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5Echo Hellfire
I'm the only one who's reviewed XD Good times :) But not for Mario :'( He is not the weiner today T-T Why? Why did you kill Luigi? Just for that, no motivation for you. It's mine. You no can haz. :( I feel kinda down now. Thanks :P I'm looking forward to the next chapter *Pressurizes*
Improvement: Speech marks :)
5Echo HellfireI'm the only one who's reviewed XD Good times :) But not for Mario :'( He is not the weiner today T-T Why? Why did you kill Luigi? Just for that, no motivation for you. It's mine. You no can haz. :( I feel kinda down now. Thanks :P I'm looking forward to the next chapter *Pressurizes*
Improvement: Speech marks :)
12/30/2011 c3 Echo Hellfire
I got mentioned :D The chapter was shorter than expected but still good. :) Poor Bowser :( He was a ** but i don't think he deserved what happened to him but oh well. Im sure it's significant to the plot. I hope it is :/ Anyway, good chapter. I'm really looking forward to see what happens next with Mario and our mysterious villian. :D
I got mentioned :D The chapter was shorter than expected but still good. :) Poor Bowser :( He was a ** but i don't think he deserved what happened to him but oh well. Im sure it's significant to the plot. I hope it is :/ Anyway, good chapter. I'm really looking forward to see what happens next with Mario and our mysterious villian. :D
12/25/2011 c1 Echo Hellfire
Hmm i wonder who this evil villain is. :P I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :)
Hmm i wonder who this evil villain is. :P I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :)
12/25/2011 c2 Echo Hellfire
It's actually pretty good so far :) I think more detail and it would be awesome :)
It's actually pretty good so far :) I think more detail and it would be awesome :)