for Heroic Manager2/2 c1 Anon
mnmementh2000 do you actually what the hell you are talking about? Have you even read any of my points and how can Hina now be a powerful influental person? How can she have the power over this many people and governments for god's sakes!?
If you think dragging Keitaro away like some damn kid is okay then your own ethics are pretty questionable as well.
In fact your responses to my points were just a load of childish nonsense and excuses.
You call my review a 'flame'? I was just pointing out BARE FACTS something BEYOND INCOMPREHENSIBLE to Kaos and Magnus and I did have regard for the readers actually because they needed to know BARE FACTS and in fact you don't know what the hell you're talking about.
I suggest you have some serious GROWING UP to do so before you criticize me I suggest you start growing up and then you'll have the right to! Because really either that or you're just someone who likes to embarrass himself by making the most weak and/or idiotic excuses out there but then again you have no idea how much you embarrassed yourself do you? I also think you're the one who doesn't have any regard for the readers.
mnmementh2000 do you actually what the hell you are talking about? Have you even read any of my points and how can Hina now be a powerful influental person? How can she have the power over this many people and governments for god's sakes!?
If you think dragging Keitaro away like some damn kid is okay then your own ethics are pretty questionable as well.
In fact your responses to my points were just a load of childish nonsense and excuses.
You call my review a 'flame'? I was just pointing out BARE FACTS something BEYOND INCOMPREHENSIBLE to Kaos and Magnus and I did have regard for the readers actually because they needed to know BARE FACTS and in fact you don't know what the hell you're talking about.
I suggest you have some serious GROWING UP to do so before you criticize me I suggest you start growing up and then you'll have the right to! Because really either that or you're just someone who likes to embarrass himself by making the most weak and/or idiotic excuses out there but then again you have no idea how much you embarrassed yourself do you? I also think you're the one who doesn't have any regard for the readers.
1/12 c1 
5mnementh2000
Hmmm... how to answer the poster prior to me...
I know, I'll start this way:
Generally, it is considered in poor taste to go off and flame as you have,with little to no regard to the author of the fic or their readers - especially going to the point of insulting each and every one that posted positive reviews. Also, consider this one piece of fact - THESE STORIES ARE ONLY THAT, and are to be read as 'out-of-character' or 'alternate universe'. As such, you are expected to be able to suspend your established beliefs in reality while reading them.
Now, about those 'points' of yours:
1 and 2- Yes, in the manga and anime canon, Hina was 'just' an inn owner, but if you bothered to read the story, she is now a very powerful and influential person, as there actually are in the world today. As for the BSAA having the backing of so many governments, that may be so, but if she is as influential as implied or outright stated, then she has the ears of most of those same backers - either monetarily or influentially. Either way, it is possible to disrupt things to the point of distraction or disbanding with the right words.
3- You may be right about RL generals and their demeanor, however, this is NOT RL, and as such, this man may very well fear said woman's position and abilities. Also, the general was not actually there, another was. Even if Hina wielded HALF of the power that the author has stated, yes, he would show at least a bit of fear, and would not be likely to 'throw her out on her **'. Political entanglements make backers and the like... nervous, twitchy. Close scrutiny would not be welcomed.
4- Yes, dragging Keitaro away like that was degrading, and most likely was done for that very reason. Hina wanted to assert her authority over him, as well as drop his anger and revenge points by a few notches. The author may also have been trying to add a little levity to the fic, a la the manga. Oh, and to answer your question about respecting the armed forces - quite frankly, no, I do not. I have a friend that, to my wife and my ways of thinking, made the incredible folly of joining the military, and we berate him every time we get the opportunity. Still, it was his decision, not ours...
As for the whole 'promise' thing, that is a plot point of the series, and I am sure that there are many people who would strive to keep such a promise - especially if they were as socially... inept?... as Keitaro was in the series - just as there are so many that would throw such useless things as a promise made by the wayside at their earliest convenience. Myself, I was raised to take promises VERY seriously, even at a very young age, and taught to honor any vow made if at all possible. So, saying that such an idea is stupid, silly, or meaningless - or outdated because a country is 'modern' - is the height of ignorance.
Well, I ranted against the poster enough, now for my review. Truthfully, I know almost nothing of the Resident Evil franchise, and so most of my review will cover the LH side of things. First off, the idea that Hina is more powerful politically or monetarily is an interesting idea, as is Keitaro's new personality. Having him be more... mature, and in control of his mental faculties was a good change - and him being married with a child on the way really set the story apart from others. The resident's reactions to him - and his wife - were a mix of what you saw in the manga and a product of the new story line, and blended well, I thought. I still say that Shinobu is one of my favorite characters from the series, and giving her such a traumatic past experience,and a solid previous connection to our protagonist was an interesting surprise.
