for Chocolate Cake Chaos5/5/2012 c1 Hawk91
I thought the story was good, and especially liked how much description there was, really made you be able to visualise what was being told. Good job :)
I thought the story was good, and especially liked how much description there was, really made you be able to visualise what was being told. Good job :)
12/18/2011 c1 
16Kaz McDonell Miller
This was absolutely brilliant and hilarious. XD "Laser beams? SERIOUSLY?" I was done like dinner. Good one, for sure! Highly charming and entertaining. You are too funny!
16Kaz McDonell MillerThis was absolutely brilliant and hilarious. XD "Laser beams? SERIOUSLY?" I was done like dinner. Good one, for sure! Highly charming and entertaining. You are too funny!
5/23/2011 c1 DJ-Roza
i truely loved it, how do u come up with such wonderful stories, by the way the cliffhanger was excellent
i truely loved it, how do u come up with such wonderful stories, by the way the cliffhanger was excellent
1/22/2011 c1 Marie
OMG I think Sonic is gonna have a heartattack. No cake 4 him... Anyways, loved your story! :3 X3 :3
OMG I think Sonic is gonna have a heartattack. No cake 4 him... Anyways, loved your story! :3 X3 :3
1/11/2011 c1 11jazzy of the Akatsuki
lol:D that story made me laugh the whole time! gr8 story! oh and did sonic ever get any cake?
11jazzy of the Akatsukilol:D that story made me laugh the whole time! gr8 story! oh and did sonic ever get any cake?
11/29/2010 c1 66The Pen Vs The Sword
Sword: I laughed my butt off!...Or do I even have one?
I liked it. Sweet and funny all in one. Good job.
66The Pen Vs The SwordSword: I laughed my butt off!...Or do I even have one?
I liked it. Sweet and funny all in one. Good job.