for Never the End5/26/2011 c17 jensengirl4eva
Well now you got me crying (again). That was just wonderful. I can't get enough and will be waiting for your next update.
Well now you got me crying (again). That was just wonderful. I can't get enough and will be waiting for your next update.
5/26/2011 c17 Van Helvic
When you look for the word "perfection" in the dictionary, this story is what you see.
This is a beautiful masterpiece and it brought tears to my eyes.
~Serena
When you look for the word "perfection" in the dictionary, this story is what you see.
This is a beautiful masterpiece and it brought tears to my eyes.
~Serena
5/26/2011 c17 
4Jane88
Not just good - that was absolutely amazing! So beautiful, so emotional... and so true. Perfect moment you captured here. There were so many great phrases in there - here just one that I totally loved:
"L is for Love. The word I've said to all the people who've ever been second-most-important, because I know it makes them feel good. The word I've never said to the person who's always been my reason for living. Because he knows."
And I totally agree, don't think Dean could forgive Cas for bringing down the wall in Sams head... yeah, as a diversion... I still can't believe he did that.
The alphabet idea is great, really creative. Oh I just love the whole story, definitely one of my favourites!
4Jane88Not just good - that was absolutely amazing! So beautiful, so emotional... and so true. Perfect moment you captured here. There were so many great phrases in there - here just one that I totally loved:
"L is for Love. The word I've said to all the people who've ever been second-most-important, because I know it makes them feel good. The word I've never said to the person who's always been my reason for living. Because he knows."
And I totally agree, don't think Dean could forgive Cas for bringing down the wall in Sams head... yeah, as a diversion... I still can't believe he did that.
The alphabet idea is great, really creative. Oh I just love the whole story, definitely one of my favourites!
5/25/2011 c17 casammy
good? is the more beautiful that is the well-read one in days, today it was sad and very disappointed but after reading this chapter of his fic ... it has raised the spirit and I am that I feel much better
good? is the more beautiful that is the well-read one in days, today it was sad and very disappointed but after reading this chapter of his fic ... it has raised the spirit and I am that I feel much better
5/25/2011 c17 spinningroundandround
I read this story on my way to school, at 7:15. I haven't ha the chance to review, I was at a concert, till now. It's an excellent story, and anybody who can make Dean reading a storybook on the alphabet is someone who has the characters spot on. It wasn't OCC or anything weird like him being 'girly' or having a 'chick-flick moment'. Your Dean and Sammy are so perfect! Anyways an excellent Drabble that I can't wait to see the next in the series.
I read this story on my way to school, at 7:15. I haven't ha the chance to review, I was at a concert, till now. It's an excellent story, and anybody who can make Dean reading a storybook on the alphabet is someone who has the characters spot on. It wasn't OCC or anything weird like him being 'girly' or having a 'chick-flick moment'. Your Dean and Sammy are so perfect! Anyways an excellent Drabble that I can't wait to see the next in the series.
5/25/2011 c17 33Sparkiebunny
Wow. Hands down best chapter yet. I loved the creativity, the phrasing, the emotion, and how incredibly in-character every part was. You're an absolutely fantastic writer, and this chapter is just another flashing indication of that.
Fave lines:
"I is for Ignorance. The kind that's bliss. The kind that Sam had and I would've sold my soul all over again to keep him from losing." ...So true, and such a Dean thing to say.
"L is for Love. The word I've said to all the people who've ever been second-most-important, because I know it makes them feel good. The word I've never said to the person who's always been my reason for living. Because he knows." ...Said in a way only one who truly understands the Winchesters can understand. Beautiful.
Wonderful chapter, Jedi! Spectacular work! :)
33SparkiebunnyWow. Hands down best chapter yet. I loved the creativity, the phrasing, the emotion, and how incredibly in-character every part was. You're an absolutely fantastic writer, and this chapter is just another flashing indication of that.
Fave lines:
"I is for Ignorance. The kind that's bliss. The kind that Sam had and I would've sold my soul all over again to keep him from losing." ...So true, and such a Dean thing to say.
