for Tide Turner12/20/2010 c2 ALEXISSA2
OMG! 3someness. :D Lightning was so bold or was she too drunk to care? lol I think LeBreau should join them as well. hehehehe
Please update soon and thanks.
OMG! 3someness. :D Lightning was so bold or was she too drunk to care? lol I think LeBreau should join them as well. hehehehe
Please update soon and thanks.
12/17/2010 c2 
62Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
THIS...was...AW3SOME!
Surprise surprise! NEAPOLITAN! :Dx20 LOL
Now, I'm no stranger to yuri threesomes, but, if you can't write full on smex, then...don't be such a TEASE! ¬¬
So, I DEMAND smexy Neapolitan action! =A=
N-I-CE work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
62Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
THIS...was...AW3SOME!
Surprise surprise! NEAPOLITAN! :Dx20 LOL
Now, I'm no stranger to yuri threesomes, but, if you can't write full on smex, then...don't be such a TEASE! ¬¬
So, I DEMAND smexy Neapolitan action! =A=
N-I-CE work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
12/17/2010 c2 1LycanShadow
:D That was awesome! Wasn't expecting Vanille to join...very nice surprise!
1LycanShadow:D That was awesome! Wasn't expecting Vanille to join...very nice surprise!
12/16/2010 c2 3Swampert653
So.
Definitely wasn't expecting Vanille to be brought into things like she was. It was a very pleasant surprise, though. xD
Lightning being in charge is a nice change of pace. Liking it. Liking it a lot.
Can't wait for the next update! :D
3Swampert653So.
Definitely wasn't expecting Vanille to be brought into things like she was. It was a very pleasant surprise, though. xD
Lightning being in charge is a nice change of pace. Liking it. Liking it a lot.
Can't wait for the next update! :D
12/16/2010 c2 DeviArtChelisa1031
~smacks with fanfic fish of pervy doom~ omg if you cant write full~on smut dont tease people with forplay... btw I love it so keep writing.
~smacks with fanfic fish of pervy doom~ omg if you cant write full~on smut dont tease people with forplay... btw I love it so keep writing.
12/16/2010 c2 9OerbaFarron
NEAPOLITAN! :D
Whoa so wasn't expecting that (even though I should have)
Ha, Fang and Vanille turned the tide against Light at the end huh? NICE!
Please continue, pretty please.
9OerbaFarronNEAPOLITAN! :D
Whoa so wasn't expecting that (even though I should have)
Ha, Fang and Vanille turned the tide against Light at the end huh? NICE!
Please continue, pretty please.
11/23/2010 c1 ALEXISSA2
Oh **! Hahahaha Great timing, Vanille!
I'm so looking forward to the next chappie, PPMS.
Oh **! Hahahaha Great timing, Vanille!
I'm so looking forward to the next chappie, PPMS.
11/8/2010 c1 thunderandlight
Good god. Please continue or I swear I will track you down!
Hot stuff. phew..
Good god. Please continue or I swear I will track you down!
Hot stuff. phew..
10/27/2010 c1 3Swampert653
Tide Turner...
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.
Good god that was sexy. :D
Never, ever underestimate the power of a few drinks.
I really, REALLY hope you update this, seeing as the story has so much potential.
It was a great read, and I liked the way that your writing seemed to flow very easily. The imagery was great too. Great job and keep up the good work. :]
3Swampert653Tide Turner...
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.
Good god that was sexy. :D
Never, ever underestimate the power of a few drinks.
I really, REALLY hope you update this, seeing as the story has so much potential.
It was a great read, and I liked the way that your writing seemed to flow very easily. The imagery was great too. Great job and keep up the good work. :]
10/22/2010 c1 62Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
This...was...N-I-CE!
S-W-EET'n smexy! ^O^
And THEN! Le Gasp! :O Vanille walks in. Uh oh!
I smell...NEAPOLITAN! LOL
Well, even if there ain't no Neapolitan, I hope Vanille gets her happy ending. :P Maeby...with another girl? ;D
Anyway!
This is too full of WIN to let it die! =A=
Mission start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
62Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
This...was...N-I-CE!
S-W-EET'n smexy! ^O^
And THEN! Le Gasp! :O Vanille walks in. Uh oh!
I smell...NEAPOLITAN! LOL
Well, even if there ain't no Neapolitan, I hope Vanille gets her happy ending. :P Maeby...with another girl? ;D
Anyway!
This is too full of WIN to let it die! =A=
Mission start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
10/22/2010 c1 oh herro
Are you kidding? bloody YES continue !
Love your writing, its easy to read, flows well and is detailed in the right places without getting irritatingly flowery.
You've captured the total hotness that FLight just oozes, which is what drew me (and I'm sure others) to this couple in the first place.
No pressure, but hope I'm not waiting too long :)
Are you kidding? bloody YES continue !
Love your writing, its easy to read, flows well and is detailed in the right places without getting irritatingly flowery.
You've captured the total hotness that FLight just oozes, which is what drew me (and I'm sure others) to this couple in the first place.
No pressure, but hope I'm not waiting too long :)
10/22/2010 c1 12Icy-Windbreeze
Oh, this smells like the beginning of trouble...one that ends good I hope ^^
12Icy-WindbreezeOh, this smells like the beginning of trouble...one that ends good I hope ^^
10/21/2010 c1 elfspirit7
AWESOME! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
AWESOME! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!