unlike you, evil genius, who have!
10Killing KathyHahahaha! Loooooooved it! Shadow. Is. So. CUTE! XD haha this really made me laugh and I love how smoothly Jasper and Shadow's relationship build up! Cant wait for more! Plz tell me there's more! I ADORE Shadow! I love his arrogance which kids to his warm and humorous stubbornness and then how you still manage to give him his bitterness and serious anger about his past! Nice job!
Although I wish I hadn't read this now. Why? COS IM SO ADDICTED TO IT BUT THERE'S NO MORE UNTIL... I dunno! TT-TT and because I seriously need to get myself a Shadow before I go insane! Lol
Uh... Plz, if you can, can u have a look at my Shadow fanfic too? I tried really hard with it but I couldn't think of a way to fit Shadow's serious character into a humor story, unlike you, evil genius, who have!
1/1/2012 c10 36Babyuknowme13
Woot! I loved it! Yays! Shadow's learning how to be mortal! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
36Babyuknowme13Woot! I loved it! Yays! Shadow's learning how to be mortal! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
11/3/2011 c10 Truepikapuff
I logged in specifically for this fic, and it will be the first I bookmark.
I started A Series of Unfortunate Events, but I stopped because it ruined my image of everything in media having a happy ending and terrified me. :I
I'm sure if I were Shadow, I'd probably want to kill you too. xD
I logged in specifically for this fic, and it will be the first I bookmark.
I started A Series of Unfortunate Events, but I stopped because it ruined my image of everything in media having a happy ending and terrified me. :I
I'm sure if I were Shadow, I'd probably want to kill you too. xD
11/3/2011 c10 4Half-Angel-Writer
AHAAAHHAAAAHAAAA. I never thought that Shads would do such a thing but there it is in black and white. oh he's gonna have one heck of a time getting out of this one.
Brilliant job...
When are you going to up date This Isn't Happening? it's one of my favorite favorites.
4Half-Angel-WriterAHAAAHHAAAAHAAAA. I never thought that Shads would do such a thing but there it is in black and white. oh he's gonna have one heck of a time getting out of this one.
Brilliant job...
When are you going to up date This Isn't Happening? it's one of my favorite favorites.
11/2/2011 c10 Sam Brody or Moon Princess
Great job on the storyline for the chapter. I noticed several grammar errors. The words were spelled correctly; you just had the wrong homophone.
their's = there's (in this case)
This is the only one I could find, but there's another one somewhere towards the beginning with "poor". When in doubt, look it up. :)
Anyway, great job on the chapter. I'm always looking forward to more.
Great job on the storyline for the chapter. I noticed several grammar errors. The words were spelled correctly; you just had the wrong homophone.
their's = there's (in this case)
This is the only one I could find, but there's another one somewhere towards the beginning with "poor". When in doubt, look it up. :)
Anyway, great job on the chapter. I'm always looking forward to more.