for Knight Of The Wastes4/14 c2 Lone Wanderer
At first when I saw the story I thought there was no way to make an interesting cross over fic for these two games, you completely proved me wrong. I hope you update soon I can't wait for you to continue on with the story and unfold your plan for Alistair and Hope! :)
At first when I saw the story I thought there was no way to make an interesting cross over fic for these two games, you completely proved me wrong. I hope you update soon I can't wait for you to continue on with the story and unfold your plan for Alistair and Hope! :)
8/20/2011 c2 unbroken wing
I love it, I never thought it would be a good crossover but I find myself really wanting to see were you'll take this since it's still fairly early in the fallout timeline, though I do wonder what will happen with on one grey warden in ferelden in Alistar is with Hope? O well one character wont be missed to badly as long as flemeth still rescues the player character
I love it, I never thought it would be a good crossover but I find myself really wanting to see were you'll take this since it's still fairly early in the fallout timeline, though I do wonder what will happen with on one grey warden in ferelden in Alistar is with Hope? O well one character wont be missed to badly as long as flemeth still rescues the player character
4/28/2011 c2 
1IceYousha
I was just checkin for something to read while bored in class and then I found this...and I was like "wtf? how can these two games mix togheter?" but I'm really liking your story so far, I'd love to read more from it^^
1IceYoushaI was just checkin for something to read while bored in class and then I found this...and I was like "wtf? how can these two games mix togheter?" but I'm really liking your story so far, I'd love to read more from it^^
11/21/2010 c2 10ffdrake
Not a bad start, and not too many grammar errors that i could find in the story. One thing i would suggest though, would be to break up your paragraphs some. With so many words close together, it is had to read and keep your place. Other than that though, i have to say i like the premise of this story. I am not usually a huge Alistair fan, but i am looking forward to how you work him into the harsh waste lands. Anyway, keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter.
10ffdrakeNot a bad start, and not too many grammar errors that i could find in the story. One thing i would suggest though, would be to break up your paragraphs some. With so many words close together, it is had to read and keep your place. Other than that though, i have to say i like the premise of this story. I am not usually a huge Alistair fan, but i am looking forward to how you work him into the harsh waste lands. Anyway, keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapter.
10/26/2010 c2 11Kaimaler
Ah, it makes sense that Alistair's body will have trouble adjusting to the sudden and brand new pollution; radiation. He should rightfully be ill for some time.
I'm just interested in how our favorite Lone Wanderer solves this supernatural predicament.
Oh yes, sorry I never reviewed when I first set this story on my alerts; I was actually on someone elses computer. I wasn't supposed to be reading Fic's. ;)
I like how this is written, there are some minor misspellings and a few typos. I have a professional Office Word system for work, if you want I can unleash it's uncanny ability to correct any misspelled words or incorrect sentences.
I use it all the time and my readers just think I'm good at fixing chapters.
11KaimalerAh, it makes sense that Alistair's body will have trouble adjusting to the sudden and brand new pollution; radiation. He should rightfully be ill for some time.
I'm just interested in how our favorite Lone Wanderer solves this supernatural predicament.
Oh yes, sorry I never reviewed when I first set this story on my alerts; I was actually on someone elses computer. I wasn't supposed to be reading Fic's. ;)
I like how this is written, there are some minor misspellings and a few typos. I have a professional Office Word system for work, if you want I can unleash it's uncanny ability to correct any misspelled words or incorrect sentences.
I use it all the time and my readers just think I'm good at fixing chapters.
10/26/2010 c2 Anonymous Wanderer
I was really curious to read this story, but your paragraph length is so long it makes it difficult to read through. Always remember - a new idea means a new paragraph. Better they be too short than too long in many respects.
Very interesting idea though!
I was really curious to read this story, but your paragraph length is so long it makes it difficult to read through. Always remember - a new idea means a new paragraph. Better they be too short than too long in many respects.
Very interesting idea though!
10/20/2010 c2 FanFictionReader
This story is awesome so far. I really like the interaction between Alistair and the Vault dweller. He is so sweet :) Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of your story.!
This story is awesome so far. I really like the interaction between Alistair and the Vault dweller. He is so sweet :) Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of your story.!
10/2/2010 c1 dash.kiwi
The description seems interesting.. There are some grammatical and spelling issues.
The description seems interesting.. There are some grammatical and spelling issues.