I can't wait to see where you may go with this.
5mnementh2000Hmmm... how to answer the poster prior to me...
I know, I'll start this way:
Generally, it is considered in poor taste to go off and flame as you have,with little to no regard to the author of the fic or their readers - especially going to the point of insulting each and every one that posted positive reviews. Also, consider this one piece of fact - THESE STORIES ARE ONLY THAT, and are to be read as 'out-of-character' or 'alternate universe'. As such, you are expected to be able to suspend your established beliefs in reality while reading them.
Now, about those 'points' of yours:
1 and 2- Yes, in the manga and anime canon, Hina was 'just' an inn owner, but if you bothered to read the story, she is now a very powerful and influential person, as there actually are in the world today. As for the BSAA having the backing of so many governments, that may be so, but if she is as influential as implied or outright stated, then she has the ears of most of those same backers - either monetarily or influentially. Either way, it is possible to disrupt things to the point of distraction or disbanding with the right words.
3- You may be right about RL generals and their demeanor, however, this is NOT RL, and as such, this man may very well fear said woman's position and abilities. Also, the general was not actually there, another was. Even if Hina wielded HALF of the power that the author has stated, yes, he would show at least a bit of fear, and would not be likely to 'throw her out on her **'. Political entanglements make backers and the like... nervous, twitchy. Close scrutiny would not be welcomed.
4- Yes, dragging Keitaro away like that was degrading, and most likely was done for that very reason. Hina wanted to assert her authority over him, as well as drop his anger and revenge points by a few notches. The author may also have been trying to add a little levity to the fic, a la the manga. Oh, and to answer your question about respecting the armed forces - quite frankly, no, I do not. I have a friend that, to my wife and my ways of thinking, made the incredible folly of joining the military, and we berate him every time we get the opportunity. Still, it was his decision, not ours...
As for the whole 'promise' thing, that is a plot point of the series, and I am sure that there are many people who would strive to keep such a promise - especially if they were as socially... inept?... as Keitaro was in the series - just as there are so many that would throw such useless things as a promise made by the wayside at their earliest convenience. Myself, I was raised to take promises VERY seriously, even at a very young age, and taught to honor any vow made if at all possible. So, saying that such an idea is stupid, silly, or meaningless - or outdated because a country is 'modern' - is the height of ignorance.
Well, I ranted against the poster enough, now for my review. Truthfully, I know almost nothing of the Resident Evil franchise, and so most of my review will cover the LH side of things. First off, the idea that Hina is more powerful politically or monetarily is an interesting idea, as is Keitaro's new personality. Having him be more... mature, and in control of his mental faculties was a good change - and him being married with a child on the way really set the story apart from others. The resident's reactions to him - and his wife - were a mix of what you saw in the manga and a product of the new story line, and blended well, I thought. I still say that Shinobu is one of my favorite characters from the series, and giving her such a traumatic past experience,and a solid previous connection to our protagonist was an interesting surprise.
I can't wait to see where you may go with this.
12/17/2012 c1 Anon
Okay I'll stop right here on this pathetic excuse for a crossover and to certain reviewers who actually like this have you ever stopped to think of anything that is WRONG with this insulting, degrading piece of trash that Kaos and Magnus dare to insult people with? I'll point them out.
1. Hina is just an Inn Owner oh and before you make the excuse of 'considerable wealth' for her 'round the world trip' there are so many explanations for it like investments or suchlike and also it doesn't everywhere you know?
2. The B.S.A.A. is founded by the Global Pharmaceutical Consortium at the request of the US Government and they have branches in America, Europe and Africa that means they could have the support of MOST of these governments at least and there is no way Hina could possibly have that kind of power at all! This is tottally ridiculous! If anything she'd also fight the UN too and be put in jail for making such threats.
3. NO General would let a civillian into a warzone unless he is burned and do you think any military general would be intimidated by some old woman a general would have tossed her out on her **!
4. Dragging him away like he were some kid!? That's pretty **ing pathetic and degrading if EVER I saw it! Ever thought of that!? This and my third point are why I find this very insulting to soldiers EVERYWHERE! Do you two honestly have no respect for the servicemen and women who defend your country!?
