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5/12 c38 Big Fan
Hope everything is going ok for you. Please update this great story soon!
5/6 c38 shadow-red0
love the story its rather amazing that u have made ur own story toook FOOREVER to get outa cannon lol but now ur in ur own ground i am curious if naruto will try to adopt the little twi'lik its 2 much like his own past ... or that of sasuke... and i was kinda wondering if u would make naruto a kage .. if he needs to know strats or info on diplomacy u could have the later be pre learned from his time in kohana he was a jounin when he left..so he coulda learned it as for the former... he can make 10k clones learn all he needs to know in like 4 days.. it has been show when naruto goes out he can make thousands...also will naruto come into contact with the toads again is it possible mabe in sage mode... cause it could be just distance... the jutsu itself is a dimentional teqnique and one that if enough energy is put into it is possible to work... and on another note it is said and known that he takes energy from around him to use sage mode... could he have force users pump him full of force when he is chargeing up that it would make his midiclorion count shoot through the roof o.0 just several thoughts
5/2 c38 jvdb96
Sweet baby Jesus I love this story, can't wait for more updates!
4/29 c38 Big fan
Just wandering when you will updating this great story. Please do so soon if at all possible!
4/26 c38 Arael Tenebris
Heh. The rat and dragon comparison is rather apt...
4/25 c38 LordXeenTheGreat
Awesome Chapter...Love the effect
4/25 c36 LordXeenTheGreat
Friends are made
4/25 c35 LordXeenTheGreat
Love the plan..just wing it
4/25 c34 LordXeenTheGreat
Nice talk
4/25 c33 LordXeenTheGreat
WOW...Poor Aayla
4/25 c32 LordXeenTheGreat
Freak'n awesome chapter!
4/25 c31 LordXeenTheGreat
Evil cliffy!
4/25 c30 LordXeenTheGreat
Nice cliffy!
4/25 c29 LordXeenTheGreat
Excellent chapter!
4/25 c28 LordXeenTheGreat
Awesome Battle!
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