for In a Strange Land12/21/2010 c11 
3UndeadScribe
It always annoyed me that it didn't show you your companions at that moment. I mean, all you knew was that they died.
Once again, an awesome chapter. I look forward to the next one.
(I really do think that you have writing Valen down. And I like Ericka.)
3UndeadScribeIt always annoyed me that it didn't show you your companions at that moment. I mean, all you knew was that they died.
Once again, an awesome chapter. I look forward to the next one.
(I really do think that you have writing Valen down. And I like Ericka.)
12/19/2010 c11 8Amondra
I love you for writing this! I haven't found many fanfic's with Valen in them sadly, and this is just lovely! I also just got around writing one myself( took me long enough :/)
8AmondraI love you for writing this! I haven't found many fanfic's with Valen in them sadly, and this is just lovely! I also just got around writing one myself( took me long enough :/)
12/18/2010 c11 cheerygirl6
Great chapter, as always.
I loved how you wrote this chapter from Valen's viewpoint, it was surpising, but I'm not complaining. ;)
And I also liked how Ericka was actually reacting to everything, since in most stories the main character always seems so calm about the whole thing. It makes her seem more realistic. Good job! :)
Great chapter, as always.
I loved how you wrote this chapter from Valen's viewpoint, it was surpising, but I'm not complaining. ;)
And I also liked how Ericka was actually reacting to everything, since in most stories the main character always seems so calm about the whole thing. It makes her seem more realistic. Good job! :)
12/9/2010 c10 3UndeadScribe
I loved this chapter! It was very sweet, and you wrote it very well. (I'm terrible at writing romance...)
Can't wait for the next one!
Valen is one of the best NWN male characters. (And one of the very best romance options.)
3UndeadScribeI loved this chapter! It was very sweet, and you wrote it very well. (I'm terrible at writing romance...)
Can't wait for the next one!
Valen is one of the best NWN male characters. (And one of the very best romance options.)
12/8/2010 c10 Kyuubi
Ok, so that was the sweetest chapter! It is currently 17 degrees outside right now but this made me all warm and fuzzy. Fantastic chapter and I can not wait to see more of this. Great Job!
Ok, so that was the sweetest chapter! It is currently 17 degrees outside right now but this made me all warm and fuzzy. Fantastic chapter and I can not wait to see more of this. Great Job!
12/7/2010 c10 cheerygirl6
Aww :) What a sweet chapter! Valen and Ericka are so cute together. Now I need to know what happens next! ;)
Aww :) What a sweet chapter! Valen and Ericka are so cute together. Now I need to know what happens next! ;)
11/30/2010 c9 cheerygirl6
Great job with this chapter! I loved the bit where Nathyrra asks Ericka if she's slept with Valen yet-hilarious! This is a fun story! Hopefully you'll update soon! :)
Great job with this chapter! I loved the bit where Nathyrra asks Ericka if she's slept with Valen yet-hilarious! This is a fun story! Hopefully you'll update soon! :)
11/22/2010 c8 UndeadScribe
Now I'm gonna go crazy waiting for the next chapter!
Seriously though, please tell me that the next one will be out soon! Cliffhangers drive me mad. Especially, when everything else seems to be going so well.
So, I'm looking forward to the next one.
Now I'm gonna go crazy waiting for the next chapter!
Seriously though, please tell me that the next one will be out soon! Cliffhangers drive me mad. Especially, when everything else seems to be going so well.
So, I'm looking forward to the next one.
11/21/2010 c8 Guest
Good chapter! It was a little short, but still very good. I can't wait for chapter 9! ;)
Good chapter! It was a little short, but still very good. I can't wait for chapter 9! ;)
11/16/2010 c7 Guest
Another good chapter!
Please update soon! This is a really good HoTU story! :D
Another good chapter!
Please update soon! This is a really good HoTU story! :D
11/5/2010 c7 7Crimson Rogue
How does this story not have more reviews! D:
This has to be one of my favorite NWN stories to date and I can't wait until you update! :D Keep up the good work!
7Crimson RogueHow does this story not have more reviews! D:
This has to be one of my favorite NWN stories to date and I can't wait until you update! :D Keep up the good work!
11/3/2010 c6 3UndeadScribe
I like this story, it has an interesting main character (She reminds me of the kind of characters my family plays) And I like the way you write Valen.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. Hope it comes soon!
I am a beginning writer, so I'm not exactly qualified to offer critique, but I read a ton, and I think you're pretty good.
3UndeadScribeI like this story, it has an interesting main character (She reminds me of the kind of characters my family plays) And I like the way you write Valen.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update. Hope it comes soon!
I am a beginning writer, so I'm not exactly qualified to offer critique, but I read a ton, and I think you're pretty good.
11/2/2010 c6 cheerygirl6
Wonderful story :D
Keep up the good work and I hope to see another chapter up soon ;)
Wonderful story :D
Keep up the good work and I hope to see another chapter up soon ;)
10/13/2010 c4 Kyuubi
This is fantastic! I really am surprised this doesn't have more reviews. You have taken a favorite storyline for me and breathed new life into it by giving your main character sass and by making Valen more real than his scripted story. I will be watching this and waiting eagerly for the next update.
This is fantastic! I really am surprised this doesn't have more reviews. You have taken a favorite storyline for me and breathed new life into it by giving your main character sass and by making Valen more real than his scripted story. I will be watching this and waiting eagerly for the next update.
10/7/2010 c3 Great Job
Good story! We need more HOTU stories out there :) Hope you keep writing!
One thing though. Maybe you could make the chapters a little longer, so there's more to read when you post them? Thanks ;)
Good story! We need more HOTU stories out there :) Hope you keep writing!
One thing though. Maybe you could make the chapters a little longer, so there's more to read when you post them? Thanks ;)