for The Good Left Undone7/24/2011 c11 Naginator
Nice hope he can save morne and wonder where they'll go from here? Maybe to yoda or shakk ti
Nice hope he can save morne and wonder where they'll go from here? Maybe to yoda or shakk ti
7/23/2011 c11
1volrath77
Heh. Totally anticipated. Well, almost. I thought that Karness would've gotten himself eaten by 9-Tails. That would've made it even more satisfying.
That said, I think the fox should have all of it's chakra & power back. I mean, seriously, golden colored Naruto? It's totally boring. I mean **, who would people crap their pants and run away with their tails between their ears from? A golden-colored human (meh...) or a totally "OhShit It's F***ing Gigantic!" 9-tailed demon fox pouring out equally ginormous levels of "OhShit It's Crazy Corrosive!" demonic chakra out of every pore on its body?
(Jinchuuriki transformation just like Bee, *nudge nudge*)
1volrath77Heh. Totally anticipated. Well, almost. I thought that Karness would've gotten himself eaten by 9-Tails. That would've made it even more satisfying.
That said, I think the fox should have all of it's chakra & power back. I mean, seriously, golden colored Naruto? It's totally boring. I mean **, who would people crap their pants and run away with their tails between their ears from? A golden-colored human (meh...) or a totally "OhShit It's F***ing Gigantic!" 9-tailed demon fox pouring out equally ginormous levels of "OhShit It's Crazy Corrosive!" demonic chakra out of every pore on its body?
(Jinchuuriki transformation just like Bee, *nudge nudge*)
7/23/2011 c11 SeanHicks4
Well that went better than I thought sense Aayla wasn't one of the Characters I knew a lot about. I tended to follow the generation after Han, Leia, and Luke. The flashbacks to him having but lost Hinata where interesting, I've read few stories like that (usually harems) where he falls for a new girl(s) as he mourns Hinata. Me liking that though might just be because I tend to favor Naru/Hina stories. I was kinda excited to see how you delt with the sith gohst trying to posses Naruto, but it seems like my chant of "Kyubi's gonna eat him/it" was fer nothin.
Well that went better than I thought sense Aayla wasn't one of the Characters I knew a lot about. I tended to follow the generation after Han, Leia, and Luke. The flashbacks to him having but lost Hinata where interesting, I've read few stories like that (usually harems) where he falls for a new girl(s) as he mourns Hinata. Me liking that though might just be because I tend to favor Naru/Hina stories. I was kinda excited to see how you delt with the sith gohst trying to posses Naruto, but it seems like my chant of "Kyubi's gonna eat him/it" was fer nothin.
7/23/2011 c11
5exillion
I'm actually impressed that you managed to wait around until updating. And furthermore, you managed to use the darkside of Naruto in his mind, which is a pretty impressive idea.
As for your story, it's pretty good so far so keep it up. hmm I do wonder what your current plans for naruto in the future chapter. Certainly it's not something with naruto lives happily ever after.
Keep it up and good luck.
5exillionI'm actually impressed that you managed to wait around until updating. And furthermore, you managed to use the darkside of Naruto in his mind, which is a pretty impressive idea.
As for your story, it's pretty good so far so keep it up. hmm I do wonder what your current plans for naruto in the future chapter. Certainly it's not something with naruto lives happily ever after.
Keep it up and good luck.
7/23/2011 c11
1holyhastes
And three cheer for inuboy86 the joy of my existance.
yay. new champter. short but apreciated.
niow work on the next one.
1holyhastesAnd three cheer for inuboy86 the joy of my existance.
yay. new champter. short but apreciated.
niow work on the next one.
7/23/2011 c11
9pokemaster12
Yay! finally! god damn do you know how long I've been waiting for this chapter? It was pretty good, I enjoyed seeing what you can do. Anyways, look forward to more chapters, I hope they come out soon.
9pokemaster12Yay! finally! god damn do you know how long I've been waiting for this chapter? It was pretty good, I enjoyed seeing what you can do. Anyways, look forward to more chapters, I hope they come out soon.
7/23/2011 c11
4inuboy86
FINALLY AN UPDATE AND A GOOD ONE TOO, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE AND SORRY FOR BEING THE BANE OF YOUR EXISTENCE BUT I JUST LIKE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
4inuboy86FINALLY AN UPDATE AND A GOOD ONE TOO, CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE AND SORRY FOR BEING THE BANE OF YOUR EXISTENCE BUT I JUST LIKE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
7/23/2011 c11 Daeshar
Hello !
I started reading this fic three days ago and i love it.
I enjoyed this very much so:
Keep the good work and Good luck.
Thx for this.
Hello !
I started reading this fic three days ago and i love it.
I enjoyed this very much so:
Keep the good work and Good luck.
Thx for this.
7/23/2011 c11
3naruhina-namikaze
well, thats a way to get around the whole insanity thing. haha.
Good update, looking forward to seeing what you have in store next time.
3naruhina-namikazewell, thats a way to get around the whole insanity thing. haha.
Good update, looking forward to seeing what you have in store next time.
