for Three Worlds Collide4/16 c1 ILikeComps
Good starting chapter. Interesting that James was an illegitimate child in your story. Thanks for sharing!
Good starting chapter. Interesting that James was an illegitimate child in your story. Thanks for sharing!
10/16/2012 c3 
2Toby860
I do plan to embark upon a Harry Potter sanctuary crossover. and my story I plan to pair Harry up with Ashley. as for how magnus comes in possession of Harry to be raised by her. I'm thinking that hey was abandoned by his uncle at the age of 6 in a piece of downtown London where he is discovered by magnus when she's leaving the london sanctuary with her 7 or 8 year old daughter Ashley. then I can use that to cover a couple chapters of him being raised by Magnus act interacting with some of the abnormal cells stuff like that. I will tell you right now and my story there will be a wheasley bashing. I will tell you right now I will cover the area of sanctuary when I get into that final had battle with the kabal and I plan for Ashley to survive. I actually plan for that part of the story take place during 5th year around christmas break. I plan for Harry to be the 1 to snap actually out of the mind control by doing a heart wrenching story pasa talking about his time at Hogwarts on how he's being tortured by a teacher the fact that he is in love with Ashley. I am have a plan in my head for how that conversation will go ill go something like this. as she is crying and backing away ill start talking about what is been going on in the blood quill and all the other torture she's going through and then have star reminiscing about how when he was younger she was there in a help each other and stuff like that. and then have say something like this: and I realize something after all this time I'm in love with you Ashley I always have been. you become my rock the center of my world when things go wrong or when I'm feeling sad I can just imagine smile on your face and I feel happy I feel 1 being near you I feel the warmth in my chest I feel like my heart is going to beat out of my chest. I need you in my life Ashley so please snap out of it for me. after this point she will snap out of it and her and Harry will share a kiss. I plan for magnus to awaken halfway through harrys speach to ashley after she was nocked out earlier. will you give me some feedback on this idea for a story and tell me what you think it should be good or not.
2Toby860I do plan to embark upon a Harry Potter sanctuary crossover. and my story I plan to pair Harry up with Ashley. as for how magnus comes in possession of Harry to be raised by her. I'm thinking that hey was abandoned by his uncle at the age of 6 in a piece of downtown London where he is discovered by magnus when she's leaving the london sanctuary with her 7 or 8 year old daughter Ashley. then I can use that to cover a couple chapters of him being raised by Magnus act interacting with some of the abnormal cells stuff like that. I will tell you right now and my story there will be a wheasley bashing. I will tell you right now I will cover the area of sanctuary when I get into that final had battle with the kabal and I plan for Ashley to survive. I actually plan for that part of the story take place during 5th year around christmas break. I plan for Harry to be the 1 to snap actually out of the mind control by doing a heart wrenching story pasa talking about his time at Hogwarts on how he's being tortured by a teacher the fact that he is in love with Ashley. I am have a plan in my head for how that conversation will go ill go something like this. as she is crying and backing away ill start talking about what is been going on in the blood quill and all the other torture she's going through and then have star reminiscing about how when he was younger she was there in a help each other and stuff like that. and then have say something like this: and I realize something after all this time I'm in love with you Ashley I always have been. you become my rock the center of my world when things go wrong or when I'm feeling sad I can just imagine smile on your face and I feel happy I feel 1 being near you I feel the warmth in my chest I feel like my heart is going to beat out of my chest. I need you in my life Ashley so please snap out of it for me. after this point she will snap out of it and her and Harry will share a kiss. I plan for magnus to awaken halfway through harrys speach to ashley after she was nocked out earlier. will you give me some feedback on this idea for a story and tell me what you think it should be good or not.
1/20/2012 c4 2Ithileon
The characters are in-character, and the storyline is excellent. Wish it was a little longer, might try my hand at one one day.
2IthileonThe characters are in-character, and the storyline is excellent. Wish it was a little longer, might try my hand at one one day.
11/21/2011 c4 18Magemaster
Wicked awesome fic. I loved it. Very well written and thought out scenerios. I enjoyed the blowing up of Voldermort a great deal.
18MagemasterWicked awesome fic. I loved it. Very well written and thought out scenerios. I enjoyed the blowing up of Voldermort a great deal.
10/6/2011 c4 3wolfey141
for the lovers or brother sister part you could always have the cliche accidental time travel
3wolfey141for the lovers or brother sister part you could always have the cliche accidental time travel
9/7/2011 c2 21Zaion Indulias
Nothing wrong with fudging the hp timeline for this story, but please at least keep it internally consistent. By your stated dates Harry is about 27 or 28 when the second chapter starts, as the previous chapter has him as an infant in 1981.
21Zaion InduliasNothing wrong with fudging the hp timeline for this story, but please at least keep it internally consistent. By your stated dates Harry is about 27 or 28 when the second chapter starts, as the previous chapter has him as an infant in 1981.