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12/4/2010 c6 aki reinhart
Very well written. Thank God I happen to ran across this work of art. Please keep writing! :)
12/3/2010 c6 thepinkmartini
great chapter! i'm curious as to what will happen when lilith finally goes back to eden.
12/3/2010 c6 eirist
i had to laugh at the last part. hahaha. amazing. you officially got me hooked to this fic of yours. i can't wait to read the next one. but i'll patiently wait since i know the NLE's coming up. good luck with the examination. ;)
12/3/2010 c5 eirist
i definitely, definitely love this chapter. awesome. i like reading stories like this. great job. :)
10/24/2010 c5 6Ushinaware Ta Kaze
lol That is soooooo freaky! Anyway, I really like this fanfic. It is soooo diff frm the ones I've read. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon. ^-^
10/21/2010 c5 thepinkmartini
awesome chapter! i'm glad that even samael and lilith have those playful banters just like fuuko and tokiya.
10/18/2010 c4 thepinkmartini
That was so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter!
10/18/2010 c3 thepinkmartini
I loved it. This fic is so interesting and it's amazing how you mixing up scripture with a fanfic.
10/15/2010 c1 thepinkmartini
cool story.
10/14/2010 c4 43satomika
you should put Lucifer in it...

and..

tokia's words, "i'm your angel..."

it made me think of the song...

hahaha...

so...

you're a nurse...?

funny...

almost all the people i meet in this fandom seemed to be nurses...

one way or another...

anyway...

i don't know where to get a copy of hush hush...

although if there's a movie, i think it would be much easier...
10/11/2010 c4 5abubi-chan
i also did feel giddy at the last part. i'm so glad you're turning this into a multi-chapter story. you're starting to build a great story line, and i love how you tend to make it relevant by incorporating religious themes. see you on the next chapter!
10/3/2010 c3 43satomika
well...

i did watch da vinci's code...

and angels and demons...

it really didn't bother me much...

i like religion, yes...

but while i was watching, i'm just too fascinated with how the story worked...

same here, in this fic, too...

btw, what does NLE stands for...?

and are you familiar with the Fallen series...?

reading this reminded me of that...

and then i researched samael and lilith...

liltih was associated with wind...

and fuuko is well as that...

that it's kind of weird that it's like coincidental...

and others, they say they both are demons...

and oh...

just update soon...

please...?
10/2/2010 c3 Shirayuki Sayura
Seems like you had a hard time to write this chap, however I really love this, yes, you're right that Lilith was the first woman not Eve. Lilith was really beautiful, just like an angel at first though she was regarded as a Succubus. However, update soon, I hope to see the next chap. Thanks.
10/2/2010 c3 5abubi-chan
i am extremely pleased with your new update, it got my mind working. i don't think you could complete this story with one more chapter though. i think it would require a few more chapters to be able to link the past to the present without it being too rushed. it's good that you consider this before potentially ending a story, and i wouldn't want such a good plot end sloppily (not that i think you could even manage to do that, but again, i have yet to find out ;) ) i hope that you would be able to update soon, and keep those creative juices flowing. there are not enough stories being updated here, and not enough stories written by a good new author, too.

and btw, i'm taking theo classes as a requirement at my university. it's a catholic university, and they take religion very seriously, apparently. it's stressful, but coming across stories like these makes me appreciate what i learn since it becomes easier to understand. heehee keep up with the good work!

cheers!
9/30/2010 c1 11sOdium nItrate
The title itself caught my attention and the uniqueness of the overall story is very impressive. I could never think, not even in a million years, that flame of recca and religion have the possibility to connect in an alternate universe. Your stories showed your passion in mythology and religion something you taken for inspiration. i like it! ^^
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