for Someday6/7 c40 Vicki-Jasper-Whitlock
I cannot begin to explain my love for this amazing story. You should know I spent 3 days straight reading all 40chapters. Boy was it worth it. The crazy dreams I had too (mainly when I stopped at a cliffhanger). Thank you so much :)
I cannot begin to explain my love for this amazing story. You should know I spent 3 days straight reading all 40chapters. Boy was it worth it. The crazy dreams I had too (mainly when I stopped at a cliffhanger). Thank you so much :)
5/23 c40 jjkostenko
Unbelievably outstanding! I could not walk away, read from beginning to end in one sitting! The way you described each character and all their flaws was amazing. Delving into individual inner conflict and turmoil was rivoting. Truly amazing, thank you!
Unbelievably outstanding! I could not walk away, read from beginning to end in one sitting! The way you described each character and all their flaws was amazing. Delving into individual inner conflict and turmoil was rivoting. Truly amazing, thank you!
5/1 c40 
6AnaMarieWest
This story was so good! You're such an amazing writer. I need to know: you told us about Carlisle and Esme, but I need to know about Jas and Isabella! Can you give me a peak inside your head and tell me what you see for them after that bomb Jasper dropped?
6AnaMarieWestThis story was so good! You're such an amazing writer. I need to know: you told us about Carlisle and Esme, but I need to know about Jas and Isabella! Can you give me a peak inside your head and tell me what you see for them after that bomb Jasper dropped?
3/14 c1 1Ivorygirl1990
Interesting first chapter. The way you portray these characters makes them sound like they stepped off the Dr. Phil show. They are a mess! It sure makes for a fascinating start to a story!
1Ivorygirl1990Interesting first chapter. The way you portray these characters makes them sound like they stepped off the Dr. Phil show. They are a mess! It sure makes for a fascinating start to a story!
3/6 c1 3CatchingMyBreath
I think you could make a fabulous sequel to this story. With Bella dealing with the news that Jasper kept his promise and her son was safe, maybe have Ethan find his mate or the volturi stopping? Also you could do like a sidequel, show what happened with Esme and Carlisle after that night, Esme feeding off a human etc.
3CatchingMyBreathI think you could make a fabulous sequel to this story. With Bella dealing with the news that Jasper kept his promise and her son was safe, maybe have Ethan find his mate or the volturi stopping? Also you could do like a sidequel, show what happened with Esme and Carlisle after that night, Esme feeding off a human etc.
2/16 c40 3Bell 1
Uh...
That's it!?
It feels like it ended on a cliffhanger. :(
Good story (with a slightly open ending)... I see how the Rosalie thing tied in. I get why Alice did what she did. I agree and disagree with Jasper not killing Alice right away. I figured the reason Jasper didn't change Bella was due to the Volturi, so it was nice to see that confirmed. I think Alice got out easy when Emmett had to suffer. I think Rosalie suffered long enough, BUT I think she caused her life to end as it did. She made more selfish choices than Emmett. At least he did it to protect her, should the Volturi ever get involved. I hate that Jasper ended Emmett as he was asked, BUT I also hate knowing that Emmett was killed by him. :( Alice and Edward were evil for all they did. Edward was ended quickly and mostly I think Alice should have been too.
I'm glad Lysen had a long, happy life, BUT I wish he would have been able to carry on the bloodline. Although, I get why it sort of needed to end that way... it took the burden off Jasper's shoulders. However, I wish you had continued the story after he gave Bella the file. I would have liked to learn Bella's reactions and what it finally took for her to forgive him... would it be quick? Would it have taken years? What would Bella have done as a matured vampire? How long would she suffer, and thereby, make Jasper suffer? What would it have finally taken for them to get back to "happy"?
Thank you for sharing your story, even if it ended on what I think of as a cliffhanger. ;)
3Bell 1Uh...
That's it!?
