for Apocalypse of the Dimensions4/14 c22 DarkX
Awesome fic so far! But, can you PLEASE upload soon? Like, REALLY, REALLY soon? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?
Awesome fic so far! But, can you PLEASE upload soon? Like, REALLY, REALLY soon? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?
1/9/2011 c14 Lucky-9-Rose
Then I shall click on the review button. =D
I loved how some of the Smashers got back together. Great chapter overall and I look forward to the next one.
Then I shall click on the review button. =D
I loved how some of the Smashers got back together. Great chapter overall and I look forward to the next one.
1/5/2011 c13 Lucky-9-Rose
I also enjoyed reading this update too. That was quite the story, I agree. Good luck with the next update. =)
I also enjoyed reading this update too. That was quite the story, I agree. Good luck with the next update. =)
1/5/2011 c12 Lucky-9-Rose
I found the title choice very neat for this chapter. It was well done and it's good to see you updating the story again. :)
I found the title choice very neat for this chapter. It was well done and it's good to see you updating the story again. :)
12/11/2010 c11 Lucky-9-Rose
Nice to see an update from you again! And I don't mind that it's short. It was still a satisfying read overall! The part when Mario and Luigi were arguing was my favourite scene in the update. Great job!
Nice to see an update from you again! And I don't mind that it's short. It was still a satisfying read overall! The part when Mario and Luigi were arguing was my favourite scene in the update. Great job!
10/12/2010 c10 Lucky-9-Rose
To start, I have to congratulate you for your longest update by far! Great job! And having Meta Knight and Black Knight brothers really works! More Feldspar in the chapter which made it even more suspenseful.
I did notice one mistake you might want to fix. It's at the end:
~Black Knight growled in his m
I hope that helps. Just fix that one sentence which shouldn't take that long. :)
Good luck writing the next chapter.
To start, I have to congratulate you for your longest update by far! Great job! And having Meta Knight and Black Knight brothers really works! More Feldspar in the chapter which made it even more suspenseful.
I did notice one mistake you might want to fix. It's at the end:
~Black Knight growled in his m
I hope that helps. Just fix that one sentence which shouldn't take that long. :)
Good luck writing the next chapter.
10/10/2010 c9 Lucky-9-Rose
Interesting to see that Black Knight saved the others from the water. I like seeing how Black Knight would help the others, even if he didn't act like he cared most of the time. That 'sacrifice' was a very touching moment. Well done.
And the fake Jigglypuff was Feldspar? I didn't see that coming at all! What a twist! I wonder where the real Jigglypuff is...
Definitely a story with a lot of potential. I can't wait to see it develop even more.
Interesting to see that Black Knight saved the others from the water. I like seeing how Black Knight would help the others, even if he didn't act like he cared most of the time. That 'sacrifice' was a very touching moment. Well done.
And the fake Jigglypuff was Feldspar? I didn't see that coming at all! What a twist! I wonder where the real Jigglypuff is...
Definitely a story with a lot of potential. I can't wait to see it develop even more.
10/10/2010 c7 
3RainOfThunder
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your friend,
Sammy
3RainOfThunderOOHHHHHHHHHHHH YAY! WHOOT WHOOT YOU ROCK BLACK NICE WITH ATTACK IT WAS AWESOME!
your friend,
Sammy
10/9/2010 c8 21Lucky-9-Rose
Well, Review Button, I guess I'll just have to keep pressing you, huh?
I was listening to that song and as soon as I finished reading the chapter, the song ended. What a coincidence! :D It's a great tune. I enjoyed it. Thanks for including the link.
Wow! Your longest chapter! Great job! This was my favourite chapter so far in the story. ^.^
21Lucky-9-RoseWell, Review Button, I guess I'll just have to keep pressing you, huh?
I was listening to that song and as soon as I finished reading the chapter, the song ended. What a coincidence! :D It's a great tune. I enjoyed it. Thanks for including the link.
Wow! Your longest chapter! Great job! This was my favourite chapter so far in the story. ^.^