for Fumetsu7/11/2011 c2 Weasel Fu
I really like the idea of this crossover. I assume that the black organization is after Noah? I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
I really like the idea of this crossover. I assume that the black organization is after Noah? I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
4/20/2011 c2 Haruna Pan
Interesting way to start things, I must say it got me curious and a little excited so I'll be looking forward to reading more of this story. Arigato, Ja...
Interesting way to start things, I must say it got me curious and a little excited so I'll be looking forward to reading more of this story. Arigato, Ja...
4/18/2011 c2 
7SiZodiac
very good, very good! i can't wait for more! and you show them kaiba, show the dark organization that they can't just boss everyone around as they pleased.
7SiZodiacvery good, very good! i can't wait for more! and you show them kaiba, show the dark organization that they can't just boss everyone around as they pleased.
1/4/2011 c1 staidwaters
okay, I want more. I really, really really want MORE! Please. Pretty please with powdered sugar and raspberries on top? I saw the summary for this and went "YES!", read the first chapter and squealed with glee, and am now eagerly awaiting more. Because seriously, I can't imagine anything more awesome than the Kaibas and Conan. Talk about braincases with secrets to hide! It doesn't matter whether either of them actually figure anything out, or even if they get suspicious...they're going to have to be so cautious...or if they're not, it'll be hilarious to watch them not noticing things about each other because hey, these are all folks who live by occam's razor, and shrinking detectives and shadow magic do NOT fit Occam's Razor by any definition. Although I'm sure they'll be smart enough to believe if they see even the slightest amount of proof...
Anyhow, awesome idea, I hope you play with it some more.
okay, I want more. I really, really really want MORE! Please. Pretty please with powdered sugar and raspberries on top? I saw the summary for this and went "YES!", read the first chapter and squealed with glee, and am now eagerly awaiting more. Because seriously, I can't imagine anything more awesome than the Kaibas and Conan. Talk about braincases with secrets to hide! It doesn't matter whether either of them actually figure anything out, or even if they get suspicious...they're going to have to be so cautious...or if they're not, it'll be hilarious to watch them not noticing things about each other because hey, these are all folks who live by occam's razor, and shrinking detectives and shadow magic do NOT fit Occam's Razor by any definition. Although I'm sure they'll be smart enough to believe if they see even the slightest amount of proof...
Anyhow, awesome idea, I hope you play with it some more.
12/20/2010 c1 12RandomImagination
Ooh, shiny.
In all seriousness, this looks like it will be very, very interesting. The characters are right, there are some amusing tidbits like Shinichi's reaction to the bodyguards, and Kaiba's dialogue with Vermouth. And just Vermouth (is vaguely worried I'll look a bit stupid if I remind you that Vermouth isn't going to kill Shinichi, Ran, or anyone they're protecting, but is saying it anyway).
Now if only you'd updated in the past two months!
12RandomImaginationOoh, shiny.
In all seriousness, this looks like it will be very, very interesting. The characters are right, there are some amusing tidbits like Shinichi's reaction to the bodyguards, and Kaiba's dialogue with Vermouth. And just Vermouth (is vaguely worried I'll look a bit stupid if I remind you that Vermouth isn't going to kill Shinichi, Ran, or anyone they're protecting, but is saying it anyway).
Now if only you'd updated in the past two months!
12/8/2010 c1 20fakescorpion
This is sooo exciting! And it's only the first chapter!
Looks like Kaiba's in some really serious sh*t, getting involved with the Black Organization. But then again, none of the organizations that had previously try taking over KC were anywhere near small...it actually wasn't much of a surprise the Black Organization be interested in KC in a Detective Conan/Yugioh crossover (after all, they HAVE been recruiting talented people like Kaiba...AND in designing GAMES no less! What a coincidence!)
Wonder if the rest of the YGO gang be involved?
Anyway, great work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. This is just so exciting!
20fakescorpionThis is sooo exciting! And it's only the first chapter!
Looks like Kaiba's in some really serious sh*t, getting involved with the Black Organization. But then again, none of the organizations that had previously try taking over KC were anywhere near small...it actually wasn't much of a surprise the Black Organization be interested in KC in a Detective Conan/Yugioh crossover (after all, they HAVE been recruiting talented people like Kaiba...AND in designing GAMES no less! What a coincidence!)
Wonder if the rest of the YGO gang be involved?
Anyway, great work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. This is just so exciting!
11/17/2010 c1 14princess-kally
This... Is good. Very good, even though I've only seen a chapter of this. You've characterized the Kaiba brothers well(and you haven't added pointless romances as is common in fanfiction)
The idea/plot is also very good, as it is actually viable. Oh the plot bunnies that spring to mind, xD
I quite liked Conan's reaction to the men in black.
Anyways, good luck with your story.
14princess-kallyThis... Is good. Very good, even though I've only seen a chapter of this. You've characterized the Kaiba brothers well(and you haven't added pointless romances as is common in fanfiction)
The idea/plot is also very good, as it is actually viable. Oh the plot bunnies that spring to mind, xD
I quite liked Conan's reaction to the men in black.
Anyways, good luck with your story.
11/14/2010 c1 The 214th Rabid Fangirl
This story is definatly worth contiouing so pleaase oh pretty please do.
This story is definatly worth contiouing so pleaase oh pretty please do.
10/9/2010 c1 85Asuka Kureru
oho. This is a very intriguing beginning, I wonder how you'll continue from here. Anyway I enjoyed Mokuba's appearance and Conan's reaction to his team of bodyguards. And ooh, the potential of this plot.
85Asuka Kureruoho. This is a very intriguing beginning, I wonder how you'll continue from here. Anyway I enjoyed Mokuba's appearance and Conan's reaction to his team of bodyguards. And ooh, the potential of this plot.
10/5/2010 c1 11YumeTakato
Well. I'm thoroughly interested and amused. Please continue soon? See you next time!
11YumeTakatoWell. I'm thoroughly interested and amused. Please continue soon? See you next time!
10/3/2010 c1 1crayontesla
I'm not sure if I should be happy because this looks good or scream at you about triplets and sleepovers. So the answer is I am willing to give you a cookie but once my hands are free I am going for th retractable pitchfork and button light torch strapped to my back... patent pending only 49.99 perfect for mobs of all sizes willing to give bulk discounts.
1crayonteslaI'm not sure if I should be happy because this looks good or scream at you about triplets and sleepovers. So the answer is I am willing to give you a cookie but once my hands are free I am going for th retractable pitchfork and button light torch strapped to my back... patent pending only 49.99 perfect for mobs of all sizes willing to give bulk discounts.
10/3/2010 c1 86LeonaWriter
*Meeps as it pointed at* I deny nothing!
And I am very pleased with what you've got here so far. And wanting to see more. Excited at how you've got the Kaiba brothers down so well. How Vermouth gets him right first time - he certainly is a dragon, and one with a big bite, at that.
86LeonaWriter*Meeps as it pointed at* I deny nothing!
And I am very pleased with what you've got here so far. And wanting to see more. Excited at how you've got the Kaiba brothers down so well. How Vermouth gets him right first time - he certainly is a dragon, and one with a big bite, at that.