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4Luscinia Evan
My Gosh this story is awesome! Every chapter displayed a wide variety of vocabs and i could see that the story is planned carefully, like the start when Cassy answered 'yes'. I love the last part, how she revived and all that, but then i just realised as i look back the story u forgot to mention the third criterial which made one to become the host of Aria (chapter 10). Some typo errors but i truely enjoyed this story. Wish to read more of D gray man stories from u. (This is the awesomest one in all the D gray man stories i've read) just wanting to know what will happen after the war though...
4Luscinia EvanMy Gosh this story is awesome! Every chapter displayed a wide variety of vocabs and i could see that the story is planned carefully, like the start when Cassy answered 'yes'. I love the last part, how she revived and all that, but then i just realised as i look back the story u forgot to mention the third criterial which made one to become the host of Aria (chapter 10). Some typo errors but i truely enjoyed this story. Wish to read more of D gray man stories from u. (This is the awesomest one in all the D gray man stories i've read) just wanting to know what will happen after the war though...
11/30/2012 c31 1thegingershiroyuki
mwa-HA! NOW THAT'S AN ENDING! BOO-YA! NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT! I LOVE YOU!
1thegingershiroyukimwa-HA! NOW THAT'S AN ENDING! BOO-YA! NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT! I LOVE YOU!
11/30/2012 c17 thegingershiroyuki
Heeeeeh? you lost me there, what's happened to the yarrow that was just there?
Heeeeeh? you lost me there, what's happened to the yarrow that was just there?
7/19/2012 c31 2FollieOfMadness
Alright, you want a review? I'll give you a review:
Throughout the whole story your writing varies an numerable amount of times. It def. seems to be shifting depending on your mood, therefore making it either sad or happy at the worst/best of times. Your style of it however never does, your writing voice ever so slightly struggles to rise out of the writing, to the point where I can barely hear it. :/ The plot progression was satsifactory; never would it be as good as the orginal series, but as a matter of fact be better in some places; but said places are very far and very few in-between. The character usage was also satisfactory; nothing more, nothing less. I never once, not for a second thought the characters where OOC. However, the OC made in this story is, well, almost a complete mary sue. No offence.
Therefore, to give this my profressional opinion; TOTALLY AMAZING STORY. Shame that it had to end. :/
Writing itself? SUCKS, MAJOR, DONKEY, **. Characters? Meh, not really awe-inspiring.
I give it a 69/100 (Tee hee) on my story-rate-o-graph.
This is entirely my opinion and I mean no offence, as my own writing is no better. :/
Laterz, I'm out. ;)
2FollieOfMadnessAlright, you want a review? I'll give you a review:
Throughout the whole story your writing varies an numerable amount of times. It def. seems to be shifting depending on your mood, therefore making it either sad or happy at the worst/best of times. Your style of it however never does, your writing voice ever so slightly struggles to rise out of the writing, to the point where I can barely hear it. :/ The plot progression was satsifactory; never would it be as good as the orginal series, but as a matter of fact be better in some places; but said places are very far and very few in-between. The character usage was also satisfactory; nothing more, nothing less. I never once, not for a second thought the characters where OOC. However, the OC made in this story is, well, almost a complete mary sue. No offence.
Therefore, to give this my profressional opinion; TOTALLY AMAZING STORY. Shame that it had to end. :/
Writing itself? SUCKS, MAJOR, DONKEY, **. Characters? Meh, not really awe-inspiring.
I give it a 69/100 (Tee hee) on my story-rate-o-graph.
This is entirely my opinion and I mean no offence, as my own writing is no better. :/
Laterz, I'm out. ;)
7/19/2012 c30 FollieOfMadness
YOU MURDERED HER! YOU MURDERED HER! NO, HOW COULD YOU MURDER CASSANDRA! WHY! WHYYYYY!
*Ahem* Now that THAT is out of my system, this is as good a way to end the story as any as far as I can see. :/
YOU MURDERED HER! YOU MURDERED HER! NO, HOW COULD YOU MURDER CASSANDRA! WHY! WHYYYYY!
*Ahem* Now that THAT is out of my system, this is as good a way to end the story as any as far as I can see. :/
7/19/2012 c29 FollieOfMadness
Damn dat Earl. Trappin' da OC in dat room.
Anyways, I liked this chapter. Something about this feels very Earl-ified. Like, this is definetely what someone like him would do. :/
Damn dat Earl. Trappin' da OC in dat room.
Anyways, I liked this chapter. Something about this feels very Earl-ified. Like, this is definetely what someone like him would do. :/
7/19/2012 c28 FollieOfMadness
Just for whom is getting played I wonder. She is already planning and playing, and so are they, but whom is the pawn and whom is the chess piece controller? Whom is going to backstab whom I wonder...
Anyways, good chapter.
Just for whom is getting played I wonder. She is already planning and playing, and so are they, but whom is the pawn and whom is the chess piece controller? Whom is going to backstab whom I wonder...
Anyways, good chapter.
7/16/2012 c31 2xXAkunohanaXx
I'm really sad that it has to end. I love this series a lot, so I wish would never have to end, but I like the way it ended. It was really sweet and it made me smile. I will always love the twists and suprises of this series. Your an amazing author and I look forward to reading your other stories. :)
2xXAkunohanaXxI'm really sad that it has to end. I love this series a lot, so I wish would never have to end, but I like the way it ended. It was really sweet and it made me smile. I will always love the twists and suprises of this series. Your an amazing author and I look forward to reading your other stories. :)
7/15/2012 c31 sunfeil
I really like reading this story:) But I'm so sad that it's over now..
Maybe you could start up another story? ;)
I really like reading this story:) But I'm so sad that it's over now..
Maybe you could start up another story? ;)
7/14/2012 c31 6Grey Distortion
Awwww, thanks to added them kissing :3
Why must this story end? I loved reading it :)
6Grey DistortionAwwww, thanks to added them kissing :3
Why must this story end? I loved reading it :)
7/13/2012 c31 2The Mouse Maestro
Yay, happy ending! XD
Funny how Cassey casually makes an entrance...if only I could see the look on their faces, LOL :D
I really enjoyed reading this story...the first awesome Man fanfiction I've read in a long time. Unexpected plot twists, great character development, and I especially loved how you ended it. If you write any new stories, I'll definitely read it :D
2The Mouse MaestroYay, happy ending! XD
Funny how Cassey casually makes an entrance...if only I could see the look on their faces, LOL :D
I really enjoyed reading this story...the first awesome Man fanfiction I've read in a long time. Unexpected plot twists, great character development, and I especially loved how you ended it. If you write any new stories, I'll definitely read it :D