for Rockstar5/30 c1 Guest
I AM HOOKED! This prologue already has me excited :-D
I AM HOOKED! This prologue already has me excited :-D
5/18 c19 mainebreezy
Ok 1st of all! I just wanted to say that this is my number one favorite ECLARE fanfic. 2nd I wanted to thank you for having such a wonderful ideas i hope you don't stop writing 3rd As you can see I'm reading this in year 2013 yes! 4th you always criticize your smut scenes when the truth is, it's really fucking awesome as hell (sorry for the curse words) it's just too good I love it when they fight first before doing it and I gotta say my favorite one was when they did it for the first time when he wrote a song for her in 30 minutes well I can't really say that it's my favorite scene because I really like all the smut scene. I love those twists like I'm always trying to guess what will happen next and I always end up with wrong conclusions because with your writing everything is possible like the part with Julia :D I was so shocked in that part. I love it too when you made clare a smut Goddess equally as eli is because usually in eclare fanfics I have read before, Clare is like too innocent and so unexperienced i love it that you made her seductive but no too much neither too conservative she just go with the flow I really really love this story and I can't wait to read the sequel I was going to wait until summer to read this but it's too irresistible and yeah i guess that's it 3 thankyou again!
Ok 1st of all! I just wanted to say that this is my number one favorite ECLARE fanfic. 2nd I wanted to thank you for having such a wonderful ideas i hope you don't stop writing 3rd As you can see I'm reading this in year 2013 yes! 4th you always criticize your smut scenes when the truth is, it's really fucking awesome as hell (sorry for the curse words) it's just too good I love it when they fight first before doing it and I gotta say my favorite one was when they did it for the first time when he wrote a song for her in 30 minutes well I can't really say that it's my favorite scene because I really like all the smut scene. I love those twists like I'm always trying to guess what will happen next and I always end up with wrong conclusions because with your writing everything is possible like the part with Julia :D I was so shocked in that part. I love it too when you made clare a smut Goddess equally as eli is because usually in eclare fanfics I have read before, Clare is like too innocent and so unexperienced i love it that you made her seductive but no too much neither too conservative she just go with the flow I really really love this story and I can't wait to read the sequel I was going to wait until summer to read this but it's too irresistible and yeah i guess that's it 3 thankyou again!
5/7 c14 Guest
Love it!
Love it!
4/7 c10 
1juniorsgrl48
I can't even begin to explain how much I love your writing and this story! I started reading yesterday and just finished chap 10. I'm not much of a reader but once I started this I couldn't stop. I was procrastinating studying for my giant biology exam by reading this. This chapter is absolutely breath-taking. You portrayed their first time (in my opinion) perfectly and I honestly don't even have words for it! I've been wanting to read something so raw and emotional for quite some time now but couldn't find one, then I stumbled upon this and I'm just so thankful I found it! It reminds me a lot of my own experiences so I actually almost teared up a bit while reading :) I love this and I can't wait to read more and especially read Eli's POV. I would give you a billion stars for this if I could! haha
1juniorsgrl48I can't even begin to explain how much I love your writing and this story! I started reading yesterday and just finished chap 10. I'm not much of a reader but once I started this I couldn't stop. I was procrastinating studying for my giant biology exam by reading this. This chapter is absolutely breath-taking. You portrayed their first time (in my opinion) perfectly and I honestly don't even have words for it! I've been wanting to read something so raw and emotional for quite some time now but couldn't find one, then I stumbled upon this and I'm just so thankful I found it! It reminds me a lot of my own experiences so I actually almost teared up a bit while reading :) I love this and I can't wait to read more and especially read Eli's POV. I would give you a billion stars for this if I could! haha
2/18 c19 Guest
Make more! Plzz
Make more! Plzz
1/30 c13 Guest
good
good
1/18 c19 4ForeverFan13
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I THANK THE TUMBLR GODS FOR SENDING THIS FANFIC UPON ME!
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I THANK THE TUMBLR GODS FOR SENDING THIS FANFIC UPON ME!
1/11 c16 paris
look this chapter was amazing I loved it but it was kind of sad.
look this chapter was amazing I loved it but it was kind of sad.
11/30/2012 c3 10Pho1297
So, I love this story, and I have to have read it at least fifteen times...bu as I come across it again, something is strange. I don't know why, and I don't know how, but part of the end of this chapter is missing. Unless I'm mistaken, before Clare looks down at her outfit, Eli mentions walking into the arena and noticing the most beautiful girl he's ever seen wearing like a baby blue dress or something along those lines, and everyone in the audience is goes something like, "OHHHHHMYYYYGODDDD" and it's not there. I'm actually really positive. His whole monologue of "...You're the only girl that has ever made me nervous...and I am yours, blue eyes." Struuuuummmmmmmm.. doesn't really make sense with out it. I don't know, I'm really just very confused and could use some clearing up. As I have said, so many times, I love this story, and can't wait until you upload Proximity.
Pho:)
10Pho1297So, I love this story, and I have to have read it at least fifteen times...bu as I come across it again, something is strange. I don't know why, and I don't know how, but part of the end of this chapter is missing. Unless I'm mistaken, before Clare looks down at her outfit, Eli mentions walking into the arena and noticing the most beautiful girl he's ever seen wearing like a baby blue dress or something along those lines, and everyone in the audience is goes something like, "OHHHHHMYYYYGODDDD" and it's not there. I'm actually really positive. His whole monologue of "...You're the only girl that has ever made me nervous...and I am yours, blue eyes." Struuuuummmmmmmm.. doesn't really make sense with out it. I don't know, I'm really just very confused and could use some clearing up. As I have said, so many times, I love this story, and can't wait until you upload Proximity.
Pho:)
11/7/2012 c3 Jan
So far, so good. I still want to know "what happens next"!
So far, so good. I still want to know "what happens next"!
11/7/2012 c1 Guest
I like it. It makes me wonder "what happened next," which is what makes a good story!
I like it. It makes me wonder "what happened next," which is what makes a good story!