I can go on but you get the drift, right? I found this fic to be utterly disgusting! Also why do you think promises made when you were 5 have any meaning at all? Even in Japan they are considered meaningless and silly and don't even use the 'tradition card' because Japan is modern and also there are too many who forget what a 'plot hole' is especially regarding Love Hina and think up all kinds of PATHETIC excuses!
You going to accept my points or make pathetic excuses yourselves?
Okay I'll stop right here on this pathetic excuse for a crossover and to certain reviewers who actually like this have you ever stopped to think of anything that is WRONG with this insulting, degrading piece of trash that Kaos and Magnus dare to insult people with? I'll point them out.
1. Hina is just an Inn Owner oh and before you make the excuse of 'considerable wealth' for her 'round the world trip' there are so many explanations for it like investments or suchlike and also it doesn't everywhere you know?
2. The B.S.A.A. is founded by the Global Pharmaceutical Consortium at the request of the US Government and they have branches in America, Europe and Africa that means they could have the support of MOST of these governments at least and there is no way Hina could possibly have that kind of power at all! This is tottally ridiculous! If anything she'd also fight the UN too and be put in jail for making such threats.
3. NO General would let a civillian into a warzone unless he is burned and do you think any military general would be intimidated by some old woman a general would have tossed her out on her **!
4. Dragging him away like he were some kid!? That's pretty **ing pathetic and degrading if EVER I saw it! Ever thought of that!? This and my third point are why I find this very insulting to soldiers EVERYWHERE! Do you two honestly have no respect for the servicemen and women who defend your country!?
I can go on but you get the drift, right? I found this fic to be utterly disgusting! Also why do you think promises made when you were 5 have any meaning at all? Even in Japan they are considered meaningless and silly and don't even use the 'tradition card' because Japan is modern and also there are too many who forget what a 'plot hole' is especially regarding Love Hina and think up all kinds of PATHETIC excuses!
You going to accept my points or make pathetic excuses yourselves?
2/18/2012 c1 8HotelKatz
I seriously have doubts that Hina has enough power to do anything to BSAA.
If she does have the power and does win up going about her threat, the UN will go and have her... 'removed' from the situation.
8HotelKatzI seriously have doubts that Hina has enough power to do anything to BSAA.
If she does have the power and does win up going about her threat, the UN will go and have her... 'removed' from the situation.
12/24/2011 c4 2reven228
oh man you seriously need to continue this story. It's smart, catchy, and I can't stop reading it.great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
2reven228oh man you seriously need to continue this story. It's smart, catchy, and I can't stop reading it.great chapter, keep goin and stay golden^^
10/22/2011 c4 9Rialga
I never would've thought a crossover between Love Hina and Resident Evil could be so good, but you've proved me wrong. I love how Keitaro is in this fic: kind and caring like he is in the manga, but when fighting, becomes a freaking killing machine. I don't know why, but the way he acted in fighting made me think of Nike from Air Gear and Alucard from Hellsing. Regardless, this fic is freaking awesome.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
9RialgaI never would've thought a crossover between Love Hina and Resident Evil could be so good, but you've proved me wrong. I love how Keitaro is in this fic: kind and caring like he is in the manga, but when fighting, becomes a freaking killing machine. I don't know why, but the way he acted in fighting made me think of Nike from Air Gear and Alucard from Hellsing. Regardless, this fic is freaking awesome.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/6/2011 c4 unseen constant
Ooooh this story looks like fun. and for your question I have no idea who ZN is but one thing that I will say is that if I see wesker in this story then I will call imortal bulls*** on you that man just needs to stay dead. All though reading about keitaro destroying him might make up for it ;). thanks for a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.
Ooooh this story looks like fun. and for your question I have no idea who ZN is but one thing that I will say is that if I see wesker in this story then I will call imortal bulls*** on you that man just needs to stay dead. All though reading about keitaro destroying him might make up for it ;). thanks for a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.
8/18/2011 c4 67Ginkyofu13
Wow, I hope Keitaro is able to counter that in the next chapter. Keep it up!
67Ginkyofu13Wow, I hope Keitaro is able to counter that in the next chapter. Keep it up!
8/15/2011 c3 HolyKnight5
Hmm. . .i can guess HOW Chris trained to be capable of counter the sheer power and speed of Wesker. Training against "Onslaught" Urashima repeatedly would have given Chris the edge and training to be capable of counter Wesker, and an advantage against BOW of all kinds, except the most powerful ones. . . .
