for The Good Left Undone8/2/2011 c12 Tutenstein
Naruto's an idiot. He has not mourned the passing of his loved ones and has bottled up all those feelings like when he was younger. Its going to come back to bite him in the ** later.
And, now, Sasuke's in that universe as well? It would've been nice if it was just Naruto as it made him special and unique.
Naruto's an idiot. He has not mourned the passing of his loved ones and has bottled up all those feelings like when he was younger. Its going to come back to bite him in the ** later.
And, now, Sasuke's in that universe as well? It would've been nice if it was just Naruto as it made him special and unique.
8/2/2011 c12 Sinewyk
Well, Sasuke is here, and problem is : he's a lot more dangerous than Naruto in this world with his mindset ... And we still don't know what his Eternal MS is going to be ... But yeah, in a straight fight Naruto anything. The problem is : is Naruto still a sucker for genjutsu ? or is he capable of working with the kyuubi to break any genjutsu like the hachibi ?
That will be an epic quest of revenge around the galaxy ... Really awesome. What I find strange, is that I actually want Sasuke to redeem himself in this universe ... because he actually can. He lost everything too. It would be weird for him to need to control the galaxy. I could see him as a bounty hunter or just founding a family trying to stay at peace, Naruto coming in and finding that it's not the same Sasuke ...
Anyway, your fic canon. Keep on.
Well, Sasuke is here, and problem is : he's a lot more dangerous than Naruto in this world with his mindset ... And we still don't know what his Eternal MS is going to be ... But yeah, in a straight fight Naruto anything. The problem is : is Naruto still a sucker for genjutsu ? or is he capable of working with the kyuubi to break any genjutsu like the hachibi ?
That will be an epic quest of revenge around the galaxy ... Really awesome. What I find strange, is that I actually want Sasuke to redeem himself in this universe ... because he actually can. He lost everything too. It would be weird for him to need to control the galaxy. I could see him as a bounty hunter or just founding a family trying to stay at peace, Naruto coming in and finding that it's not the same Sasuke ...
Anyway, your fic canon. Keep on.
8/2/2011 c12 
1Hissori Dangan
Good chapter. Though I'm kinda iffy in having SasUke in the Star Wars galaxy. It makes Naruto lose that special appearance that he can do stuff no one in the Star Wars galaxy can. I mean I can see it already either Sasuke works with the Sith or he works alone. Then he attacks Naruto and end up losing until he uses Naruto's only weakness which is Aayla. Which ends up enraging Naruto to use the Kyuubi's youki. Anyway I'll still read this and I'm not saying it's a bad story I'm just giving my honest opinion about putting Sasuke into the mix. Also would love to see Naruto and Aayla slowly getting closer and closer.
1Hissori DanganGood chapter. Though I'm kinda iffy in having SasUke in the Star Wars galaxy. It makes Naruto lose that special appearance that he can do stuff no one in the Star Wars galaxy can. I mean I can see it already either Sasuke works with the Sith or he works alone. Then he attacks Naruto and end up losing until he uses Naruto's only weakness which is Aayla. Which ends up enraging Naruto to use the Kyuubi's youki. Anyway I'll still read this and I'm not saying it's a bad story I'm just giving my honest opinion about putting Sasuke into the mix. Also would love to see Naruto and Aayla slowly getting closer and closer.
8/2/2011 c12 6Skelo
interesting update. Please let naruto do his falls of truth training soon on yoda's swamp planet. I want that op golden foxfire form!
6Skelointeresting update. Please let naruto do his falls of truth training soon on yoda's swamp planet. I want that op golden foxfire form!
8/1/2011 c12 2TsknRaider
Hmmm, Sasuke... A little cliche, but welcome. Curious to see if he ends up being good or bad.
2TsknRaiderHmmm, Sasuke... A little cliche, but welcome. Curious to see if he ends up being good or bad.
8/1/2011 c12 1Goldrune09
Great chapter, sucks that sasuke is back...you still didn't explain HOW naruto broke a simulator either.
1Goldrune09Great chapter, sucks that sasuke is back...you still didn't explain HOW naruto broke a simulator either.
8/1/2011 c12 firelordeg
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
8/1/2011 c12 1Vallavarayan
so, sasuke is there?
if he IS the one to have killed hinata, please have naruto kill him the first time he sees him.
1Vallavarayanso, sasuke is there?
if he IS the one to have killed hinata, please have naruto kill him the first time he sees him.
8/1/2011 c12 SergeantMeow
Tch...throwing in an Uchiha? The concept of a lone-traveler crossover loses a lot of its impact once you start adding in other characters from the origin universe. Makes it much less special that Character A (Naruto) is there, as well as completely kills the culture shock (that lovely feeling of awe the characters get from seeing the abilities of a character from another universe), since Character A's techniques and abilities are no longer a unique occurrence. All of the dark plottings and comments from the Sith about there being a "great disturbance" in the Force lose their impact as now "there is another" that will obviously be felt, which will present similar opportunities of tempting Character A without having to actually tempt Character A, because now Character B is there. It makes the whole thing ring as less then a genuine crossover, and more of a rehashing of Character A and B's conflict just in a different setting. Overall, I think the inclusionof another character from the origin universe has a weakening effect on the novelty of a crossover. Kind of seems like this is a big point in the plot because now Naruto has a chance at revenge for the loss of his...love...but that just seems a bit unnecessary. It was a nice character trait that Naruto has an unresolved sticking point in his past that he was struggling to get over. It added depth.
But we'll see where you go with it. I did like the chapter even if not too much happened really, I'm just a mite concerned about a few aspects.
Tch...throwing in an Uchiha? The concept of a lone-traveler crossover loses a lot of its impact once you start adding in other characters from the origin universe. Makes it much less special that Character A (Naruto) is there, as well as completely kills the culture shock (that lovely feeling of awe the characters get from seeing the abilities of a character from another universe), since Character A's techniques and abilities are no longer a unique occurrence. All of the dark plottings and comments from the Sith about there being a "great disturbance" in the Force lose their impact as now "there is another" that will obviously be felt, which will present similar opportunities of tempting Character A without having to actually tempt Character A, because now Character B is there. It makes the whole thing ring as less then a genuine crossover, and more of a rehashing of Character A and B's conflict just in a different setting. Overall, I think the inclusionof another character from the origin universe has a weakening effect on the novelty of a crossover. Kind of seems like this is a big point in the plot because now Naruto has a chance at revenge for the loss of his...love...but that just seems a bit unnecessary. It was a nice character trait that Naruto has an unresolved sticking point in his past that he was struggling to get over. It added depth.
But we'll see where you go with it. I did like the chapter even if not too much happened really, I'm just a mite concerned about a few aspects.
8/1/2011 c12 Aerowind Kinomoto
Nice play. Reintroduce Sasuke to give Naruto someone to hate and push morality to the limit. Up until now, Aayla's only seen his nice fluffy side. It'll be fun to see her reaction to boiling, possibly Kyuubi-induced, rage.
Nice play. Reintroduce Sasuke to give Naruto someone to hate and push morality to the limit. Up until now, Aayla's only seen his nice fluffy side. It'll be fun to see her reaction to boiling, possibly Kyuubi-induced, rage.