"L is for Love. The word I've said to all the people who've ever been second-most-important, because I know it makes them feel good. The word I've never said to the person who's always been my reason for living. Because he knows." ...Said in a way only one who truly understands the Winchesters can understand. Beautiful.
Wonderful chapter, Jedi! Spectacular work! :)
5/25/2011 c17 Kali1973
I actually felt like crying while I was reading this [but in a good way]. Definitely looking forward to reading more from you.
I actually felt like crying while I was reading this [but in a good way]. Definitely looking forward to reading more from you.
5/25/2011 c17 36cold kagome
LOVE IT! AWWWE .LOVE PROTECTIVE DEAN/... MAINLY THE ONE WHO DO ANYTHING FOR HIS SAMMY.. YAY
36cold kagomeLOVE IT! AWWWE .LOVE PROTECTIVE DEAN/... MAINLY THE ONE WHO DO ANYTHING FOR HIS SAMMY.. YAY
5/25/2011 c17 33Kailene
I've been following right along with these tags and just had to delurk and respond to this.
You raise a great point, one that I hadn't stopped to consider - forgiving Cas for proclaiming himself a God would be easy, given the fact that he was juiced up on Souls. But destroying Sammy's wall, while being in complete control of himself...as a deversion...unforgiveable...and I hope that Dean makes him pay!
The alphabet idea was brillant, you managed to make each letter something poignant and
You really only mentioned Sam a hand full of times and never in alot of detail, but his emotional distress and turmoil from the wall crashing came across loud and clear.
And Dean...awesome job! You nailed the angry, hurt, scared, protective big brother, and how all else stops when Sammy is hurt.
Great Job!
33KaileneI've been following right along with these tags and just had to delurk and respond to this.
You raise a great point, one that I hadn't stopped to consider - forgiving Cas for proclaiming himself a God would be easy, given the fact that he was juiced up on Souls. But destroying Sammy's wall, while being in complete control of himself...as a deversion...unforgiveable...and I hope that Dean makes him pay!
The alphabet idea was brillant, you managed to make each letter something poignant and
You really only mentioned Sam a hand full of times and never in alot of detail, but his emotional distress and turmoil from the wall crashing came across loud and clear.
And Dean...awesome job! You nailed the angry, hurt, scared, protective big brother, and how all else stops when Sammy is hurt.
Great Job!
5/25/2011 c17 39Our Eleventh Hour
Liked it. I also agree with you on the Ben and Lisa thing...well, more like the Lisa thing. A small part of me was hoping Ben would be allowed to tag along with Sam and Dean but...I was a bit shocked and mad when Dean had their memories wiped.
39Our Eleventh HourLiked it. I also agree with you on the Ben and Lisa thing...well, more like the Lisa thing. A small part of me was hoping Ben would be allowed to tag along with Sam and Dean but...I was a bit shocked and mad when Dean had their memories wiped.
5/25/2011 c17 SPN Mum
That was great! I like your version of the alphabet book. It really ** me off too, that Cas would make Sam's wall collapse, just to try and keep Dean and Bobby occupied. Sam is such a stud, to go thru all that he did, just because Dean needed him. Their connection has always made me smile.
Looking forward to your new stories. I can't wait to see what you do.
That was great! I like your version of the alphabet book. It really ** me off too, that Cas would make Sam's wall collapse, just to try and keep Dean and Bobby occupied. Sam is such a stud, to go thru all that he did, just because Dean needed him. Their connection has always made me smile.
Looking forward to your new stories. I can't wait to see what you do.
5/25/2011 c17 158Katy M VT
This was totally awesome. I loved the whole alphabet thing. I don't care how power Cas is, we all know Dean will find a way to make him pay.
158Katy M VTThis was totally awesome. I loved the whole alphabet thing. I don't care how power Cas is, we all know Dean will find a way to make him pay.
5/25/2011 c17 93The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien
Excellent chapter.
And, yeah.Cas is in for 10,000 levels of hurt when this is all over.
93The Lilac Elf of LothlorienExcellent chapter.
And, yeah.Cas is in for 10,000 levels of hurt when this is all over.