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5LoveHotch-CM
Hey I actually like the team as family fics since they actually call themselves a family in one of the episodes.
5LoveHotch-CMHey I actually like the team as family fics since they actually call themselves a family in one of the episodes.
10/29/2012 c3 5TheLuna
I'm sorry for reviewing twice, but I just have to say that the tense change made me want to hug you.
It's my biggest pet peeve and for some reason it happens a whole lot in criminal minds fics.
5TheLunaI'm sorry for reviewing twice, but I just have to say that the tense change made me want to hug you.
It's my biggest pet peeve and for some reason it happens a whole lot in criminal minds fics.
10/29/2012 c1 TheLuna
omfg I laughed out loud (literally) like ten times. So **ing brilliant omg. Esp with the way everyone is given a nickname, and Morgan punching holes in the wall. I read like 50 criminal minds fanfics right before reading this one, and I am so sick of some of these things.
Also this line:
"The highly intelligent man thought back to the case files, and everything they knew: the unsub lured his victims into his house and then proceeded to repeatedly rape and torture them. "Okay," he agreed. "I'll come into your house."" is **ing gold.
omfg I laughed out loud (literally) like ten times. So **ing brilliant omg. Esp with the way everyone is given a nickname, and Morgan punching holes in the wall. I read like 50 criminal minds fanfics right before reading this one, and I am so sick of some of these things.
Also this line:
"The highly intelligent man thought back to the case files, and everything they knew: the unsub lured his victims into his house and then proceeded to repeatedly rape and torture them. "Okay," he agreed. "I'll come into your house."" is **ing gold.
11/30/2011 c3 15lizzabet
Haha.. I loved this one and I recognize them! But not in mine. Maybe I was guilty of one of them, I think, maybe two:P
15lizzabetHaha.. I loved this one and I recognize them! But not in mine. Maybe I was guilty of one of them, I think, maybe two:P
11/3/2011 c1 I-AIN'T-GONNA-TELL-YOU-MY-NAME
Who doesn't want Spencer raped?
...
That sounds way more sick then I wanted it to.
Who doesn't want Spencer raped?
...
That sounds way more sick then I wanted it to.
9/10/2011 c3 9BrightlyShining
This was hilarious!
And it's so great to know I'm not the only one who gets confused when reading a story where the only time JJ talks is to mention how she calls Reid 'Spence'. :)
9BrightlyShiningThis was hilarious!
And it's so great to know I'm not the only one who gets confused when reading a story where the only time JJ talks is to mention how she calls Reid 'Spence'. :)
8/16/2011 c3 10Bonkers4Reid
Aw man! I should have put this on alert! I didn't even know you'd continued this! grrrr
Loved this chapter as well! Hilarious parody, great job! :)
10Bonkers4ReidAw man! I should have put this on alert! I didn't even know you'd continued this! grrrr
Loved this chapter as well! Hilarious parody, great job! :)
4/10/2011 c3 10Pages of Yellow
The best and worst part about this, is all the cliches you add are completely true.
I also want to commend you for making something that's well written, and still really funny.
Thank you for totally making my night with this hilariousness. : D
10Pages of YellowThe best and worst part about this, is all the cliches you add are completely true.
I also want to commend you for making something that's well written, and still really funny.
Thank you for totally making my night with this hilariousness. : D
3/23/2011 c3 4BellaCortez
Ok funny, but let me stop all the mocking before I do something like this and have you pointing it out to me xD
Bella
4BellaCortezOk funny, but let me stop all the mocking before I do something like this and have you pointing it out to me xD
Bella
3/23/2011 c1 BellaCortez
Holy MooMoo! hahahah! I can't stop laughing. OMG! I may have lost 20 IQ points reading this, but it totally made my day! xD
Love how all of them show signs of bipolar disease.
1) They are ok.
2) They are in hysterics.
3) They are all sobbing like a big, depressed family
Is Hotch on Viagra or something? xD
How on earth is Emily still walking straight?
This was funny. Off to read chapter 2
Holy MooMoo! hahahah! I can't stop laughing. OMG! I may have lost 20 IQ points reading this, but it totally made my day! xD
Love how all of them show signs of bipolar disease.
1) They are ok.
2) They are in hysterics.
3) They are all sobbing like a big, depressed family
Is Hotch on Viagra or something? xD
How on earth is Emily still walking straight?
This was funny. Off to read chapter 2
2/26/2011 c2 BurnishTomatoes
3 that's all there is to type.
Also, how can I possibly report a violation in length of a chapter...when this is so...true? I can't do it. Also, I'm not the only one bothered by the word 'Spence.' This is pleasing.
3 that's all there is to type.
Also, how can I possibly report a violation in length of a chapter...when this is so...true? I can't do it. Also, I'm not the only one bothered by the word 'Spence.' This is pleasing.
2/23/2011 c3 NL
Lol! Very very funny! Thanks for a laugh when I needed it :-)
Lol! Very very funny! Thanks for a laugh when I needed it :-)