Even if he dislikes Keitaro's attitude on combat, he can't but respect that he often risks life and limb in order to protect innocents. Hell, i can imagine that on the 1st battle against Wesker, Keitaro and Wesker clashed on, while Sheva and Chris immobilized and released Jill from the control drug. .
As a funny note, have Chris and Jill disavowing any romantic notion for each other, explaining that Jill saw Chris as an older brother, and Chris saw her as the rookie and a wilder version of her little sister.
Keitaro likely changed from the events of RE5, specially, as he LOATHES to even be similar on attitude to Wesker. . .even if like him, he's fond of using sunglasses. He may have every and then, the odd bad dream about that "megalomaniac excuse of a semen donor"
Hmm. . .i can guess HOW Chris trained to be capable of counter the sheer power and speed of Wesker. Training against "Onslaught" Urashima repeatedly would have given Chris the edge and training to be capable of counter Wesker, and an advantage against BOW of all kinds, except the most powerful ones. . . .
Even if he dislikes Keitaro's attitude on combat, he can't but respect that he often risks life and limb in order to protect innocents. Hell, i can imagine that on the 1st battle against Wesker, Keitaro and Wesker clashed on, while Sheva and Chris immobilized and released Jill from the control drug. .
As a funny note, have Chris and Jill disavowing any romantic notion for each other, explaining that Jill saw Chris as an older brother, and Chris saw her as the rookie and a wilder version of her little sister.
Keitaro likely changed from the events of RE5, specially, as he LOATHES to even be similar on attitude to Wesker. . .even if like him, he's fond of using sunglasses. He may have every and then, the odd bad dream about that "megalomaniac excuse of a semen donor"
8/15/2011 c4 3Orange-Fuzz-Ball
Awesome tale, i hope u throw Jill and Rebecca into the game for more fun and hope it turned out more awesome killing just like resident evil in more manage and zombie act like solider rather than dumb one.
By the way, even though the harem already plan out, but i deep in love with haruka x keitaro pair. may be you can work out about Jill and Rebecca.
Have nice day and constant update.
3Orange-Fuzz-BallAwesome tale, i hope u throw Jill and Rebecca into the game for more fun and hope it turned out more awesome killing just like resident evil in more manage and zombie act like solider rather than dumb one.
By the way, even though the harem already plan out, but i deep in love with haruka x keitaro pair. may be you can work out about Jill and Rebecca.
Have nice day and constant update.
8/14/2011 c4 HolyKnight5
Oddly, i can imagine that Keitaro's true origins, unknowingly to old Hina, and Haruka, are linked to Project Wesker. . .given that there were only 2 success to this project, it sounds reasonable that they wanted to bring a new crop, based from the DNA of the most successful one. .
. likely Keitaro's mother couldn't conceive with his husband, what married into the Urashima clan, so they asked from a "seminal bank" in order to have a healthy child. This would have ensured that Umbrella linked scientists could ensure that the birth of the test children would have gone on a deep secrecy. . .however, only 1 of the multiple attempts to create a second Generation Superhuman did bring fruit. . . Keitaro. However, he as a child lacked drive or the impulse to rise above his peers. . .so Wesker triggered an incident that it would push Keitaro into reaching its potential. . . the "test" of a licker . . that killed his mother and changed him into what it was the most fearsome of the BSAA specialists. . ..
BTW. . .why i feel that Josip NEVER returned back that Satellite Laser Designer? why i can see him and Kaolla
"upgrading" the system. . .
Oddly, i can imagine that Keitaro's true origins, unknowingly to old Hina, and Haruka, are linked to Project Wesker. . .given that there were only 2 success to this project, it sounds reasonable that they wanted to bring a new crop, based from the DNA of the most successful one. .
. likely Keitaro's mother couldn't conceive with his husband, what married into the Urashima clan, so they asked from a "seminal bank" in order to have a healthy child. This would have ensured that Umbrella linked scientists could ensure that the birth of the test children would have gone on a deep secrecy. . .however, only 1 of the multiple attempts to create a second Generation Superhuman did bring fruit. . . Keitaro. However, he as a child lacked drive or the impulse to rise above his peers. . .so Wesker triggered an incident that it would push Keitaro into reaching its potential. . . the "test" of a licker . . that killed his mother and changed him into what it was the most fearsome of the BSAA specialists. . ..
BTW. . .why i feel that Josip NEVER returned back that Satellite Laser Designer? why i can see him and Kaolla
"upgrading" the system. . .