It feels like it ended on a cliffhanger. :(
Good story (with a slightly open ending)... I see how the Rosalie thing tied in. I get why Alice did what she did. I agree and disagree with Jasper not killing Alice right away. I figured the reason Jasper didn't change Bella was due to the Volturi, so it was nice to see that confirmed. I think Alice got out easy when Emmett had to suffer. I think Rosalie suffered long enough, BUT I think she caused her life to end as it did. She made more selfish choices than Emmett. At least he did it to protect her, should the Volturi ever get involved. I hate that Jasper ended Emmett as he was asked, BUT I also hate knowing that Emmett was killed by him. :( Alice and Edward were evil for all they did. Edward was ended quickly and mostly I think Alice should have been too.
I'm glad Lysen had a long, happy life, BUT I wish he would have been able to carry on the bloodline. Although, I get why it sort of needed to end that way... it took the burden off Jasper's shoulders. However, I wish you had continued the story after he gave Bella the file. I would have liked to learn Bella's reactions and what it finally took for her to forgive him... would it be quick? Would it have taken years? What would Bella have done as a matured vampire? How long would she suffer, and thereby, make Jasper suffer? What would it have finally taken for them to get back to "happy"?
Thank you for sharing your story, even if it ended on what I think of as a cliffhanger. ;)
2/15 c40 1bpj1989
This story is of the best fan fics Iv'e read with this pairing. I hope to read more from you!
1bpj1989This story is of the best fan fics Iv'e read with this pairing. I hope to read more from you!
2/14 c25 3Bell 1
That was AWFUL! *sniffs*
There HAD to be another way! :'(
Why did Emmett have to do that to him?
Why did he actually give in to Emmett?
I have never read a story where Emmett died like this and because he cared about his own family.
I am just so overwhelmingly sad right now. :(
*sniffling*
3Bell 1That was AWFUL! *sniffs*
There HAD to be another way! :'(
Why did Emmett have to do that to him?
Why did he actually give in to Emmett?
I have never read a story where Emmett died like this and because he cared about his own family.
I am just so overwhelmingly sad right now. :(
*sniffling*
1/20 c13 AngelAH28
Oh my god! First of all I want to say that even though I've only read 13 chapters of this story I want you to know that this beautiful. This has to be THE best Fanfiction I have ever read in all of my existence. This chapter in particular has touched me. The one part that I absolutely love about this chapter is the part when Jasper finally realizes that Isabella is his mate. There's a reason why I love that part. It not because Jasper comes to terms that Isabella is his mate because that can happen in any story. I love that part because of the way you worded the way Jasper was kind of talking to himself like he was truly a contradiction. It was rhythmic but not in the rhyming wayand I felt like I was reading a poem. And not any other poem. Those words made feel like I could feel Jaspers' emotions.
Oh my god! First of all I want to say that even though I've only read 13 chapters of this story I want you to know that this beautiful. This has to be THE best Fanfiction I have ever read in all of my existence. This chapter in particular has touched me. The one part that I absolutely love about this chapter is the part when Jasper finally realizes that Isabella is his mate. There's a reason why I love that part. It not because Jasper comes to terms that Isabella is his mate because that can happen in any story. I love that part because of the way you worded the way Jasper was kind of talking to himself like he was truly a contradiction. It was rhythmic but not in the rhyming wayand I felt like I was reading a poem. And not any other poem. Those words made feel like I could feel Jaspers' emotions.
12/23/2012 c40 Ihalotsakittehs
Sad miserable tale with no happy ending as the chances of Bella forgiving him are next to nothing.
Sad miserable tale with no happy ending as the chances of Bella forgiving him are next to nothing.
12/18/2012 c1 JinxNightshade
you have to be joking! you took my lemons down?! noooo! but i completley understand why. *sigh*
stupid fanfiction: if its M its M for a REASON!
you have to be joking! you took my lemons down?! noooo! but i completley understand why. *sigh*
stupid fanfiction: if its M its M for a REASON!
11/24/2012 c40 paalme
You are so talented, I love what you did with the characters. You made it completely your own and it was such a powerful story.
You are so talented, I love what you did with the characters. You made it completely your own and it was such a powerful story.